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An interesting turn of events all the way around...

Maybe the neku were trying to do that in Orion, get rid of all the healers...

How was the one man able to get Barken to just disappear without anyone really seeing it? Why him?

Pacing is really good; the writing is lyrical in nature.

Interesting start to this story, already interested to see what happens to them; and what has already happened.

This format made it really hard to read this chapter. The pacing felt all off as well, but that might have been the formatting as well. I actually thought that there was someone inside but never thought of Alex.

Really loved this chapter, the pacing was perfect and the writing as well. So happy that Jihan has a new title of Papa. I had to wonder why the valley was doing so poorly; we know now, Lady Nisa has been embezzling the money, now we just have to find out why. Hope the trip with Jihan and Rashan goes well, with no major upheavals.

Never piss off Momma... Great chapter, pacing was spot on.

Truly, the senseless loss of death in war can never be fully understood.

Ah the passion of youth; that first few moments of feeling as if this moment would never come, then never end, and then God, please let it happen again.

Well written, the pacing was good as well. An interesting start to this story, a lot of information, but you want to know more.

A delightful chapter but much like the first story in this series full of an underpinning of melancholy. We know what happens, at least in general, so hard to be happy about anything for the two of them.

So proud of Alice and yes, even Shayna, they did what they both needed to do even if it was for completely different reasons. I truly hope that Alice gets away and is able to break the cycle of abuse that she finds herself caught up in. Fergus just got faced badly; but he needs to be. I am not sure how Jimmy is going to fit into this next bit. I can't see him being willing to go after Alice. And Jimmy will not play butt boy for Fergus, as he is more Alpha than Fergus is...

I would not trust F'drun as far as I could throw his dragon, no matter what the situation was. Honestly, this idea just doesn't make sense to me. I understand the need to establish the southern weyr, but the way it is being planned out just is very inefficient. Glad that they are starting some of the integration. Should have been doing more all along. Hope the two new riders work to fit in and don't just fall back to what they have been taught before.

Well, the four emissaries answered so much and yet said so little. How idiotic is it that you ascend by doing something that you don't know about or even know you are doing but this thing turns out to be a step in the ascension process. Really, I want a written plan on how to ascend. LOL. I do agree with Victor and the others; taking all the Demon Generals into himself is simply not a good idea; how much evil can you absorb before it begins to effect you, even if you are on the ascension ladder. Just like the humans, the elves are divided; no one ever wants to help the other side because they always think if they stay out of the problem or issue then it won't involve them in the end. Sadly, that has never worked. First they came for the Socialists, and I did not speak out— Because I was not a Socialist. Then they came for the Trade Unionists, and I did not speak out— Because I was not a Trade Unionist. Then they came for the Jews, and I did not speak out— Because I was not a Jew. Then they came for me—and there was no one left to speak for me. — Martin Niemöller

Well written but the chapter seemed to meander quite a bit; or maybe I just could stay focused on it today. So many unanswered questions, but a few little clues dropped here and there.

Just so pissed off right now... Hate that no one in charge seems to have a freaking idea of what really needs to be done.

Honestly to God, I kept waiting for either Maddie or Jimmy to just piss on Sawyer and say, He's Mine... Well, Jimmy gave as well as he got; don't think Maddie was really ready for that but she handled it well. Loved the scene with the dogs, just perfect. So well written and the pacing was just spot on in this chapter.

Oh, Hell to the NO.... I can't believe that he absorbed another Demon General. I knew that the items he received from the first houses would give him additional power; but that was amazing. But, even with that, there has to be some way to dissipate the Demon Generals without pulling them all into himself. Well written and the battle was so well done...

OMG, this chapter was almost perfect. Loved everything about it, just flowed beautifully and the writing was just great. Love how Granger wouldn't allow anyone to bully him. He has to stand firm in a situation like this or there could be severe consequences. His idea to appeal to the Czar's vanity and how to do so is brilliant. Everyone likes to think they are right and playing into that with a gift like this is perfect. Sad to see Von Beckendorf go off; but do understand the reasoning. Granger seems to care for him more than I expected. Really sort of hope we run into him again. I can't wait to meet up with his sister. Mark, this was a truly brilliant chapter.

You may get a missive from the thought police; but that was fabulous...

WOW, what a rollercoaster ride all in one chapter. Just the thought of losing Cody scared the hell out of me. Getting to the bomb may be the only way to clear their names but getting to it and then being in possession of it caused problems all on its own...

Can't imagine how Tyler would be handling something like this; not just the family being dead but the fact that someone grabbed you and seems to be holding you against your will even though he says it is for your own protection. Zeke is just being way to mysterious. Don't really trust him yet, no matter what he says. Do think he is some flavor of law enforcement but obviously doesn't play by the rules. Well written again, but the pacing was a little more disjoined in this chapter. Can't wait for the next update.

Well written and the pacing was good; got an immediate feeling of menace once the chapter got going. An interesting start to the story; grabs the attention right of the bat.

Suspect that this accident is no accident. And it had been such a nice evening up until that point. I do think that Mason needs to be honest and very upfront with Vincent. Because of his past, he is not going to handle secrets well at all; even if they are for his benefit or good ones. Well written and the pacing is just excellent in this chapter.