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Mosely may be my new hero... If Mica and Grayson are so good; then why did they not know about how horrible Owen was being treated. Surely the teachers and others were aware; they simply chose to ignore it. That happens all too often, especially when the one being mistreated is a misfit in any way.
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Why is there always that one total ass.... Same as in real life most of the time.
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Well, this was someone much stronger than Taran; but have to wonder why he let the boy live? Could this be tied to his brother in some way? Why keep everything a secret with his new relationship; not saying announce it on the nightly news, but why the total blackout?
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So well written, and flowed wonderfully; but even if it was necessary, not sure that I could have done that. Has to be a more humane way.
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Good second chapter; I do hope the holder gets a little damage from thread just so he knows what the dragons and riders are there to protect him from. Can't wait for the next update, keep them coming...
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Nisa is going to continue to cause problems until Kastan puts his foot down; I understand why he does not want to but nothing else is going to stop her attempts, not even sure that will. Jihan clearly adores Rashan and it seems to be mutual. Jihan is going to have to get the people in the valley to do something to help themselves or he is never going to make it so that the valley can support the Emperor's demands.
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So not happy that he stayed behind; but I do understand his reasoning. The team is going to have to stop the terrorist attack on Los Angeles but they also need to make sure that the citizens know the truth as well.
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Well written and the pacing was good; glad this is going to be a longer story. I guess two hundred chapters or so would be sufficient... Can't wait for the next update.
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Well written and really enjoyed this latest update. This seems to tie in some with the others stories of Pern, but has a uniqueness about it as well.
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Not sure a public relations blitz is the right idea at this moment; one demonic burst of power could undo so much. I wonder if his cousin did something to him as well when he meet up with him?
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The First General 3 -reupload
centexhairysub commented on gabz2000's story chapter in The First General 3 -reupload
Not sure that it is ever truly a smart move to pull pure evil inside oneself but not sure an alternative actually existed. Wonder what Chris was able to see in the female demons mind before her death at the hands of the General??? I suspect that there are 8 Generals left... -
And so it truly begins; the fight for the soul of the world.
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I think everyone is going to have to up their power level to meet this new threat. I wonder if Chris can share his power with a number of people without limiting his own power output?
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There is always one that has to be an ass.
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Fragments of Darkness 2
centexhairysub commented on gabz2000's story chapter in Fragments of Darkness 2
So well written, so many parallels to what is going on now. -
Fragments of Darkness 1
centexhairysub commented on gabz2000's story chapter in Fragments of Darkness 1
Sounds like the missing humans are being turned into nothing more than cannon fodder. That E5 tornado might not be a bad idea after all. -
Perhaps one of the strongest elves in a millennium has joined with a powerful vampire; and has the ears on those on the vampire high council as well as the werewolf council; they will need all they have to meet the coming darkness.
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Hmmm, well getting back to real life is never easy; but we all have to at some point. I do wonder when Victor is on the council, how will he and Chris deal with the increased demand on each of their time now. Demons are on the move, we knew it was coming.
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Chris is going to have to get Etalos over his issues with Victor or that is going to cause issues at some point. I have to admit that I have really enjoyed the last few chapters.
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I don't think it is a coincidence that as Chris as grown in power, the issues with the visions started in the Elvish realm, can't see the connection yet, but sure it is there.
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Have to wonder if he is still that powerful; why did the great grandfather abdicate to his son???
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Good chapter, the fight was well written and staged. I can't wait for Chris first public interview with the Elvish media...
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The Kings are right; Chris has already brought so many people together that the job is a natural fit.
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Damn, he and Victor will truly be the ultimate power couple.
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Oh Lord, what a nickname....
