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    Chapter 19

    centexhairysub commented on Mann Ramblings's story chapter in Chapter 19

    The scene in the bank was just too cute... But, Jimmy will come completely unglued if the rogue is tracking Sawyer. Not sure the rogue has been near Sawyer's house at least not yet, as often as Jimmy has gone wolf and followed Sawyer around the trails and back home, I would think he would have picked up the scent of another wolf. This chapter just vibrated with so much tension and suspense. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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    Chapter 37

    centexhairysub commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 37

    I loved how Granger handled the Countess; it was like watching a great Maestro directing a beautiful symphony. Granger, as usual, has done the right thing and filled in Winkler, Jacobs, and the other two with what it going on and how to handle things if they turn south. They will at least have some guidance on how to help them and get the information to the right people. Mark, this was simply a remarkable chapter, the writing was crisp and the pacing was first rate.
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    This just made me sad.
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    Honestly, there are people that just truly don't deserve to live; it is strange but they usually have good families or friends. I believe some are just born bad... Will was one of them.
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    A wonderful first chapter; the writing and pacing were excellent. I too love westerns; was never the way the movies made it out to be in reality, but have always enjoyed them.
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    Arguments

    centexhairysub commented on Mawgrim's story chapter in Arguments

    Damn, have to wonder what hit his shoulder and what type of damage there is. I realize that without thread for four hundred turns everyone got use to living life as if it was never coming back; but now that it has returned, it will probably every turn or at least more often than four hundred years. Holders and others are going to have to start going back to some of the old ways of growing, building, and doing other things.
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    I read this in two settings after the story was finished. I realize it is sometimes hard looking at the dates of the chapter posting to stay with a story when there are large time gaps; that being said, this was an interesting story that had fascinating characters. The development was slow but steady and well done. This is not a story for everyone; but those that like unique settings and characters will find something to truly enjoy.
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    Well, a fascinating end to this first book; so much uncovered and yet so much left to understand and overcome. I have to admit that I can't wait for you to start the second book.
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    Well, will the two of them coming back together bring hope or despair.
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    The arguments used by the oppressors never really change; and in the end they all are proven wrong.
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    Oh, all hell is about to break loose...
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    Chapter 9: Revolt

    centexhairysub commented on BDANR's story chapter in Chapter 9: Revolt

    Well, damn, we find out some about what happened when Barken was called to help the Princess. Have to wonder what caused Barken to go off after arriving on the shore? How did the this new one know about the Princess?
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    WOW, so that is how they are finding the ones to help them; making them addicted to this HC substance. Amelia's betrayal really hurts, I liked her.
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    Hard to understand the attack, without knowing what precipitated it. Barken can obviously do more than either he or his partner can understand; maybe they will find some answers here; it seems to be a truly unusual place.
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    Damn, did someone betray them or does the Princess have some type of link to Barken because of the healing?
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    An interesting turn of events all the way around...
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    Chapter 4: Escape

    centexhairysub commented on BDANR's story chapter in Chapter 4: Escape

    Maybe the neku were trying to do that in Orion, get rid of all the healers...
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    How was the one man able to get Barken to just disappear without anyone really seeing it? Why him?
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    Pacing is really good; the writing is lyrical in nature.
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    Interesting start to this story, already interested to see what happens to them; and what has already happened.
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    This format made it really hard to read this chapter. The pacing felt all off as well, but that might have been the formatting as well. I actually thought that there was someone inside but never thought of Alex.
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    Chapter 16

    centexhairysub commented on lilansui's story chapter in Chapter 16

    Really loved this chapter, the pacing was perfect and the writing as well. So happy that Jihan has a new title of Papa. I had to wonder why the valley was doing so poorly; we know now, Lady Nisa has been embezzling the money, now we just have to find out why. Hope the trip with Jihan and Rashan goes well, with no major upheavals.
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    Never piss off Momma... Great chapter, pacing was spot on.
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    Chapter 3

    centexhairysub commented on drsawzall's story chapter in Chapter 3

    Truly, the senseless loss of death in war can never be fully understood.
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    Chapter 2

    centexhairysub commented on drsawzall's story chapter in Chapter 2

    Ah the passion of youth; that first few moments of feeling as if this moment would never come, then never end, and then God, please let it happen again.
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