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    Chapter 12

    Daddydavek commented on Mann Ramblings's story chapter in Chapter 12

    Even if Sawyer is just what Jimmy needs and vice versa, Fergus is bound to screw it up beyond all recognition....I don't see a happy ending. I just hope our inventive author can find a way out, without either of them having to suffer a calamity.
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    Chapter 27

    Daddydavek commented on CLJobe's story chapter in Chapter 27

    Larry and David got a lesson I don't think they will forget... The school sounds too good to be true, they should jump at the chance to go there!
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    Farmer Bruce was an experience and Mike seems to have taken the good from it as he realized it was over. Auditor Bob is eye candy and seems nice. Hopefully they get along great as they work together and maybe even have to work late...
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    Chapter 26

    Daddydavek commented on CLJobe's story chapter in Chapter 26

    Ok, that was short and sweet.
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    I think Ary knows more than he has said. I think Levine is crooked. I think Toby has some fault in his own death and that Rhys is still a self-absorbed artsy-fartsy piece. Billy I'm not sure about: He seems to know things that someone new to the case probably wouldn't.
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    Chapter 24

    Daddydavek commented on CLJobe's story chapter in Chapter 24

    Well we found out David is well endowed....
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    I think the tide is coming in...again.
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    With the baby named Penny and the scene at the baby shower, I was completely shocked that Penn wasn't the biological father. Unless Cam put Sam 's name on the birth certificate, Penn is still the legal dad if they were still married....
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    Well that explains the unexpected complications with Cam...
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    Yes, Lee will be furious when he discovers Nash has moved on and found love. But he has only reaped what he has sown. Penn is so full of Nash, he fails to appreciate his own good qualities, but Nash does and I hope they can make it last a lifetime.
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    The very prolonged foreplay is such that if they ever connect, it will be over in seconds....
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    Penn coming to Thailand says more than anything else about their connection and he wants Nash all to himself.... I suspect that poor Nash is going to have to face his demons sooner rather than later.
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    Chapter 23

    Daddydavek commented on CLJobe's story chapter in Chapter 23

    Having lots of money is enabling, but it also means you can't let your guard down. Living in a security bubble would suck for me. I'm glad Ants and Carlo are ok with it.
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    Poor Nash, sad about Lee and frightened by his feelings for Penn. Somehow unless the box Sam gave him really does have some magic, I don't think the trip to Thailand will solve anything for him.
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    I have nothing to add, except I think Penn wishes Nash was into threesomes...
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    They joke and call each other husband but there is truth there that they haven't admitted....
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    Chapter 31

    Daddydavek commented on AquariusGuy's story chapter in Chapter 31

    There is definitely another traitor in the company's office.
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    Chapter 22

    Daddydavek commented on CLJobe's story chapter in Chapter 22

    I can't imagine a teenager and young man never taking himself in hand in his own bed! I get it that a lot of guys get it on in their shower, or sitting on the can, but honestly, never wanking in your own bed all throughout your teenage years is unimaginable.
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    Penn is Nash's rock..and is going to make him face reality.
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    I wonder if the Knotts had an inkling about Lee and Paul? Nash certainly didn't. Two years is too much to overlook...
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    Nash is more than a bit self-righteous with a flair for drama. Telling Logan he didn't like him was cruel. He got his point across, but could have been more diplomatic. His crush on Penn and his determination to avoid that temptation was the impetus, but that doesn't excuse his boorish behavior.
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    Nash being Nash and not wanting to intrude, seems to have made the Knotts a little intrigued. They know that they are popular and can't imagine someone declining to hang with them. Then too there is the jock issue. Nash is in good shape, is a marathoner, and looks young for his age. The Knotts seem bound and determined to show Nash they excel at being jocks.
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    Well done with balance and thoughtfulness. I suspect there are some who think the positions taken by your characters are too liberal while others think they are too moderate. That means you succeeded and hopefully got some people to think some more about their own positions. There is a ton information available. The sad think is that so many rely only on one or two sources instead of familiarizing themselves with multiple views.
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    Chapter 21

    Daddydavek commented on CLJobe's story chapter in Chapter 21

    Nick is treasure. And of course Anthony and Carlo rank right up there too. I've said it before, but it's so nice to see a couple get support from family and friends.
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    Chapter 30

    Daddydavek commented on AquariusGuy's story chapter in Chapter 30

    Having a hard time keeping all the characters "straight" and I still think there is another bum inside the company....
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