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    Chapter 24

    Men loyal to England gathered and with their resolve holding, they held Gloucester and stopped the foreign Prince in his tracks. He will retreat and retrench but in doing so gives those loyal to England and young King Henry time to do the same. Kaylen, Tomas, and Ronan remain in the thick of things, and stay loyal to themselves as much as England.
  2. I love this story; I never want it to end. I love how everyone actually does get along, not in that rosy, never a harsh word, but in that we are family and will kill each other, but no one else better mess with one of us kind of way. I am glad that everyone seems to be agreeing to the new direction of Louis's drawings, this might really turn into something. You never know what will catch the imagination of the public. I think having everyone in this setting really works. They will all have their own spaces to retreat to but still have someone nearby when they need to.
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    Chapter 2

    Excellent slow burn, but like @drsawzall, I almost feel like this should be much more that I presume from previous comments it will be. Let's hope they all make the right decision for each of them individually and collectively.
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    The "It" Boy

    I truly love it. Will is having a life in the light's moment. You cannot audition for the IT person, it just has to happen, and it has happened to Will. He hates this, when literally millions of people would kill for it to happen to them. Jeremy needs to get over it. He dressed Will and he needs to take pride in the fact what he did for Will helped him win the contest. Now, he needs to help fix this, because, while he certainly did not plan on Will getting this kind of attention, he fully understands that Will is going to hate it. They may well have to call in Stef and Brad to ward off the paparazzi and figure out how to play this, but hopefully, Jeremy will have an idea that helps Will fix this mess. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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    Chapter 6

    Sam makes a first forage into the unknow. He will take the lead, and let's hope is able to do so successfully. This sounds like a scourge, and really Ser Graeme will be little help, he would be far to noticeable. Let's hope that Sam can deal with this quickly, but I have a feeling that the more they dig into it, the worse it will become.
  6. We can hope that Charlie and Brayden are able to hold onto their relationship, but at that age with all of this going on, have to wonder if that is even possible. Can't wait to see what happens next, you never know, one right break and everything can go your way.
  7. I am dealing with work and am going to wait and read all of them at one time, hate to do it, but don't feel I can do them justice tonight, I am too tired.
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    Chapter 1

    Let's hope that Karl makes a decision, before it is made for him.
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    Chapter 23

    Those loyal to England gather to defend a child who is now King, against a Prince who is foreign born. Kaylen, Tomas, and Ronan have gotten what they need, now they just need to reach back to Gloucester before the situation worsens.
  10. A homecoming of sorts; but they all learn that they must leave this place to make sure they are safe to fight another day. A well-deserved honor for Jamal. A traitor moves to destroy those he once swore to protect and fight with, may he soon be destroyed as well.
  11. And just who doesn't love a little romance...
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    Tom

    OMG, this was so deliciously funny.
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    Chapter 5

    Ser Graeme and Sam had their first real combat since dealing with the bandits back in Sam's village. Sam needs to come to better terms with what has happened. The drinking will not solve anything and will actually at some point make it worse and cause a problem. He needs to lessen his desire for bloodshed, it will never be Ser Graeme's first choice, or even his second.
  14. What a lovely chapter. Joss saw the dick pic and honestly thought it was well done. Found a present for PJ, which was his mission. Took time to ask Louis and Charlie to come around for a meal. PJ clearly approved of the idea of a visit; he was after it anyways. Both were somewhat curious about the drawing for different reasons. I am so in love with these people.
  15. And sometimes, it happens just like that.
  16. Sounds dangerous in all the best possible ways.
  17. I just know that Sloane is a future Presidential campaign advisor. Skylar and Ryan are just too cute and clueless. Dex and Kenzi are just the best friends ever.
  18. Holy Hell, talk about totally blowing up. If it ends like this, I will truly hate the outcome. I don't know how I thought it would end, certainly not all roses with everyone happy, but not this.
  19. I know it makes me weird, but I love Tiny Tim's Tiptoe through the Tulips...
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    Chapter 22

    Wynthrope prepares but will they stand the might of a Prince rejected. The men and boys are coming together; but a battle like this will cost many their lives, perhaps too many. John nears death, but like many fears it and does what he can to keep it at bay. Where is his heir? Will any support a boy king? Louis thinks that John's death will seal the crown for him, but how many will come to him on John's death, and how many will blame him for the death of a KIng.
  21. OMG, I so love this idea of a series. I could actually see it being really well done and brilliant. I am glad that Louis and Charlie are able to talk about things, keeping the lines of communication open are so very important. What are the ages of those involved? I sort of saw Louis, Charlie, and Tom all around 35 to 40ish. Ian more mid 20's. Gus maybe early 40's. Joss mid 40's and PJ maybe late 30's. Tom being protective of Ian doesn't surprise me at all, what did was how Ian reacted about Tom maybe being there when the drawing was done. Could Ian, Tom, and Gus be a future threesome? I really do think the artefact is going to be somewhere totally mundane when it finally shows up.
  22. I was afraid it was going to be something like that; his mother is never going to accept him; she has too much invested it in all being wrong. This play sounds very intense for that age group, honestly surprised that the school would allow it as it. Charlie and Brayden are going to have to make some decisions that they may not be ready for yet.
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    Halloween

    Will is going to be the new IT... And Jeremy is going to be pissed. But he needs to realize that he dressed him, so he helped create him. I do understand Jeremy on a certain level. I too have a brother that seemingly without trying always is the center of attention, for both good and bad. Will is never going to give up his college for anything like being a model, etc... Have to wonder how paparazzi worthy he turns into...
  24. What would almost be perfect...
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    Chapter 4

    Ser Graeme and Sam are making good time on the road. I am glad that Sam finally asked and that Ser Graeme showed his face. Glad how well Sam handled it. People can be simply horrible asses.
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