NightOwl88

Tell the boys I say Hi. Ok jsut to let you know I'm more of Master myself hehehehe. I enjoy it because, well it's fun. Its like a sotry in and of itself, reading *their* replies and then reading the story it makes them seem more real. Thats something I've had trouble with in your story from some reason, I don't feel the characters like I do in other stories. I mean they are very believable but...I dunno how to describe it.

We've already heard from one of his friends, he says they are friends. Tell shawn i agree with his game choice's I was a tetris and kirby head as a kid lol. its not that I dislike Shawn and Anthony right now, I just think their both idiots. I don't see why they want me to die in a fire, i've been nice so far...well except my little argument by proxy with Anthony last night lol.

Thanks Rush, Cia, Jamie. you three haveno idea how much your words mean to me. To Jamie, I have no intention of allowing a negative comment get to me, I developed thick skin a lot time ago, it takes a lot to get under my skin. I don't know about being talented, sweet, and nice. I just try to be a good person, a good writer; and hope that it shows through. To Cia, He was quiet eloquent wasn't he to Rush, I am glad that you enjoy my work Momma.

No thats ok, i can wait, it wasn't reall important, and I get the feeling that I'll get my answer in the course of the story. Tell Anthony I've taken on bigger bullies then he'll ever be, and had them begging for mercy. Good chapter btw, did I mention that already?

I liked the chapter, plot wise not much happened but it was informative none the less, I do have a few questions/comments I would like to ask though. First to Anthony, DUDE its called "ANGER MANAGEMENT" look into it, it worked wonders for me....for the most part. Second to Shawn, Good news, you're NOT a masochist, you're an idiot. Man beat you like a rented mule and then you go and cuddle up with him, WILLINGLY. It don't connect. I don't care how much you love him, you're smartter then that, abusers don't change lol. This one is for you YS, can I ask Keith a question? Best Wishes, NightOwl

lol no not literally, beside....I do the tieing up in the literal sense Nephy

I am sorry to hear that you are removing the story from your favorites list, I must indulge myself in saying that seeing that is a huge blow to my pride but I do not intend on trying to persuade you otherwise. Indiana summer HAS NOT been abandoned in anyway, shape, or form. In fact the newest chapter is already in production and barring anymore drama or family difficulties that have kept me tied up as of late it should be out with the next week and a half, perhaps sooner. I am sorry that you are discontent about my posting habit's I assure you that I share your sympathies. I have three stories, and i divide my attention and time between them as evenly as possible, Indiana gets it's due just as Max and Josh and Lovers Blind get theirs, I am sorry that life and difficulties sometime's intrude onto my writing time. Best Wishes, Nightowl, P.S It's only the 14th btw.

Thats easy Nephy, once the chapter is on the screen copy the URL from the task bar. When you want to put it in a message type the follpwing [ url = URL HERE ] Chapter title here [ / url ] just erase the double spaces Can't wait to read the new chapter, might take me a bit, I'm expecting to have my kids tonight.

Nephy...it shocks and hurts me that you can even THINK such a terrible thing...................of course we'll take them out of the tin, not doing so would defeat the purpose.

Ok perhaps i have no right to be here, having not read the story but I've gotten a break down of it from several sources and I have to say that I wouldn't have removed the chapter. The chapter, the violence served a purpose, that purpose shouldn't be invalidated because people took offence to it. From how it was described to me I have to admit, i have read worse actions taken place in other stories, and indeed I plan on some very dark happenings in my own work. I'm not saying to ignore the people who find the chapter objectionable but don't let anyone BUT YOU make up your mind for you. If YOU feel it needs to be removed remove it, if YOU feel it needs to be re-written then re-write; but don't be guilted or bullied into it. Respond to the objects with consideration and grace and move on with the story. just my thoughts, Best Wishes, NightOwl

the most recent chapter was very nice, interesting. I have to admit the scene with Shawn and Anthony's friends was...intriguing, and then seeing one of them again at the house. I curious to see if it happens again. I'm trying to work out what you meant about the start of the txt block at the start of the chapter, but don't look for me to get it lol. best, NightOwl P.S Congrats on graduating.

I knew that you Nephylim-san

lol I've been known to do that too Nephy, I live RIGHT NEXT to a grave yard so i have easy access lol.

That's pretty cool. I looked into the Gay interest laws here in indiana awhile ago and found out that while I couldn't get married as a gay person both my partner and I could adopt together, go figure.

I agree with Demetz, the second is probably the best option. it's just me but somehow the first one...I dunno it just doesn't seem right.

ISFJ Strength of preferences % Introverted 56 Sensing 1 Feeling 50 Judging 22 moderately expressed introvert <LI>slightly expressed sensing personality <LI>moderately expressed feeling personality <LI>slightly expressed judging personality

Am I creepy, I like to watch people, when I can get away with it I'll wear sunglasses where ever i go so i can watch be people without being noticed. It doesn't matter who it is, the hot guy or girl, the old lady with her grandkids, if the gaggle of kids playing on the merry-go-round. I like to watch and try to see what their movements, actions, or expressions say about them. I guess that's creepy. I also like to sit out on my front stairs at night or walk through the park at midnight, don't why on that one either. Oh I've alos been known to howl at the moon, but thats just cause I like doing that lol.

Hey Lin, good to see you, I am SOOOO happy to hear you love the story, that makes me happy. I liked the gift exhange scene too, its the first time I've ever done a scene like that before; in reality I always thought the scene would come up first in Max and Josh but it seemed to fit well here too. Zeek's mom does have some problems, and she should know Jake better then that I think it's just a cascade effect. I mean she was so focused on her son being blind that she never considered him to be a sexual being so the revelation of him being gay and in a relationship with his best friend, whom she has known since childhood, was a double shock and then the fact that they were hiding things from them deepened her paranoia. I'm not shrink, just what I think. Glad you stopped in, don't be a stranger.

Mistress is a good one too, but it doesn't have the same apeal of Master...at least not to me, take that anyway you want it. I'm enjoying the story I just had a few rough patches to work over, I look forward to reading more.

BROTHER!!!!!!!!!!! Sorry couldn't resist lol.

Hey Nephy, Sorry I didn't get here sooner, its been a hectic couple of days. The most recent two chapters were very nice, I like Sam, he's a sweet guy, sorry to hear about his son though, thats tragic. I really like Silver's attitude toward's the hospital, his speech toward the end of the most recent chapter was my favorite part. I really liked the intro of his parent's you described them really well. I hope that over time they get to be on good terms with eachother, thats a long period to be away. Faith and the Master getting away is a very ominous note, i can't help but hope that we see the Master at some point, he intrigues me...but that might be more because of the use of the words 'Master'

Hey Cia, I'm glad you stopped in, I am glad you like the chapter, and think so highly of the story. As you well know I strive to make my charecters as three dimensional as possible, i am glad that it shows through. I ahd to inject some drama into the story, and considering Zeek's mom has ahd issues ebfore I thought it would be a great place to expand on, sometimes sneaking around IS the right thing...I've been there lol. I had to do something with Rick, and after an extensive talk with Rush came up with soemthing good, i hope everyone likes where it's going to go. I promise the phone calls and his motivation will be explained. I thought I fixed all my formatting the first time around but I have gone abck adn fixed the stuff I missed, I hope it wasn't an inconvinence. Hello Nephy, always a pleasure. No it doesn't come as a surprise somehow that Indiana Summer is your favorite I like the inclusion of Lou and Lawrence as well, I sort of see them as a more experianced version of Zeek aand Jake, (not THAT way...perverts lol). The mother...well I thought she'd make the perfect familial antagonist for this story I mean the mother of a visually impaired child, she's perfect for going to far. His dad...i think i wrote Zachery to be overwhelmed a bit by the situation. He know's his wife is going to far and is trying to help her but doesn't know how to handle the situation so he goes to the one option he knows there is, to keep Zeek from making waves; it's not the right decision but he feels that's all he can do lol. I don't think his mom will be ill for too long, but she might get worse before she gets better, not sure yet so your EVIL NATURE might get stroked later on. She is over-protective, and anxious, and scared and possibly feelign a little inadaquite but that is indeed no excuse to seperate him from Jake, i am glad you hate her, it shows that I'm doing my job lol. Thank you my lovely Ladies for your posts, you know how much I look forward to seeing your posts. best Wishes, nightOwl

Hey Yall, Just thought I would let all of you know that chapter 10 of Lovers Blind is up in the efiction section. Sorry it took me so long to get out. I hope you enjoy, as always I enourage you all to let me know what you think. Best Wishes, NightOwl Lovers Blind CH10

hehehehehehehe you big silly

Ok....the Wise ole' Owl is missing something here lol.