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Sidewinder - 3. Chapter 3 Gunny Sack

Proverbs 27:17
Iron sharpens iron, and one man sharpens another.

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Gunny Sack

 

 

Coy had passed Boone a while ago, and Daisy picked up a trot as they neared the camp, anxious for a good roll in the dirt most likely. The day had become a sticky one, and her neck was soaked with sweat.

“Hey, what happened to the horses… and Blue? Don’t see ’em anywhere,” Coy called out to Boone, who rode up quick.

“Dan’s buckskin is in town, remember… payment for his burying. Maybe the other ones made it up over the ridge.”

“In hobbles?” Coy asked, sounding doubtful.

“That mule sure can travel with them on, doing that rabbit hop of his, but I reckon he’s too lazy to put in the effort it would take. Unlikely, though, any of them would go far since there’s enough grass in sight after the big rain, and the river’s right here for water. None up that way.”

“Must have been stole.”

“Could be,” Boone agreed as he looked across the river, seeing no sign of them there either. “We’ve been gone since yesterday, and they were ripe for the picking. Maybe one of the miners farther upriver or on the mountain claimed them, knowing they’re not owned by anyone anymore. That mule would come in handy for some. Did you want one of them?”

“Never considered it till now. Will’s horse, saddle, and gun went to the undertaker and the preacher for his burial, so we coulda used one to pack supplies, I reckon… but as long as they’re getting looked after, it don’t matter to me none. Wes loved that old paint, though.”

“He sure did. Whoever it was didn’t help themselves to the chickens, but the smokehouse door is open, so someone had a look in there. Want some breakfast?” Boone asked as he began unsaddling Daisy.

Coy was doing the same with Mouse. “Won’t say no to some food… or coffee. We going to pan later?”

“No, no panning for me. Bacon, eggs and hardtack biscuits coming up… I’ll let the chickens out first.” Boone, without looking, could almost hear the questions his friend wanted to ask.

“Ah… you go ahead and I'll hobble the horses after they have a good roll. I’ll get to clearing out Will’s belongings too, so it’s done.”

Boone, on his way to the chicken pen, glanced back to see Coy standing with his head down, and a sad set to his wide shoulders. Was he praying? It appeared he was when his head turned and Boone saw his lips moving. He suspected it was to do with Will, but couldn't help wondering if it was about him as well. A bad conversation was coming, and he sure wasn’t keen on starting it. Could he actually do it? Walk away from the man he had such love for?

Coy spent a long enough time inside his brother’s tent Boone was tempted to check on him. He would have in the past, but things were changing, so he kept to cooking. The only sounds Boone heard was one stifled sob and a punch on the canvas. Eventually, to Boone’s relief, the man came out; he was empty-handed, and his face was calm. “Nothing in there worth keeping, and the tent’s seen better days. I reckon it’ll be fitting to burn it where it stands.”

“Suit yourself. I’ll probably do the same with Wes and Lee’s. Don’t much feel like going through their things at all. Come eat. Coffee’s hot and strong, and I put extra sugar in it.”

Coy straddled the old, broken tree they’d drug across the river when they first arrived. It had been their seat and table for two years, and the stump end, with most of its roots intact, was a convenient place to hang everything from cooking tools to clothes. Boone handed him a steaming cup of syrupy black liquid, knowing without a doubt the man needed it. After a couple of sips and a grimace, he uttered, “Thanks.” Reaching for the tin plate heaped with bacon, eggs, and grease-soaked hardtack, he dug in.

They ate in silence, with Boone taking a seat on the large, wooden box they kept some of their supplies in. No matter what lay between them, getting a full belly came first. You never wanted to be weak or sick in this kind of life, and food was the best medicine available. It didn’t stop Boone from thinking, though, and the more he considered it, the more he realized he had to go now. The worry for finding a place to put down roots before winter came, that was one thing, but another reason was the powerful hold Coy had on him. He was already having second thoughts—which meant they had to go their separate ways before he changed his mind.

“I want to see Will’s hiding spot.”

Coy’s sudden words didn’t surprise Boone, but he felt eased at hearing them. The conversation was coming, but maybe they could be moving while it happened. His one leg was already jumping nervously. “Okay, I’ll wash up and we’ll go.”

“I’ll help.”

They pulled off their boots and socks and carried them across the wide, shallow river, their feet used to walking on the smooth rocks covering the river bottom in most places for miles. Putting them back on when they reached the shore, Boone led the way.

It took about twenty minutes to reach the ridge, and then Boone had to hang precariously in order to get his hand under the big exposed tree root. One day, the big old cottonwood might topple from its heights, but for now it didn’t look worried, every branch filled with leaves. Will had picked a good hiding spot, and it had only been chance and a full moon, a few months back, that Boone had spied him in the act of putting something in it.

First, he pulled out three fist-sized rocks and let them drop. Searching farther in, he retrieved a gunny sack and hauled it out, handing it to Coy as he inched his way back from the overhang. “Go ahead… open it and see for yourself.”

Coy stared at the sack a few seconds before slowly untying the leather strip keeping it closed. Reaching in, he brought a gun into view, and right after, a roll of bills his brother couldn’t possibly have earned. “Did you see these?”

Boone, now leaning his back against the tree’s trunk, nodded and waited.

“I wonder where this gun came from. That’s a pretty fancy grip.”

“Suspect it’s the spoils of another killing, one he couldn’t show in public.”

It was Coy’s turn to nod, and he didn’t try to hide how distressed he was. He reached back into the sack and emptied it. Will’s nugget was still there, stored in an old brown medicine bottle behind a cloth plug. They’d seen it enough to know it was the same one… the only one he’d managed to coax from the river that they knew of. It was likely worth twenty-five dollars.

“Dear God in heaven,” Coy said as he held their old friends’ tin in his hand. There, plain as day, were the initials of the two men. He pried open the tight fitting lid and peered in. “Damn. A lot of years’ work in here. It’s just like you said.”

“Sorry, Coy… I really wish it wasn’t so.”

Coy gave him a thoughtful look before he lowered his sorrow-filled eyes. “Not your fault. I needed the truth, and there ain’t no doubt for what he did.”

“But you did doubt it?”

“Already told you no. I wanted to. You don’t understand, Boone. You never had brothers, and you never lost any.”

“I reckon I can’t argue with that.”

“I believed you, though. I knew you wouldn’t lie.”

“I thought about it… keeping it from you, but those two old men deserve some justice, even if Will… and Dan… are already dead.”

Coy eyed him again. “I’m sorry for Dan.”

“He was just a friend, like Wes and Lee.”

“No, he was more than that… I could tell.”

He was about to object once more, but sighed instead. “Coulda been… some other time, maybe… but that time’s never gonna be.” Boone saw a look of shame cross his friend’s face. “What’s done is done.”

“Yeah, I suppose,” Coy said before looking away. “So… what do we do now?”

“What do you want to do? He’s your brother… you could take this and move on.”

Coy’s head snapped back and his eyes widened. “No… wouldn’t feel right, would it?”

“Suspect not,” he answered, waiting for Coy to make the right decision.

“No… I can’t keep this… do you want to keep it?”

“Hell, no.”

“Then what do we do?”

“There’s only one thing to do.”

“We turn it in to Sheriff Willard?”

“Yep, and we do it today.”

“Today? Why today?”

“Because the sheriff will have a lot of questions, and the longer we wait, the more he might figure we was involved.”

“Tarnation, Boone… you think he could try to pin it on us?”

“From what I’ve seen, he’s a good man. He’ll see his way to the truth.”

“I sure as hell hope so.” Sighing, he stood up. “No time like the present, I guess. Won’t be able to think of anything else till it’s done.”

 

The day had gotten even hotter, and the horses kicked up dust with every footfall as they walked towards town. Boone still hadn’t brought up the for sure touchy subject of leaving, and his decision to do it in the next day or two, but there were other matters to wrangle first. He wasn’t lying when he said he thought the sheriff was a good man, but had to admit Coy’s distrust of lawmen wasn’t without good reason.

Some were just plain bad, and he’d been around enough to know to avoid those ones best he could… but Sheriff Willard had always been fair in the two years he’d been in his jurisdiction, and Wes and Lee had spoke highly of him. As much as he’d hated Will, he’d take no joy in turning in the evidence, but that was because of what it was doing to his friend.

He was riding a little behind Coy—Daisy was always happy to follow—and, as always, appreciated the man’s natural grace in a saddle. He rode erect, with no sign of the typical cowboy slouch, but there was a lot of give to his waist as he moved with his mount, like his body was moving for the sheer joy of it. His long legs stayed relaxed when he rode, toes pointing slightly outward, and heels down. A fine picture he was, on his long-necked bay mare. Mouse wasn’t big, but she covered ground well, even at a walk, and she had a head prettier than most… just like her rider.

He watched the man swat a lazy fly away from his sweat-slicked neck, seeing his muscled shoulder bunch, and thought about the power and speed of that arm when he threw his lariat at a fast-moving cow. Once, after a long day of chasing down and roping full grown cattle out of dense brush, Coy had been pulled from the saddle before he could dally his rope, and something had tore in his shoulder. It was a mistake a cowboy only made once.

Boone had been the one to massage horse liniment into his muscles over the next few nights, under the cover of darkness, and the one who took up the slack for him over the next week or so. Their trail boss was an unforgiving man, but never found out Coy had been injured and couldn’t throw a rope… he’d have been sent packing if he did. He could still feel the man’s smooth skin beneath his hands, even all these years later.

They hadn’t known each other long—in fact, that cattle drive was the first time they’d met—but it was when he knew without a doubt he was made different. It wasn’t a shock, but he’d spent a few years ignoring the possibility. Some men preferred men, that was a fact, and he’d seen the hungry looks an occasional cowboy would give him… even ones who would use the services of the dance hall girls. Boone had turned down enough invitations to know he wasn’t the only one trying to survive in this harsh and dangerous way of life, but he’d spent a lot of time wondering if such connections were just a convenience. He stopped questioning after Coy, figuring out pretty fast love was a part of it, at least for him.

“You sure we’re doing the right thing?”

The sudden question corralled Boone’s roaming thoughts. “Nope.”

Coy stopped and turned his mare to face him. “You rethinking how smart this is?”

“Decision’s made for me.”

“It’s a lot of money, and it would mean—”

“It’s not ours.”

“No… but whose is it? Probably ain’t no one alive to claim it.”

“Maybe so, but we don't know that for certain, and it’s proof of a crime... evidence of who killed two good men, and caused the death of another one.”

“So we’re supposed to be saints?”

“I’m not saying such a thing, Coy, but we can prove Dan done right by calling out your brother. Right now, folks don’t know Will killed Wes and Lee. They only know Dan shot a man in the back in a fair fight. It ain’t right. He might be dead, but he don’t deserve the town thinking poorly of him… he grew up around these parts.”

Coy took his time in responding. “I didn’t think of that… about Dan.”

“Yeah, well it might not matter to most folks, but it matters to me.”

“I… I understand.”

“Do you? Cause you’re sounding a lot like Will right now.”

Boone had struck a nerve, and Coy went rigid before he sputtered in anger. “That’s not fair! Not fair at all! I don’t care a damn about the gold, but it ain’t easy to turn in my own brother, dead or not.”

Boone blew out some air, feeling like he was on the edge of a hand-wide cliff riding a lame horse. Dan’s death had been wearing on him, but it was no excuse for hurting Coy, and he regretted pushing his friend so hard. “You’re right. Wasn’t fair of me. I know turning Will in is asking a lot of you… maybe too much… if you want to keep the money and the gold, then keep it and I won’t say a word to no one. We can turn around right now—it’s up to you. I’d advise you to bury that gun somewhere deep, though.”

“You’re serious?” Coy asked as he peered into Boone’s face. “You really mean that?”

“I do. Will was your brother, not mine, and you have to do what you think is right. I for sure know it’s not about the money or gold for you.”

“So, you’re leaving it to me to decide this?”

“That’s what I said,” Boone answered, meeting an intense, blue-as-the-sky gaze.

“Then I reckon we keep going.” Coy turned his horse around and continued on towards Red Bluff.

Boone nudged Daisy to follow, and his frown soon turned into a smile. He’d not had any doubts Coy would do the right thing.

 

 

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I like the proverb. Coy was the one who whetted Boone's appetite for same-sex love as more than just a convenience. And now Boone is keeping Coy's conscience and integrity sharp. The gunny sack has given up its secrets and Coy must once and for all face the fact his brother was an evil dude. And he also has to understand how three good guys died, because he let Will tag along and kept bailing him out of trouble.

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1 hour ago, Timothy M. said:

I like the proverb. Coy was the one who whetted Boone's appetite for same-sex love as more than just a convenience. And now Boone is keeping Coy's conscience and integrity sharp. The gunny sack has given up its secrets and Coy must once and for all face the fact his brother was an evil dude. And he also has to understand how three good guys died, because he let Will tag along and kept bailing him out of trouble.

Thanks. I think the proverb fits. You're right that Coy opened Boone's eyes to who he was and what it meant. And yeah, Boone has kept Coy from being influenced by his brother. Integrity is a good word. Boone had made sure Coy kept his integrity, and someday Coy should be thankful for that. 

The gunny sack and it's contents were what Coy needed to see. There can be no doubt now, or no excuses made for Will. But, it's hard for Coy. I think he is feeling guilt for what his brother did, but he's not responsible. I doubt if he had stood up to Will about his ways, it would have made no difference at all. Will was a killer... no matter where he was or where he went, he would wreak havoc. He was a sidewinder, after all, and though dead, his effects are still being felt. :(  Thanks and cheers... G. :hug:  

 

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I am so far behind on stuff, but finally got back to this great yarn!
I really hope Coy and Boone stay together, and I'm glad Coy made the right decision about Will's ill-gotten gains.

On to the next gripping chapter....

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Glad to see that Coy made the right decision on Will's ill-gotten gains. Makes a better epitaph for Dan, too. And, the decision makes Boone happier.

Just hope the sheriff sees it thatta way! :)

 

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8 hours ago, Geron Kees said:

Glad to see that Coy made the right decision on Will's ill-gotten gains. Makes a better epitaph for Dan, too. And, the decision makes Boone happier.

Just hope the sheriff sees it thatta way! :)

 

Coy is a good man... the polar opposite of his brother. As Coy would say, they had good raising... it just never took with Will. Coy was torn, but once again, Boone's influence cleared his confusion. The sheriff? He's an interesting man... Cheers, buddy. :hug:  

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I'm glad they didn't let the contents of the gunny sack come between them. Boone had a good point about clearing Dan's name, shows how honorable he is. And even Coy knew his brother deserves nothing but the truth.

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2 hours ago, Timothy M. said:

I'm glad they didn't let the contents of the gunny sack come between them. Boone had a good point about clearing Dan's name, shows how honorable he is. And even Coy knew his brother deserves nothing but the truth.

Yep. :) It's settling in for Coy about who Will really was... and as much as he would like to protect him, he knows he doesn't deserve it. Boone is an honorable man. He's also a strong man who sees the 'right' in things. I like how he treats Coy... understanding and respecting how hard this is for him, but trusting him to do the right thing, even when things can go wrong so easily in this uncertain world they live in. Coy doesn't disappoint. Thanks, Tim. Cheers! :hug: 

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The money and gold were a temptation, but they've made a choice to turn the goods in.

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3 hours ago, drpaladin said:

The money and gold were a temptation, but they've made a choice to turn the goods in.

This, more than anything, shows who they are. You reap what you sow, and they are sowing decency and respect for the friends who have passed. There was no reason to give up the gold other than the mettle of these men. In life, we have our defining moments, and this is one for Boone and especially Coy, who has sometimes lacked self confidence, living in the shadow of his brother. I'm as proud of him as Boone is. :)  Thanks and cheers, DP! :hug: 

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Great chapter! Going to the next chapter!

I understand about the grieving part but when I grieved my husband's passing? But my sister told me that she was not going to change her vacation just because my husband passed away! She went to Louisiana to see our cousins and did not attend the funeral. What kind of support is that? At least my brother and his wife was there. Oh course, there was a pinch of family from my husband's side there but there was a lot of friends! I put my sister in her place when she came back a week later and she felt so bad and said she was sorry and should have supported me!

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11 minutes ago, Sherye said:

Great chapter! Going to the next chapter!

I understand about the grieving part but when I grieved my husband's passing? But my sister told me that she was not going to change her vacation just because my husband passed away! She went to Louisiana to see our cousins and did not attend the funeral. What kind of support is that? At least my brother and his wife was there. Oh course, there was a pinch of family from my husband's side there but there was a lot of friends! I put my sister in her place when she came back a week later and she felt so bad and said she was sorry and should have supported me!

Grief can affect us all in different ways. There really is no right or wrong... we just have to find a way to deal and Coy is trying, and part of that is facing who his brother really was. Glad you liked this chapter, Sherye. Thanks for  sharing your thoughts with me. Cheers... Gary.... :hug: 

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Reading Boone struggling with himself what to do next is painful, the decision to leave Coy is not easy. It makes me sad.

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2 hours ago, aditus said:

Reading Boone struggling with himself what to do next is painful, the decision to leave Coy is not easy. It makes me sad.

I agree, Adi. It makes me sad too. There is a price for being strong in his convictions, and Boone is definitely paying it. The last thing he wants is to leave his friend behind, but unrequited love carries its own unique pain. It's an always-there kind of hurting, and Boone is drowning in it. :( Thanks for sharing your thoughts on this chapter... cheers... Gary.... :hug:  

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Boone is a good man and it's going to hurt him to leave his friend, but I understand his reasons. So far, I can't see any other solution. Normally, i would say get it over with as soon as possible, but in this case, I'm pleased he's taking his time. Perhaps I'm hoping Coy will start to see Boone in a different light.

I can see how the right choice of words in the dialogue is so important in this story, and you've done an excellent job. I'm no expert, of course, and it's not a genre that usually appeals to me, but this is an enjoyable read that demands my attention. I'm so impressed, Gary. Well done.   

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2 hours ago, Dodger said:

Boone is a good man and it's going to hurt him to leave his friend, but I understand his reasons. So far, I can't see any other solution. Normally, i would say get it over with as soon as possible, but in this case, I'm pleased he's taking his time. Perhaps I'm hoping Coy will start to see Boone in a different light.

I can see how the right choice of words in the dialogue is so important in this story, and you've done an excellent job. I'm no expert, of course, and it's not a genre that usually appeals to me, but this is an enjoyable read that demands my attention. I'm so impressed, Gary. Well done.   

Thanks for the kind words, Dodger. It means a lot to hear that you don't find the word choice and dialogue jarring. I thought it paramount to make it as authentic as possible, even if it turned some readers off. I can't be certain, but I don't think too many were.  

Boone is stalwart. He's solid and good, blunt when he needs to be, and protective as hell... he cares about Coy's soul even more than he loves him. We might not be seeing Coy is his best light, but Boone knows and has faith in the goodness of him. Coy knows that, and it helped him make the right choice about the gold. 

Boone doesn't want to leave... but after five years, he feels he has no choice. He doesn't want to end up resenting his friend... he wants what he wants, and he's going to try to find it, but I think it's fair to say there is a battle raging within him.

Appreciate you are continuing to read this, buddy. Cheers!   

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I am of two minds on Coy and Boone.  I can't decide if I want them to split up or not.  First, I have fallen in love with Boone.  His strengths are his moral compass, compassion and loyalty. He has faced so many dangers and losses while keeping Coy safe from Will. He deserves a reward for sticking to Coy for so many years.  Coy seems to be codependent on Boone and may need a time away from him before Coy can truly provide the love and support Boone wants from Coy.  Coy seems a bit self-centered and avoids the uncomfortable truth about his brother.  I think he is a bit too immature to handle a relationship at this time. I love the romance, but don't fear the split. 

Your research is spot on when it comes to this story.  Your western speak sounds normal to me 😋. It is very authentic.  I grew up in the 50's and 60's where many of my father's friends were farmers and ranchers.  Your spoken dialogue sounded perfect to my ears and brought up many old memories.  

Glad that Boone and Coy are doing the right thing.

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10 minutes ago, raven1 said:

I am of two minds on Coy and Boone.  I can't decide if I want them to split up or not.  First, I have fallen in love with Boone.  His strengths are his moral compass, compassion and loyalty. He has faced so many dangers and losses while keeping Coy safe from Will. He deserves a reward for sticking to Coy for so many years.  Coy seems to be codependent on Boone and may need a time away from him before Coy can truly provide the love and support Boone wants from Coy.  Coy seems a bit self-centered and avoids the uncomfortable truth about his brother.  I think he is a bit too immature to handle a relationship at this time. I love the romance, but don't fear the split. 

Your research is spot on when it comes to this story.  Your western speak sounds normal to me 😋. It is very authentic.  I grew up in the 50's and 60's where many of my father's friends were farmers and ranchers.  Your spoken dialogue sounded perfect to my ears and brought up many old memories.  

Glad that Boone and Coy are doing the right thing.

It's fantastic to hear you find my western speak authentic. The more readers who tell me that the more confident I feel. I do have another western 'epic' in mind, so this is good practice for that. It's a rather ambitious story, so who knows if I will ever get to it. 

I understand your feelings about Boone and Coy. It's always a little tough to get a read on each character when the story is told from one point of view, that being Boone's. While I do love Boone, I also have a soft spot for Coy. Coy has been trying to walk a difficult line for quite a while. The tension between Boone and Will put him in a tough position, but now he's out from under it, and is in new territory. Yes, he doesn't want to acknowledge Will's sins any more than he has to, but he's not a stupid man. Will was his last kin, so... yeah, you might be right that he needs to be on his own while he decides his path.

Is he self-centered? Possibly, but it's tough to pin him down while he's dealing with both shock and grief. It's too soon for expectations, and I think Boone realizes that. Boone, quite frankly, is worn out, and needs to get on with his life. 

Thanks for the great comment, my friend... Cheers! :hug: 

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18 minutes ago, Headstall said:

It's fantastic to hear you find my western speak authentic. The more readers who tell me that the more confident I feel. I do have another western 'epic' in mind, so this is good practice for that. It's a rather ambitious story, so who knows if I will ever get to it. 

I understand your feelings about Boone and Coy. It's always a little tough to get a read on each character when the story is told from one point of view, that being Boone's. While I do love Boone, I also have a soft spot for Coy. Coy has been trying to walk a difficult line for quite a while. The tension between Boone and Will put him in a tough position, but now he's out from under it, and is in new territory. Yes, he doesn't want to acknowledge Will's sins any more than he has to, but he's not a stupid man. Will was his last kin, so... yeah, you might be right that he needs to be on his own while he decides his path.

Is he self-centered? Possibly, but it's tough to pin him down while he's dealing with both shock and grief. It's too soon for expectations, and I think Boone realizes that. Boone, quite frankly, is worn out, and needs to get on with his life. 

Thanks for the great comment, my friend... Cheers! :hug: 

I can understand Coy better thanks to your comment.  It struck close to home, since I lost my younger brother a year ago.  I wasn't very rational then, either.  

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2 minutes ago, raven1 said:

I can understand Coy better thanks to your comment.  It struck close to home, since I lost my younger brother a year ago.  I wasn't very rational then, either.  

Sorry to hear that. :hug: Coy will grieve for awhile, I'm sure, even though Will Diamond doesn't deserve to be grieved over. And we shouldn't really understand characters right away. They need to be fleshed out over time, in my opinion, so there is no wrong way to see a character. Thanks, buddy! Oh, and remember to leave chapter like/reactions for me if you don't mind. They help me keep track of what's read, and provide more input... whether someone 'loves' a chapter over 'likes' a chapter. :) 

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I just love this bit:yes:

 

They hadn’t known each other long—in fact, that cattle drive was the first time they’d met—but it was when he knew without a doubt he was made different. It wasn’t a shock, but he’d spent a few years ignoring the possibility. Some men preferred men, that was a fact, and he’d seen the hungry looks an occasional cowboy would give him… even ones who would use the services of the dance hall girls. Boone had turned down enough invitations to know he wasn’t the only one trying to survive in this harsh and dangerous way of life, but he’d spent a lot of time wondering if such connections were just a convenience. He stopped questioning after Coy, figuring out pretty fast love was a part of it, at least for him.

Just a great chapter I love this story:yes::thankyou::2thumbs:

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3 hours ago, Albert1434 said:

I just love this bit:yes:

 

They hadn’t known each other long—in fact, that cattle drive was the first time they’d met—but it was when he knew without a doubt he was made different. It wasn’t a shock, but he’d spent a few years ignoring the possibility. Some men preferred men, that was a fact, and he’d seen the hungry looks an occasional cowboy would give him… even ones who would use the services of the dance hall girls. Boone had turned down enough invitations to know he wasn’t the only one trying to survive in this harsh and dangerous way of life, but he’d spent a lot of time wondering if such connections were just a convenience. He stopped questioning after Coy, figuring out pretty fast love was a part of it, at least for him.

Just a great chapter I love this story:yes::thankyou::2thumbs:

This quote shows us how matter-of-fact Boone is in his acceptance of himself. And his love for Coy. He is stoic in his acceptance that there is no future with Coy as a romantic partner, but it doesn't mean it doesn't hurt. We do see how well they know each other in this chapter... Boone had no doubt Coy would do the right thing... and his brother is no longer there to influence him. Thanks, buddy... this was nice to wake up to. Cheers! :hug: 

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I really, really, really liked the descriptive storytelling in this chapter. Boone's notice of Coy while riding behind him, with the bunching of his shoulder muscles, and the fly, the sweat, all came together to really paint the scene out nicely. The leaning cottonwood, the riverside camp. Very nice. 

Did cowboys really name their horses in westerns? The few westerns I've seen, the horses were rather expendable and I can't recall names, aside from the tamer westerns, but the true gritty ones? Mouse is an interesting name for a horse, but the description of her made the name fit in better. 

I honestly hope the good deed doesn't lead to hardship, Coy may have to pay for some of Will's crimes, maybe not with Willard, but maybe some of the other victims. I doubt he's going to be allowed to be blameless, but that's me breaking my own rules. :P 

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25 minutes ago, Krista said:

I really, really, really liked the descriptive storytelling in this chapter. Boone's notice of Coy while riding behind him, with the bunching of his shoulder muscles, and the fly, the sweat, all came together to really paint the scene out nicely. The leaning cottonwood, the riverside camp. Very nice. 

Did cowboys really name their horses in westerns? The few westerns I've seen, the horses were rather expendable and I can't recall names, aside from the tamer westerns, but the true gritty ones? Mouse is an interesting name for a horse, but the description of her made the name fit in better. 

I honestly hope the good deed doesn't lead to hardship, Coy may have to pay for some of Will's crimes, maybe not with Willard, but maybe some of the other victims. I doubt he's going to be allowed to be blameless, but that's me breaking my own rules. :P 

Thanks, Krista. I love storytelling, and I really do try to be subtle about details. We build worlds as writers, and writing a western gave me a great opportunity to explore those aspects of that way of life. 

I'm pretty sure cowboys named their horses. Maybe they wouldn't name every one in their string if they had one, but I can't imagine not naming their personal mounts. Some names were simple for sure, like Wes calling his horse 'Paint'. I can tell you Lee didn't have a proper name for his horse. He just called her 'Mare'. As a horseman, I know the bond between horse and rider is special. In the Old West, they had to rely on one another, and a horse might be your only company for weeks or even months. Mouse is a nondescript bay, typical of a lot of horses, but Coy loves her as much as Boone loves Daisy, who is a little flashier. 

Lol. You can break any rules you want. Speculation is welcomed. :yes:  Being the kind of men they are, there really was no question what they would do. I didn't have to agonize over it at all. Coy is the anti-Will, and Boones knows that. You bring up Boone's biggest fear... will Coy be safe when he leaves him? He tries to convince himself he will be, but Will has done a lot of damage, so there is no guarantee more won't come looking for him, and find his brother instead. 

Thanks for the kind and wonderful comment, Krista. As I already said, this is fun. Cheers! :hug: 

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