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GA Writing Prompts - 58. Poetry Prompt # 8 - Quatrains

Spring

April morn, the birds are singing at dawn
A sweet floral fragrance’s filling the room
The sky is blue and the morning sun warm
Spring has come and flowers are in full bloom

I look at the sun rising in the blue sky
I’m glad that winter has finally gone
Happy, revived, and with my spirits high
I open the window, humming a song

Dolores Esteban
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Dolores Esteban
On 04/07/2015 06:01 AM, AC Benus said:
I like the contrast between the two quatrains. I don’t know if you noticed it, but the first one is like an 'outdoor' experience, while the second one speaks of opening a window (an apt metaphor for opening up one's spirit), and thus comes from an 'indoor' POV.

 

Very nice! Thank you for taking the challenge, as always.

Yes, you're right. I didn't notice it. Thanks for the feedback. I'm glad you like the poem.
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