joann414

Way to go . Congrats

Carly is now the victim of her own evilness. Go Craig! I'm glad their mother was a witness to the truth. Now I'm ready for a beautiful love story between Craig and Jared.

Well, well. Looks like Ms. Carly is going to get the wind taken out of her sails. Twin brother is not a fool except for his feelings for Jared of course. It's so sad that Jared has lived in this hell for so long at the hands of the man he loves sister. "shakes head" Can't wait for the confrontation between the good twin and the evil twin

I couldn't help but compare Carly and Trina. One is bat shit crazy and the other supportive and protective. You write your characters so well. "Crap on a cracker", is now my new phrase. I love it. That expression can say a lot at times you need to get a point across. lol Jared has a lot of demons to face. It's obvious he doesn't want to cause problems but when love is involved, it's all or none. It's going to be interesting to watch him evolve in the story.. Great chapter!

Sheesh! You talk about a storm in progress. I couldn't run for cover thinking I'd miss something. Great first chapter and I can see I've missed some great reading in my time away from GA. Thanks for such wonderful writing.

I am so proud to have been a part of your first writing here because this story tells me that you've become the wonderful writer that I felt that you were all along. Keep writing Cole and put your emotions to task as you did in this story. It's emotionally and heartfelt beautiful. Your concept on life as we all age is priceless. When you can write like this, your heart is in every word. Kudos to you my friend.

RJ is definitely an original author that should be recognized. His stories have so much substance and his descriptions and settings are so well written. He's definitely an author to be checked out. I love his writing. It's beautiful.

Belated, but sincere birthday wishes guy. Hugs over and over.

It just amazes me the controversy over a flag. What about the Gold's Gym tee he is wearing. Should we shut down those gyms? Just wondering.

Happy Birthday Sweetie. So enjoyed your writings and memoirs. Hope you have a wonderful day!

Thank you for sharing your wonderful talent! Hugs

Keep your thoughts and life in perspective while waiting on things. Move forward and be the person you are now. You've grown by leaps and bounds since I met you here. Hugs and so sorry for your loss.

Sounds like you have it under control except, you might want to get a rope and tie up your shorts. If not, you might be in the news! LOL

I feel the love and fondness in your post Myr. Your Dad sounds like a memory to be treasured and that breathes love into your day. Hugs and much sympathy for your loss. Jo ann

ZOMG! I love goats and lambs. I always threaten to buy my grandson a goat and my hubby goes crazy. Animals are a gift, good or bad, they all have a purpose. LOL