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By Chance or Appointment - 25. High Summer Haibun

These were pieced together from my notes made during an annual summer retreat, away from the grid, the net and the noise. My great thanks go to @AC Benus, who helped me clean these up. All errors and deficiencies you may find are my own, however.

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A year ago, there were none to be seen.

They’d disappeared, like so many things fondly remembered.

But this year, joy of joys, there were three of them,

bobbing on the sparkling water under the warm June sun.

 

Beneath clear June skies

three loons, parents and their chick,

float and dive, fishing

in cold waters that shimmer

with light that lasts forever.

 

~ ~ ~

2.

 

Not far from the house is a wide hayfield

with a huge granite outcrop

on which a child could stand and shout

with growing, confident lungs

at the forests where the grass runs out;

and the woods returned our voices

so clear and true,

we could imagine the trees

mimicking us

word for word.

 

The northwest wind blew

and jostled the trees to speak

hoping for a joke

that might make the grasses dance

or chase the dark clouds away.

 

~ ~ ~

3.

 

It is hard to find a more haunting birdsong

than that of the Hermit thrush.

It’s also true that birds teach their offspring their specific songs,

often by singing repeatedly,

until the youngster knows

its own song by heart.

 

A male hermit thrush

sings an ethereal tune

amidst the birch leaves

to his silent, watchful, son

perched on a bare branch below.

 

~ ~ ~

4.

 

The field on a summer day isn’t merely green:

it’s a whole palette of colors,

with patches of red-orange and delicate purples and whites,

and shades of brown where the seed heads have begun to mature.

Every one of these hues shimmers and changes

when the wind blows, making the stalks

bow down in waves as the cloud shadows

cross the meadow.

 

Tiger swallowtails

sail over a sea of grass,

carried on a breeze

that sets the daisies nodding

while the trees laugh with delight.

 

~ ~ ~

5.

 

The field and forest are hushed.

The afterglow of sunset has faded over the mountain,

and Cygnus flies along the Milky Way.

In the east, there emerges a different light,

and a song to welcome it.

 

Somewhere on the ridge

coyotes sing to the moon

rising through the firs,

to praise its blood-red beauty

and in thanks for light to hunt.

Thanks for reading these snapshots of my vacation. I hope you enjoyed these brief moments from a less harried and frenetic world.
Copyright © 2022 Parker Owens; All Rights Reserved.
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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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AC Benus

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Thanks for writing and sharing these. All are stunning vignettes, expertly composed.

I have say to I'm particularly moved by the haunting directness of No. 3. The poem part of it . . . is just so perfect.

Thanks again!

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i'm so glad to see these. You mentioned being away in the comments on my current story and i asked if you'd write about it. We are all so lucky that you did!  All of these are haunting and beautiful. I feel like i was standing in the meadow, on the ridge or beside the lake watching the bobbing loons. Simply glorious, Parker. Thank you ❣️

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43 minutes ago, AC Benus said:

Thanks for writing and sharing these. All are stunning vignettes, expertly composed.

I have say to I'm particularly moved by the haunting directness of No. 3. The poem part of it . . . is just so perfect.

Thanks again!

Thank you very much for joining me in wonder at the hermit thrush in number 3. Even this remarkable link doesn’t do it justice. https://www.allaboutbirds.org/guide/Hermit_Thrush/sounds
It is a moment I’ll not soon forget. Having my quiet reading interrupted by coyote song is another. Thanks again! 

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5 minutes ago, Mikiesboy said:

i'm so glad to see these. You mentioned being away in the comments on my current story and i asked if you'd write about it. We are all so lucky that you did!  All of these are haunting and beautiful. I feel like i was standing in the meadow, on the ridge or beside the lake watching the bobbing loons. Simply glorious, Parker. Thank you ❣️

Thank you for joining me on my vacation walks. It took me a long time to piece together snapshots from my notes. I’m grateful for your nudge in that task. That granite outcrop in the meadow was fun for us kids at age seven or eight; and it parroted back my adolescent rage at age 16. It’s still a beautiful place. Thanks for the encouraging words and for enjoying these moments from high summer. 

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weinerdog

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These were pieced together from my notes made during an annual summer retreat, away from the grid, the net and the noise. I'm glad you have a place like that to go to.I would ask you where it was but I fear  as soon as you said where it would not be that place anymore.

Your verse about the Loons. 

A year ago, there were none to be seen.

They’d disappeared, like so many things fondly remembered. 

Were they thought to be extintc or something?

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They were in a lonely lake in northern New England. There had been nesting pairs on that lake every summer I visited — until last summer. I was heartbroken to think a predator had gotten them. But this year, they were back.

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My favourite? Number 4, I think. For various reasons, there has been much less mowing this year in the UK. One of my nieces and I came across a multi-hued meadow in Herefordshire. She declared she could sit and watch that one patch of land all day without getting bored. That everchanging aspect is captured so well in what you write. Different land, yet the same. Your writing about nature is a constant source of delight. Thank you. 

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1 hour ago, northie said:

My favourite? Number 4, I think. For various reasons, there has been much less mowing this year in the UK. One of my nieces and I came across a multi-hued meadow in Herefordshire. She declared she could sit and watch that one patch of land all day without getting bored. That everchanging aspect is captured so well in what you write. Different land, yet the same. Your writing about nature is a constant source of delight. Thank you. 

I’m glad Number 4 connected with you. I spent the greater part of an afternoon just watching that field, and the big bright butterflies that sailed over it. Without all that mowing, perhaps more and more can share that experience. I’m happy you were able to, at least. Thanks so very much for your thoughts! 

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