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Fireworks & Rain - 1. Jubilee

Jubilee

Drama and raving rants,

he thought he'd seen it all,

so many lips and hands,

he never heard the call.

 

Countless blurry faces

becoming good time lovers,

too many empty spaces:

forever is for others.

 

And yet, one sunny day

extended to ten years:

he found the one who'd stay

for candles and jubilees.

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22 hours ago, dughlas said:

Oh how lucky he was.

That's the essence of the poem, thank you dughlas. :)

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21 hours ago, Mancunian said:

To me this sounds like someones realisation that love does exist, I like it.

Or finally exists, thank you for your comment, Mancunian. :)

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15 hours ago, drsawzall said:

I'm thinking that just when, that all of a sudden became reality!

Exactly, thank you, drsawzall, for reading and commenting. :)

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13 hours ago, Bill W said:

It should convince you to never give up and maybe some day YOUR prince will come.  Thanks, Adi.  

Yes, giving up is not an option, thank you for reading my poem and commenting on it. :)

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10 hours ago, Valkyrie said:

When you meet the right one, the past doesn't matter.  This is a definite jubilation :) 

At least it shouldn't. Thank you Val. :hug:

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5 hours ago, n8te said:

Loved it. Great short poem with a punch.

Thank youn8te, for taking the time to read and comment. :)

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5 hours ago, Mrsgnomie said:

A poem of hope and the promise of future. Cheers to slowing down and growing happy. 

Even though slowing down takes an effort. Thank you Mrs. G. :)

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Fortune favors the brave and it sometimes takes a lot of courage, in the game of love, to pick yourself up and carry on. Sometimes we catch the carrot at the end of the stick, and this poem shows us that beautifully. Love is worth all the frogs for the sake of one prince. Beautiful message here, Adi. Cheers!

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Cute poem, I wish I could find a man to spend 10 years with and 10 years more after that and 10 years...you get the idea :) 

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17 hours ago, Headstall said:

Fortune favors the brave and it sometimes takes a lot of courage, in the game of love, to pick yourself up and carry on. Sometimes we catch the carrot at the end of the stick, and this poem shows us that beautifully. Love is worth all the frogs for the sake of one prince. Beautiful message here, Adi. Cheers!

I totally prefer carrots over frogs.

 Beautiful message here, Adi. I'm glad you think so, Gary.

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6 hours ago, W_L said:

Cute poem, I wish I could find a man to spend 10 years with and 10 years more after that and 10 years...you get the idea :) 

Thank you, W_L, and I totally do.

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