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I so want to be a fly on the wall for the conversation coming up with Shannon. Well, San Diego is very close to Mexico; not sure where her dig was but everyone needs a break. I love how Brandon gets Trevor even more out of himself than usual. I use to run around some with a guy that stripped and was really good at it. Guys that do it are usually either really cool or total asses. Can't wait to see what happens next...
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Engineer Benson - Chapter 5 - July 16 - 19, 1993
centexhairysub commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Engineer Benson - Chapter 5 - July 16 - 19, 1993
Well, they know it is world wide; and if they are smart, they know no one is really coming. They also both realize that Elizabeth is probably gone, I think on some level they had to at least suspect this already. Their attraction is partly the fact that they only have each other to rely on; but you can tell from conversations that there was probably always some small part of them that were attracted to each other. Mark has always known about Wayne and always cared for him and kept him as a friend. I am sure that if Elizabeth was still there nothing would have happened but she is and something has. Glad that they have as many panels up as they do. This will enable them to save more fuel and also stay quiet more easily. If they are only three days from finishing up the fence; I am not sure they should not do so before they leave. They obviously have enough supplies to wait a few more days. Not only will this prevent any nasty surprises from waiting on their return; but would make anyone else just getting in a little harder. They need to consider finding other survivors; but that is such a tricky decision to make. Who to trust; how much to reveal, will they outstrip their supplies by adding more, and how many more do you try to add? You can't save everyone and yourself. Now comes the hard part... -
I had forgotten what a riot Trevor was with Brandon around. The scene with the feline was delicious and oh so hot, you know he probably did not make it home before he had to relieve himself. Another great Alpha, Tom Hampton, and I can't wait for a few more of his stories... I hate that Trevor had to head out so quickly; would have liked a little more time with his core group. That said, you know that he will find something to stir the blood while interning out in California. Flowed beautifully, and the writing was just so good.
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What a truly Fabulous chapter... It is funny how as much as JJ and Will fight and bicker; they each would literally kill to protect the other one. Okay, maybe Will more than JJ, but JJ would truly make anyone that hurts Will suffer a fate maybe worse than actual death. JJ is right about Travis; wonder if he purposely did not answer Will's call or was he really busy? I love how JJ and Carullo fit together; and it isn't just physical. They have such an interesting connection. I wonder if Carullo could work as part of a throuple with JJ and Zanie? Leave it to Will to find the flaw that let's him have a porn show. LOL. I guarantee that the issue will be fixed a.s.a.p. A little worried about this contest. Will is likely to do something to piss JJ off just to kick him in the ass. And should JJ really be in a straight up contest with Bellona? Can't wait to see what happens next...
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Dante and Tani are so interconnected right now. I have to wonder how Tani really survived losing Dante so many times. Glad that Dante has taken some time to just spend getting to know and understand and integrate himself with Tani. I do have to wonder who was looking for Dante at this apartment. I have a feeling either the person or why he was searching for Dante is not something we are ready for. Love how even after so much time; this story just grabs you back immediately. Like slipping into an old robe that just has the perfect fit.
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Chapter 35 - Epilogue 5 - The Beginning
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 35 - Epilogue 5 - The Beginning
Glad to see the thirst for just revenge has been sated. The Messiahs need to be destroyed but not because of revenge but because they are evil. They need a clear mind and more help to get rid of them. Good luck with your endeavors. -
Okay, loved this but was it a take off on the Amazing Race? So glad that Tasha won and Caleb took out Dirk, Loved it...
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Let's hope that Trevor gets to spend some time with the guys on this break. I just love the core group so much. Sort of sad that Shannon was going to be gone; she and Trevor do seem to have more than just a physical connection. That said, she is right, being long distance at the start is such a no go. There are some freaky vibes with Jayson; and I just know he is way more bottom than he appears. Love how Trevor handled meeting both Deanna and Alex both. He is so open and honest and you can rarely go wrong with that as a guide. Trevor is very open to different encounters and that makes him very sexy. So glad we got to see Karissa Ryan, always nice to get visits from friends. And really loved how Trevor handled Axton. You can tell that Axton expected Trevor as a beta to take charge more; but instead, Trevor just encouraged him more. That is what a good leader does. Already in love with this story...
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So glad that I found this... I follow @WolfM so not sure why I was not notified a new story started. This first chapter was hot hot hot... And I so want that three way that was being discussed. Glad that Trevor is helping Jayson, he seems interesting if not fully fleshed out yet. Can't wait to see where you take this one.
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Chapter 33 - Epilogue 3 - Journey
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 33 - Epilogue 3 - Journey
Aunt Peg clearly does not want anyone to know she is a Messiah; so she uses weapons that a woman would use to deter a man or men. Why are people so stupid and full of hate or desire for something or someone they are not entitled to? Lahari had such a nice evening of food and listening to the music; then had to kill to protect her group because of drunken stupidity. -
What a delicious chapter; full of so many tidbits just waiting for us all. Of course, never enough for a full meal or really sate our hunger. I for one don't think that Gideon is aware he is being followed. I think he is too far into his plan to let anything distract him. He would know and sense other vampires; but why suspect they are after him if they are not doing anything to stop him. Kavan needs to stay with Gideon and make sure that he protects him from himself. We know who he is after and why; but why did he pick now to put this plan in motion. Gideon must complete his plan, one way or another. That said, someone that is truly your one and only is so rare that nothing is going to far to protect them no matter what.
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Extra 4 - The Empire's Three Days of Thanksgiving Part 2
centexhairysub commented on lilansui's story chapter in Extra 4 - The Empire's Three Days of Thanksgiving Part 2
Let's hope that Jihan is more successful than anyone imagines and they are able to succeed in their endeavors without any war. Wars can be good for business in some cases; but too many of the family could get pulled in. I love these little snippets and finding out what everyone is doing. Even these brief looks are manna from above. Rashan will have to leave to be trained; I don't think Jihan would survive his first real injury. Hope we continue to get updates. -
Chapter 32 - Epilogue 2 - Breakfast
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 32 - Epilogue 2 - Breakfast
Let's hope that Dozi is wrong and there is another explanation. I understand the need for revenge but going off half cocked is never a good idea. We need a little more information to figure this one out. -
Chapter 31 - Epilogue 1 - Plotting
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 31 - Epilogue 1 - Plotting
Let's hope they all listen to Dozi; I understand wanting the Messiah's that did this to die; but like Agrell there could be innocents still there. With the underground destroyed; those above are going to have to start getting use to things that they never considered. This is not going to be a quick or easy task. -
This is a story of survival; not of the fittest, brightest, strongest, or luckiest; but of an ordinary person that faced a horrible situation. Well written and the characters are just so well done. You will most likely find yourself identifying with someone in the story. This is the type of story that stays with you and makes you think; there but the for the grace of some deity go I. Read IT>>>
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Extra 4 - The Empire's Three Days of Thanksgiving Part 1
centexhairysub commented on lilansui's story chapter in Extra 4 - The Empire's Three Days of Thanksgiving Part 1
What a truly divine chapter. So glad we got to visit old friends and see how they are doing. Everything is not perfect but they all seem to be getting on with their lives. I do worry about Neith, but Ha seems sure that she will eventually be back to where she should be. Both she and Ha will mourn those they love when they pass on; but loving them now brings a joy that will not be soon forgotten. Jihan and Kastan are like any couple; they both know how to hit the other's spot. They will grow in love for each other all the days. So glad that all the young Imperial Princes are getting to bond in this manner; it bodes well for the future. Thank you so much, @lilansui, what a true gift. -
Chapter 30 - Misery
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 30 - Misery
I am glad that Agrell's sacrifice was able to save Dozi. She died protecting those she cared about; and as long as they remember and honor her memory, she will never be fully gone. Just truly sad... -
Chapter 29 - Stone
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 29 - Stone
Another victim of hate and prejudice; Agrell has given her life to save others it appears, pray that it was not in vain. -
Chapter 28 - Death Drop
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 28 - Death Drop
Damn those religious zealots to the darkest deepest level of hell. They are evil and must all die. Agrell is willing to give her own life to save others, she has evolved to be the best she can be. Let's all cross our fingers that there is some way she survives; truly hate to lose her like this; there is so much more to be done. -
Engineer Benson - Chapter 4 - July 14-15
centexhairysub commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Engineer Benson - Chapter 4 - July 14-15
Wayne has to learn to defend himself better; he doesn't need to have Mark's prowess right away, but he can't be a liability. Mark is going to end up getting hurt trying to protect Wayne. I reread this one twice; so did someone take the fire engine after they came by previously? If so, we know there are at least some other survivors out there in the area. Never doubt the importance of touch; even something that isn't sexual but just friendship or assuring is vitally important. There are plenty of studies that validate that fact. Can't wait to see what happens next; they need to get the solar up but maybe even before that, some kind of fencing or blockade to prevent the dead from just sneaking up on them. Really well done chapter. -
Chapter 27 - New Principal Messiah
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 27 - New Principal Messiah
So glad that the Old Principal Messiah died a painful horrible death; too bad it was lessened in any way. The New Principal Messiah is as nuts as the old one was. Why are those steeped in religious fervor always idiots??? -
Chapter 26 - Underground, Part Three
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 26 - Underground, Part Three
What fresh hell is coming for this poor group thru the ceiling??? I am sure the Messiah will not just take a loss laying down; but can this group not even just bury their dead without being tormented again? Agrell has to know that until those she are trying to help can get to know her; they are going to see what she did as evil, even though she was forced through the process. You would think a group that faced discrimination would not discriminate; but I have found that is rarely the case. Let's hope the the groups of those that want harmony between the bio-shifts and the humans can win the fight for acceptance of their fellows. -
Chapter 25 - UBHS
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 25 - UBHS
So glad that Dozi found this group; I hope she does march. That being said, I don't think the Messiah's will take kindly to being viewed in a negative manner. They truly believe they are the next evolution of humanity, and no one like that wants to think they are wrong. Dozi really has formed a family unit with Ilya and Agrell; I hope they know how important that truly is. Can't wait to see where this story goes. -
Chapter 24 - Rescue
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 24 - Rescue
They are taking the fight to the Messiah's; let's hope they are successful. I am glad that Lahari has accepted Agrell for what she is; maybe the rest will as well. -
Chapter 4- The Ball and Chain Game
centexhairysub commented on kbois's story chapter in Chapter 4- The Ball and Chain Game
Cats rule and dogs drool...
