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    The Ascension

    Well damn, now that is what you can an Ascension.
  2. Just a truly excellent chapter; very descriptive and well written.
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    Preparations 3

    I think this Ascension is going to be a much bigger deal than Chris can possible realize.
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    Preparations 2

    Why is it that those best able to serve and lead rarely want to and those that are least capable never stop trying to...
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    Preparations 1

    Well sometimes you just have to open the curtains and let the sunshine in....
  6. Did I miss something in the previous comments? Well they have no one to blame but themselves. They all left Chris alone...
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    Sire 4

    Damn, vampire politics seem worse than small town politics and that is hard to do. Can't wait for this party.
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    Sire 3

    So Chris now has a mark for each of the first three Royal Elvish houses, I don't doubt that a fourth one will be coming as well. I have to wonder if Chris being found or maybe even being born might have triggered the return of the demons. The flow the last few chapters has just been excellent...
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    Sire 2

    So Chris has joined the mile high club... Chris needs to start realizing his own position; or he is going to have more and more issues moving forward.
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    Sire 1

    OMG, does Chris not really that Victor flies in a private jet???
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    Aftermath 3

    All of these people need to communicate better....
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    Aftermath 2

    Not sure even if he is strong enough to see the vision that he should. Some incidents can truly stain the soul.
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    Aftermath 1

    Well, you had to know that getting scratched by a demon wasn't going to be easy to overcome...
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    Spilt Blood

    Ah, so Gustav was actually a demon; really did not see that coming, but not surprised by it either. Well written chapter and it flowed wonderfully.
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    Retribution 6

    Yikes...
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    Retribution 5

    Would think that after so many have attacked Chris and his dad or friends and then just disappeared; that someone would realize that Chris is much more than he seems.
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    Retribution 4

    Well, you knew something was going to go sideways... Glad that his dad was able to keep Chris focused on the big picture.
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    Retribution 3

    I suspect that Gustav is going to realize something is going on if he can't continue to influence Victor and the others...
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    Retribution 2

    The final death is the only thing that Gustav deserves...
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    Retribution 1

    I knew that Gustav was going to be a problem...
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    A New Place 3

    Not sure how I feel about this chapter; sort of feel that Chris cheated again...
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    A New Place 2

    Honestly, Chris immaturity and disregard for others has been evident throughout the story. Since he was young and the protagonist, everyone sort of overlooked it; but I warned many chapters ago that it was going to come back to bite him and others...
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    A New Place 1

    Now only one uncle left to meet up with; I am glad that Chris is finally getting meet more than just the King and Yal. Chris is going to have to learn a whole new level of political and social behavior.
  24. Hmmm, well seems like Gustav and Victor have different takes on their past. I feel that Gustav is going to be an issue; and I don't think getting rid of the Blood Army insurgents is going to be as easy as everyone thinks.
  25. I'm sorry, but you don't forget that someone looks exactly like your ex; you just don't...
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