phana14 Posted June 5, 2011 Posted June 5, 2011 You made my DAY! YAY!!! Enigma lll? YAY!!! (I know-I know-maybe. P) If anyone can take a straight teen and a gay teen and, using them to bounce off of, find love for each of them-but not with each other.....enter Nephylim. I do hope you follow through with what is at the moment but a puff of dream/smoke. I don't believe that I said anything about you leaving Ben behind (ahem) in this story, but I had assumed all along that if or when you picked River back up, Ben would also appear soon after. Yeah, like you said before, I think too much. But at least we agree on one thing: Ariel needs a boyfriend! Poor thing! And SO CUTE!!! Bye.
Nephylim Posted June 5, 2011 Author Posted June 5, 2011 Well, I hope you're satisfied but I made a huge mistake in writing about Enigma III because Silver overheard and now I have had to ditch a really good story that i was writing and start writing Enigma III. Ben is kicking off but I'm not telling who he's kicking off against. And Ariel is pissing River off and flirting with Jake and getting everyone hot under the collar. He's just so ACE I guess I should call it Ben and Ariel... even though they don't get together... at least I'm not planning for them to... Nah, even for me 13 and 19 are too far apart
phana14 Posted June 5, 2011 Posted June 5, 2011 Well, I hope you're satisfied but I made a huge mistake in writing about Enigma III because Silver overheard and now I have had to ditch a really good story that i was writing and start writing Enigma III. Ben is kicking off but I'm not telling who he's kicking off against. And Ariel is pissing River off and flirting with Jake and getting everyone hot under the collar. He's just so ACE I guess I should call it Ben and Ariel... even though they don't get together... at least I'm not planning for them to... Nah, even for me 13 and 19 are too far apart If anyone can take a straight teen and a gay teen and, using them to bounce off of, find love for each of them-but not with each other.....enter Nephylim. Read my lips! Please? I see NOTHING wrong with a gay 18/19 being FRIENDS with a 13 yo (str8 OR gay) person. I think you misunderstood what I was saying.:wacko:
Ara Posted June 5, 2011 Posted June 5, 2011 If anyone can take a straight teen and a gay teen and, using them to bounce off of, find love for each of them-but not with each other.....enter Nephylim. Read my lips! Please? I see NOTHING wrong with a gay 18/19 being FRIENDS with a 13 yo (str8 OR gay) person. I think you misunderstood what I was saying.:wacko: Hehe the language barrier strikes again (cultural one that is as you both tech speak English). Sometimes the way we brits phrase things is lost in the translation across the pond but I can assure you it does read that shes agreeing with you and not suggesting anything else Now onto Enigma 3, wow just wow It would be cool to see what happens afterwards how these two worlds collide and maube see the main people from 1 and 2 step back and watch them through someone elses eyes and an interesting pair of eyes to watch them you have chosen im intrigued
Nephylim Posted June 6, 2011 Author Posted June 6, 2011 Well, I'm still writing it from River's point of view but I guess I could give Ben a voice later on, or maybe Ariel. Ben gets involved with some shady characters so I guess it would be fun writing in what he does with them and no just have RIver called to the police station. He gets a real shock when they go a bit too far. I have to admit that I'm a bit shaky with the timeline but I THINK that if Ben's birthday is in October/November and III starting in late spring then he will be 5 months off 14 and Jake will be 16. I am toying with the idea of Ariel getting together with Jake, at least for a bit. They would make a startling contrast. Black and White. And I'm thinking that Jake will come to Ben's aid at some point. Hmm not sure I;m making it up as I go along I am going to cut and paste this post and put it in my ideas folder. Anyone have any more?
phana14 Posted June 6, 2011 Posted June 6, 2011 Teacher: "Class? Would anyone like to say something?" Phana: (raises hand). Teacher: "Yes, Phana?" Phana: "I would just like to say that if I misunderstood you yesterday, I'm sorry. Teacher: (silence) Phana: "*&$@*+##!!!" Ara: (gasps loudly)
Nephylim Posted June 11, 2011 Author Posted June 11, 2011 I've posted the next chapter and I warn you it is not easy to read. It's defining chapter for Silver, freeing in more ways than one but it's certainly not easy.
Ara Posted June 11, 2011 Posted June 11, 2011 Ouch Nephy that was goin so well for him as well, ok a few cuts and bruises but he showed some inner strength that really made it like he was turning a corner and then that. In some ways I think this will strengthen him even more but at what cost though I dont think I wanna be in Tonys shoes either this isnt exactly what he expected and its ironic that hes paying alot more than he intended to and is gonna be paying alot more at the start of the next chapter I hope I totally didnt see that tho until it was happening and I think you deserve a grrrrrrr as well
Nephylim Posted June 11, 2011 Author Posted June 11, 2011 So, do we think that Asher got hurt If so, will Silver stay with him now, to take care of him? Will Silver feel that it was because he tried to stop being a slave that Ash was hurt? Will it put him right back in subservient mode again Will Tony regret what happened? Will Tony be angry with himself of with Silver? He was really angry when he rescued Ariel and this guy was paying A LOT Will Tony throw Silver out of the club? Will Asher go with him? How would River react if Silver turned up with Asher? WIll ANY of that happen?
Ara Posted June 11, 2011 Posted June 11, 2011 Well my take or rather what I think Asher is hurt definately badly maybe mortally with you Nephy its a possinility. With that in mind I think its gonna be fatal and its going to push Silver back to River for a resolution one way or the other. I think Silver will not blame himself but rather Tony for forcing the situation on him and it will strengthen his resolve to leave. As for Tony hes definatley lost Asher whether he survives or not I think any relationship ideas he had will be buried. Im not sure where he will put the blame although im guessing Silver will bear the brunt of some of his anger whether Silver is pushed or jumps who knows. I dont think Silver will be going alone tho I see Ariel jumping with him at the very least Of course I may be wrong but if I had to put money on it thats where id place mine
Anya Posted June 11, 2011 Posted June 11, 2011 I wish Ariel and Ben would end up together. That would be awesome! XD I love Ariel...and I think that if they wait a few years the age difference is okay. Or you start Ben's story when he is older Ben and Ariel.... *swoons* lol
Nephylim Posted June 11, 2011 Author Posted June 11, 2011 Thank would be wonderful... if Ben was gay I am writing Enigma III and Ben gets a girlfriend Don't worry thought Ariel gets his moment
phana14 Posted June 11, 2011 Posted June 11, 2011 So, do we think that Asher got hurt If so, will Silver stay with him now, to take care of him? Will Silver feel that it was because he tried to stop being a slave that Ash was hurt? Will it put him right back in subservient mode again Will Tony regret what happened? Will Tony be angry with himself of with Silver? He was really angry when he rescued Ariel and this guy was paying A LOT Will Tony throw Silver out of the club? Will Asher go with him? How would River react if Silver turned up with Asher? WIll ANY of that happen? Rock and roll with THIS chapter!! My answers: 1: Yes-Asher got hurt. 2: No. Silver already knows that he is no longer a slave. 3: Tony is a pos-no regrets! 4: Tony will be angry with Silver because Silver is totally f'n up his (Tony's) program!! 5: NO! Tony needs Silver so very much as an attraction. 6: Loaded question-so I ask-"Does Tony throw Silver out of the club?" 7: OMG! Wait! Let me calm down. River is a professional caregiver, so I wait for chapter 33. 8: :lmao: :lmao: You are really something else, you! Thanks!
phana14 Posted June 11, 2011 Posted June 11, 2011 Thank would be wonderful... if Ben was gay I am writing Enigma III and Ben gets a girlfriend Don't worry thought Ariel gets his moment "Ariel gets his moment"! YAY!!!!! But I have to wait for the next book? creep
Nephylim Posted June 11, 2011 Author Posted June 11, 2011 tThere will be a lot of surprises in book three which (so far) is very much lighter in tone
Anya Posted June 11, 2011 Posted June 11, 2011 Noes, why isn't Ben gay?? Lighter in tone? Well we know that won't be the case for long in your stories ;p
Nephylim Posted June 12, 2011 Author Posted June 12, 2011 Don't you think Enigma II is light in tone? I mean Silver got his hair done and Ariel is a blast You'll get your wish in the next chapter too... River and Silver meet again... The question is... what will River make of Asher? I think he might have a bit of adjusting to do.
Anya Posted June 14, 2011 Posted June 14, 2011 I think Enimga II is even worse than Enigma I'm scared to read the next chapter tbh ;p
Nephylim Posted June 14, 2011 Author Posted June 14, 2011 Worse? Be afraid. Be very afraid Well, you get what you want. River and Silver meet up in the next chapter. Sooooo many things that could go wrong with that. I mean... he's wearing his lover's ring after all River and Asher... Oooooooh. SWEET
Anya Posted June 14, 2011 Posted June 14, 2011 Worse as in angsty and emotional Shhh you tease! I don't want to read it lol. I want to slap Silver =D I just want River and Silver to be together already
Nephylim Posted June 14, 2011 Author Posted June 14, 2011 I want to slap Silver too... and I want him to slap me back
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