Daddydavek
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George can't make a silk purse out of a sow's ear, but will find a way to make the best of the situation. I suspect Lady Kendal left him a pile and her brother nothing. As noted by others, George is good at collecting strays. Anson may find himself out of his depth if he isn't careful.
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Getting through the memorial service and reception was grueling. The supper with Ty's family and decompressing on the swings was needed. Kage is in the shadows but makes his presence known timely, especially knocking them down before bullets went zinging past. And yes, I'm fairly certain Tyler finds out a bit about Kage sooner than later.
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Will got Claire to see the why of John's choice and realize just what she could lose. The foundation is going to be bit more work to make changes and Grand will help. Will is surprised by his dad, but shouldn't be, because Brad always uses money as power. Since it no longer worked as a control, now he's using it hoping to buy good will. More please!
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flummox - Word of the Day - Fri Jul 1, 2022
Daddydavek commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
I'm often flummoxed at how many people blithely accept lies over truth despite compelling evidence. -
Jonathan's dad was true to stereotype and Jonathan was smart not to go. Rusty is an ongoing surprise. More please!
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Poor Elijah, he has a memorial service and funeral to prepare for as well as the added job of having to clean up the basement which the rented crew missed. He also has this insane attraction to the bad-boy Gage and now must consider the possible connection between the pups and the laptop. And here we are yucking it up about snacks... And yes I am not immune to a bit of laughter to get a break from the macabre, however, I'm really looking forward to the next installment.
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Brad just can't help being Brad. I'm beginning to wonder if he likes eating humble pie? John at sixteen is no Will at sixteen, but he deftly deflected the conversation and then pointedly skewered his dad. Another fascinating dinner in the grand manse...and no, I never get tired of them. More please!
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"How ‘bout you tell me what your connection is to Sebastian McTire?” Elijah froze. How the hell was he supposed to answer that?" Now that's a great set-up for the next chapter! I too thought the '55 Chevy could hold the key to the laptop, but also agree it could be a red herring. The chemistry between the two is undeniable. More please!
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Kage seems a smidgen besotted and perhaps that's a good thing. He was surprised about Sebastian and that is something else he needs to clarify. Elijah had an attraction to Kage, so maybe they can work together.
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A story of growth, confusion, sorrow and ultimate joy with clarity of self. It's a story that explores deep wounds, friendship and betrayal. The writing is inspired and the descriptions intimate without being crass. The characters are compelling and their stories personal. There is a well earned happy ending!
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A great ending filled with love, wonder and joy.
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I hope Luc can get and accept the help he needs. Josh and Scott appear to be on the path to a better place and I hope there are no more diversions.
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Well finally! And that was the bit of good news I was hoping for!
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Their hearts are fragile and more than a bit worse for wear. Scott is feeling responsible and worried that Luc's piano playing days may be over. Josh isn't in a good place either. I think the story could use a little good news.
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The third attempt is disheartening. Prior attempts mean he was put into counselling which failed. The scene with Brandon and his dislike of Josh together with Josh saying Brandon's brother is gay is another point of drama in a story overflowing with it.
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Luc just wanted the pain to end. So glad Scott checked the time stamp on the call and that Josh came through in time so that Luc lived.
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Ever the optimist, I had no inkling that Luc would suicide. I don't think Scott did either. For all his brilliance he couldn't figure out a path forward. That's not just sad, but devastating. The story title is a truism. Nobody makes it through life without getting hurt. For most it makes you stronger, but for some it becomes a defining issue. Help exists, yet some feel responsible or unworthy of getting the help needed. I wonder if Scott and/or Josh realize they need help, just as Scott suggested to his friend about the munchkin?
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See my comment for the previous chapter: Ditto!
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Scott's life is way too complicated and looks like it's going to get worse.
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Scott did let the little head do the thinking which lead to the petite mort, or perhaps more accurately as post-coital tristesse. He is confused, conflicted and concerned and turned to his friend who asked the important questions. Interestingly, we still don't know any details of Luc's wound(s).
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Graham was a taker and took what he wanted. Now we know Josh's story. Is Luc's up next?
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Josh is a good listener and a good friend who has also been hurt.
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Sadly most long distance relationships don't make it.
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Granger is back in his preferred element. And I expect his expertise to flourish, whatever the challenge Mr Arbour has planned.
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