Based on my meticulously close reading of this chapter from Johnny's point of view and the earlier chapter covering this same scene from Jason's point of view, I confidently conclude these two guys are directly on the same page and could be in it for the long haul.
I don't think we should be too hard on creepy Simon because we were all there watching in our mind's eye right along with him. At least I was and enjoying every gasp, groan, grunt, sigh, giggle and slurp of it! And for all those who think there can be too much sexual details in a story, all I can say is this isn't one of them!
I'm in the more is better crowd. But, I'll take what you give us because I know how time consuming writing can be, especially when you try to get it right.
Thanks for all you do...and keep on doing it!
Interesting start but the beach season is about over and what will Chris do for work then? Seems George has been good to them but can he afford to keep them for free indefinitely?