Totally enjoyable, even the scene with Jay. Camillo is genuine and interesting. I bet he come through with the book of poetry. I will have to check if Google maps does street views in Cuba!
Jake is a bit entitled. Brian could be acting out because something happened to Bryan...
Helicopter parents are annoying.
Good start. I'll have to follow.
Happy Birthday and thanks for your gift. I loved the chapter even the scene with Jay who continues to be almost trumpian rude!
I always enjoy your brief descriptive sketches!
Not knowing the language is one thing, but expecting everyone to speak English is crass. And Jay's behavior confirms it.
My next stop is the forum to see if you posted pictures.
P.S. The chapter was appreciated despite it's extreme brevity!
Somehow I wasn't totally surprised it was Travis who was responsible for torching Zach's truck.
I'm glad Travis feels safe staying at the Malibu house.
I wouldn't be surprised if Tony and Mason ended up living and working in SoCal either. I'm looking forward to spring break in Hawaii!
P.S. Happy 4-20!