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Daddydavek

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  1. Daddydavek

    Chapter 14

    The question is Luca an ally or devious foe...time will tell.
  2. Daddydavek

    Chapter 9

    Anton is a scoundrel that we probably haven't heard the last of... Rupe is flirting and not just joking with Jeorg as I see it.
  3. Daddydavek

    Chapter 13

    While much has been revealed, I get the distinct impression that there is much more to the story and its various levels of complexity....
  4. Daddydavek

    Chapter 8

    Poor Rupe, I hope his blade work is better than his judgement in ever trusting Anton.
  5. Well that was certainly keeping it professional! Heath may have just solved his problem with blue balls and Aiden is likely to quickly become a lot more experienced...
  6. Daddydavek

    Chapter 12

    Harris must be a long ways away from being in the field. Who in the security business leaves a combination on a safe at the last number to open it? The blue mug that was from his daughter keeps being mentioned and I suspect we may eventually find out why...
  7. Daddydavek

    Chapter 7

    I'm beginning to really not like Anton.
  8. Daddydavek

    Chapter 6

    I suspect the lurching carriages on the uneven track, the house of ancient appearance and the tumbled heathland show a less than grand manor house awaiting the prince, his brother and the newly elevated rinker?
  9. Daddydavek

    Chapter 5

    Anton is scarred and still a bit resentful over his own mercenary use of his sex and still well below Rupe's station. I wonder how long it will take Rupe to come to that conclusion. Gilles is accommodating and I wonder how long before he wants to be accommodated by Kreech?
  10. Daddydavek

    GMA XII

    The car seat was a nice touch and a little detail that many would never think about! Thanks for sharing! Another chapter in two more days please!
  11. Daddydavek

    Chapter 4

    Rupe is an old soul in his mid twenties as shown by his reaction to Kreech and Giles.
  12. Welcome to Gay Authors! I too have read some of your earlier works on other sites and look forward to reading more!
  13. Daddydavek

    Chapter 17

    Yikes, yikes and more yikes! What a revolting development this turned out to be! The troop just can't catch a break!
  14. Daddydavek

    GMA XI

    He's alive and will now face the hard part, living. The support system will be crucial...even if he pushes them away.
  15. @Graeme said: " always keep in mind the end goal. Work out how you want the story to end, and then write in that direction. Don't lose sight of that goal, because that's how you can write yourself into a corner. If you know where you're headed, that will help remind you to leave an escape route to allow you to get to that goal. Meandering on your way to the goal is fine, but don't forget where you want to finish while you wander." In my experience this is a truth worth repeating!
  16. Daddydavek

    Chapter 11

    Still loving the story, but now I have my doubts about the FBI as it seems there is a mole...and somehow Harris does not seem so reliable.
  17. Daddydavek

    Chapter 10

    Just got to this and see that Corbin has committed to stay in a big way. Now on to the next chapter!
  18. Daddydavek

    Chapter 16

    Kieran's power is growing along with his ability to wield it in new and novel ways. The thought of ten Fetches is daunting. More please!
  19. Actually I believe Heath said he likes a challenge!
  20. Daddydavek

    Chapter 9

    Whether Corbin realizes it or not, he has made a decision to stick with Paul and not run at the first hint of discovery. His approach to the don and his family was respectful and calculated to earn respect which could be fortuitous down the road. I'm trying to not remember too much of the details so the story can pull me in to the web...which it is succeeding at very well. More please!
  21. It was just a hand-job and kissing. Somehow I think Aiden's resistance will be futile as it only sparks Stone's libido more.
  22. Daddydavek

    Chapter 8

    The graveled and graded road was a very nice touch, one they could both appreciate, not to mention Chad and his wife too! Corbin is definitely in more than just lust....and Paul is smitten as well.
  23. Daddydavek

    GMA X

    The chapter was brilliant until the cliff-hanger at the end. I fear the worst...That's the reason for chapter reaction I left. @Avidreader made the point about CJ that I share as we adopted both of our kids.
  24. Daddydavek

    Chapter 7

    And a perceptive one.
  25. Daddydavek

    Chapter 7

    Chad is a good friend and very perceptive...and a cop.
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