Exquisite Corpse and Other Collaborations - 7. At the End of a Year

This is indeed exquisite. No corpse is this, for the two of you surely bring these words to life! Wonderfully done. 

Hope you continue to speak your truth, unafraid. And to find the peace you deserve to keep writing!

16 hours ago, Mikiesboy said:

it's good, Sir, if i do say so myself.  They are a challenge though, but worth the effort. Thank You for asking me again, Sir.

It's damn good, boy. Thanks for collaborating again.

16 hours ago, BHopper2 said:

It is amazing, that you two sync perfectly. Damn, I'm impressed.

I get the visuals of a traveler in a fantasy story, walking along a dirt road, and making choices at the fork in the road. Like how Robert Frost talks about the road less traveled, facing those decisions and hopefully taking the right one.

 

Excellent, and fantastic.

It is in a similar vein to A Road Not Taken, that's a great analysis, A. Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts on this one.

14 hours ago, MichaelS36 said:

I am so glad to see another of these. They are so good. Thank you for doing another! 

Thank you, Mike. your boy and I collab pretty well together.

7 hours ago, Kitt said:

Are you sure you two dont sit together discussing what to write?  This flows so well!  And what is more amazing, I understand it.  Poetry is not my thing. It often takes days of thought befor I get what the author is saying, but this spoke to me quite clearly.

I promise, we don't. We pick a general theme (this time, it was tim's idea to write something positive) and follow a particular process that leads to a finished product. It's all very organic. I'm glad this one spoke to you!

3 hours ago, Parker Owens said:

This is indeed exquisite. No corpse is this, for the two of you surely bring these words to life! Wonderfully done. 

Thank you, Parker!

3 hours ago, Geron Kees said:

Hope you continue to speak your truth, unafraid. And to find the peace you deserve to keep writing!

Thank you, Geron! Speaking truth, unafraid, is certainly a good goal to focus on. Cheers.

Beautiful.

14 minutes ago, Thorn Wilde said:

Beautiful.

Thank you, Thorn.

i've read through it a couple of times, and each time i get something different from it, and i'd be here all night talking about it 

i've also now read both @MacGreg and @Mikiesboy comments in Live-Poets it seems even more magical how this works so well

thank you both for taking this form on and doing these

26 minutes ago, mollyhousemouse said:

i've read through it a couple of times, and each time i get something different from it, and i'd be here all night talking about it 

i've also now read both @MacGreg and @Mikiesboy comments in Live-Poets it seems even more magical how this works so well

thank you both for taking this form on and doing these

you can talk about it all you want, molls, hehe. Thanks for reading and commenting, and for taking a moment to read about the process in Live-Poets.

I do so love these poems you and tim create, Mac. 

This read beautifully..

Thank you both.