C James Posted September 20, 2011 Posted September 20, 2011 Running the Gauntlet is up. I added some maps, placed inline, because it's hard to understand where they are at without them. And BTW, though it might look like it, no, I didn't make up any of the place names. (such as an island mentioned). :-) 1
MartyS Posted September 20, 2011 Posted September 20, 2011 I think this was one of the most gripping chapters appearing so far in the story. There is one thing I am looking forward to reading. That is when Constable Chris Kaminski meets Trevor for the first time in a future chapter.
Red_A Posted September 20, 2011 Posted September 20, 2011 Having been brought up on a beach, and I could swim before I could walk to the water’s edge, water and the sea have not held any fear for me. But, the water earth air interface is what hold all the problems. Harbour entrances, and river mouths are a nightmare. This is probably especially so because I have been there too many times. The worst one was when we had made Ostend Harbour before the storm, and tied up in the Yacht Club harbour. The waves in the entrance had increase from the slow rolling 5 feet waves of an Ostend Calm to sharp 30 foot waves. And the lights showed three reds (no entrance, no entrance at all, no entrance, that means you). The conditions in the harbour were the worst I have ever experience. We wore thru several mooring lines that night.. All river and harbour entrances are different, this is the best example but different “entrance video” I can find. It should give you an idea of what Murchison River Mouth, Kalbarri is like. 2
MartyS Posted September 20, 2011 Posted September 20, 2011 Having been brought up on a beach, and I could swim before I could walk to the water’s edge, water and the sea have not held any fear for me. But, the water earth air interface is what hold all the problems. Harbour entrances, and river mouths are a nightmare. This is probably especially so because I have been there too many times. The worst one was when we had made Ostend Harbour before the storm, and tied up in the Yacht Club harbour. The waves in the entrance had increase from the slow rolling 5 feet waves of an Ostend Calm to sharp 30 foot waves. And the lights showed three reds (no entrance, no entrance at all, no entrance, that means you). The conditions in the harbour were the worst I have ever experience. We wore thru several mooring lines that night.. All river and harbour entrances are different, this is the best example but different “entrance video” I can find. It should give you an idea of what Murchison River Mouth, Kalbarri is like. Wow!!!!!!!!!!! The Captains' Prayer Oh Lord the sea is so big, And my boat is so small. Amen
Daddydavek Posted September 20, 2011 Posted September 20, 2011 (edited) Interesting video. I read a piece a few days ago which said that the most dangerous job was not being a policeman or fireman, but being a fisherman. I can believe it. Of course I have read Moby Dick as well as lots of the Hornblower series by Forester, but that was decades ago. I also saw the movie Master and Comander. I think CJ did a good job describing the river entry through the swells and breakers as well as the night navigation of the river. Like I said in my review of the chapter, I am sure I would have heaved, had I undergone such a journey. Edited September 20, 2011 by Daddydavek
Benji Posted September 20, 2011 Posted September 20, 2011 ............ Bridget's silent partner is so silent, he almost doesn't exist. So Trevor is the owner of both the Atlantis and the Aries! How interesting, that would explain Dirks question about Trevor with the attorney Frank. That video made the crossing Trevor and Shane accomplished look unreal, especially in the dark. So Shane and Trevor are going to be taken off the Kookaburra for a bit, I guess they going to see more sights inland then they intended. I imagine Constable Kaminski, will have an interesting talk with Trevor and Shane. ... Goat Island? How lucky can an author get! Great chapter CJ! 1
Daddydavek Posted September 21, 2011 Posted September 21, 2011 He claimed he didn't make the name up, but he must of scoured the Western Australian geography for months to come up with a goat island! Of course they couldn't hide behind it and had to journey further upstream because no one could ever successfully hide behind a goat! (Why do I feel a head butt coming on?)
C James Posted September 21, 2011 Author Posted September 21, 2011 I think this was one of the most gripping chapters appearing so far in the story. There is one thing I am looking forward to reading. That is when Constable Chris Kaminski meets Trevor for the first time in a future chapter. They did well to sneak in right under his nose. BTW, if anyone thinks I took liberties with the tide, river flow, and weather conditions, I didn't. Those wee the actual conditions that day (Dec 7, 2006) in Kalbarri. The Murchison had a high flow that year, due to a major storm inland a few months prior. For those with Google Earth, you can see the differences in river flow between years by using the time feature to look at older satellite images. As for the rain; that was the only day in December 2006 that it rained in Kalbarri. Having been brought up on a beach, and I could swim before I could walk to the water’s edge, water and the sea have not held any fear for me. But, the water earth air interface is what hold all the problems. Harbour entrances, and river mouths are a nightmare. This is probably especially so because I have been there too many times. The worst one was when we had made Ostend Harbour before the storm, and tied up in the Yacht Club harbour. The waves in the entrance had increase from the slow rolling 5 feet waves of an Ostend Calm to sharp 30 foot waves. And the lights showed three reds (no entrance, no entrance at all, no entrance, that means you). The conditions in the harbour were the worst I have ever experience. We wore thru several mooring lines that night.. All river and harbour entrances are different, this is the best example but different “entrance video” I can find. It should give you an idea of what Murchison River Mouth, Kalbarri is like. Thanks Red! Yep, I've been in a few river mouths, and those with bars (shallows across the mouth) are tricky. The Columbia Bar at the mouth of the Columbia River between Oregon and Washington is notorious, and I was just a passenger, hanging on with white knuckles. Interesting video. I read a piece a few days ago which said that the most dangerous job was not being a policeman or fireman, but being a fisherman. I can believe it. Of course I have read Moby Dick as well as lots of the Hornblower series by Forester, but that was decades ago. I also saw the movie Master and Comander. I think CJ did a good job describing the river entry through the swells and breakers as well as the night navigation of the river. Like I said in my review of the chapter, I am sure I would have heaved, had I undergone such a journey. Red A helped me a lot with this chapter, he's a real pro. ............ Bridget's silent partner is so silent, he almost doesn't exist. So Trevor is the owner of both the Atlantis and the Aries! How interesting, that would explain Dirks question about Trevor with the attorney Frank. That video made the crossing Trevor and Shane accomplished look unreal, especially in the dark. So Shane and Trevor are going to be taken off the Kookaburra for a bit, I guess they going to see more sights inland then they intended. I imagine Constable Kaminski, will have an interesting talk with Trevor and Shane. ... Goat Island? How lucky can an author get! Great chapter CJ! Trying that river mouth at night was risky... trying it in a storm was worse. If Trevor was a regular there it might have been safer, but he was literally running blind and depending on instruments a lot. He claimed he didn't make the name up, but he must of scoured the Western Australian geography for months to come up with a goat island! Of course they couldn't hide behind it and had to journey further upstream because no one could ever successfully hide behind a goat! (Why do I feel a head butt coming on?) Heh, it was actually dumb luck. I';d already picked Kalbarri. It's basically the only navigable river on that coast, and also the only port or anchorage in the area (there's nothing between there and Shark Bay). An Australian freind sent me the map below that shows the names well.
MartyS Posted September 21, 2011 Posted September 21, 2011 I wonder if Greg has planned to have the boys take a canoe safari? If they do go away from Kookaburra for an extended period, I would think it highly advisable, to have an armed law enforcement officer, check the boat prior to their return.
Low Flyer Posted September 22, 2011 Posted September 22, 2011 Heh, it was actually dumb luck. I';d already picked Kalbarri. It's basically the only navigable river on that coast, and also the only port or anchorage in the area (there's nothing between there and Shark Bay). A fact not lost, presumably, on Basingstoke?
C James Posted September 24, 2011 Author Posted September 24, 2011 Basingstoke? He's not really a worry for Trevor and Shane, at all.
C James Posted September 25, 2011 Author Posted September 25, 2011 Forgot to add the title of the next chapter; It's "What goes Up...."
MartyS Posted September 25, 2011 Posted September 25, 2011 Basingstoke? He's not really a worry for Trevor and Shane, at all. This post, by The Goat, should be considered very carefully IMHO. First he appears to remove Trevor and Shane from the threat created by the mission Basingstoke has undertaken. However, CHJ qualifies the statement by inserting the word, "really." I will consider this to be true only when the Hitman has been permanently removed from the storyline.
MartyS Posted September 25, 2011 Posted September 25, 2011 (edited) Hmmmmmmmmm I wonder, Is the Goat planning on a XXX Rated chapter. With the Chapter Title itself close to a printed phallic symbol and the very suggestive.......little dots (whatever the hell their called) appearing, "Do you think The Goat might.................. Edited September 25, 2011 by MartyS
C James Posted September 25, 2011 Author Posted September 25, 2011 I can prove that Basingstoke isn't a worry or Trevor and Shane; they don't know he exists, so they aren't worried about him. As for the "what goes up..." chapter title... well, those little dots could mean lots of things. They are called an ellipsis, and can stand for a continuation of the text that's unseen, on sometimes, depending on context, a pause or hesitation in dialog. In this case, it means the second part of a well known phrase is hidden. I've done this before I think.. something like "The best laid plans..." meant "The best laid plans of mice and men". CJ
MartyS Posted September 25, 2011 Posted September 25, 2011 (edited) I can prove that Basingstoke isn't a worry or Trevor and Shane; they don't know he exists, so they aren't worried about him. As for the "what goes up..." chapter title... well, those little dots could mean lots of things. They are called an ellipsis, and can stand for a continuation of the text that's unseen, on sometimes, depending on context, a pause or hesitation in dialog. In this case, it means the second part of a well known phrase is hidden. I've done this before I think.. something like "The best laid plans..." meant "The best laid plans of mice and men". CJ Tch, tch, Tch Leave it to The Goat Leaves off the important part "Gang aft a-gley" Or translated from the Broad Scots dialect Often go astray Edited September 25, 2011 by MartyS
Site Moderator TalonRider Posted September 25, 2011 Site Moderator Posted September 25, 2011 I guess you'll just have to wait until Tuesday to find out.
MartyS Posted September 25, 2011 Posted September 25, 2011 For The Goat, Wee, sleekit, cow'rin', tim'rous beastie, O what a panic's in thy breastie ! Thou need na start awa sae hasty, Wi' bickering brattle ! I wad be laith to rin an' chase thee Wi' murd'ring pattle ! I'm truly sorry man's dominion Has broken Nature's social union, An' justifies that ill opinion Which makes thee startle At me, thy poor earth-born companion, An' fellow-mortal ! I doubt na, whiles, but thou may thieve; What then? poor beastie, thou maun live ! A daimen-icker in a thrave 'S a sma' request: I'll get a blessin' wi' the lave, And never miss't ! Thy wee bit housie, too, in ruin ! Its silly wa's the win's are strewin; And naething, now, to big a new ane, O' foggage green ! An' bleak December's winds ensuin' Baith snell an keen ! Thou saw the fields laid bare an waste An' weary winter comin' fast, An' cozie here, beneath the blast, Thou thought to dwell Till, crash! the cruel coulter past Out thro' thy cell. That wee bit heap o'leaves an' stibble Has cost thee mony a weary nibble ! Now thou's turn'd out, for a' thy trouble, But house or hald, To thole the winter's sleety dribble An' cranreuch cauld ! But, Mousie, thou art no thy lane In proving foresight may be vain: The best laid schemes o' mice an' men Gang aft a-gley, An lea'e us nought but grief an' pain, For promised joy. Still thou are blest, compared wi' me ! The present only toucheth thee; But, Och ! I backward cast my e'e On prospects drear ! An' forward, tho' I canna see, I guess an' fear !
Zombie Posted September 25, 2011 Posted September 25, 2011 (edited) As for the "what goes up..." chapter title... well, those little dots could mean lots of things. They are called an ellipsis, and can stand for a continuation of the text that's unseen, on sometimes, depending on context, a pause or hesitation in dialog. In this case, it means the second part of a well known phrase is hidden. I've done this before I think.. something like "The best laid plans..." meant "The best laid plans of mice and men". CJ Err, so that would be "What goes up ... must come down". And planes, like that nice Mr B's, go up. And then they come down (usually, but not always, in one piece ). Likewise any passengers who ill-advisedly accept a "fright flight" with Mr B. Only, they may not "come down" at the same time, or in the same place, as Mr B's plane ... Edited September 25, 2011 by Zombie
Benji Posted September 25, 2011 Posted September 25, 2011 Err, so that would be "What goes up ... must come down". And planes, like that nice Mr B's, go up. And then they come down (usually, but not always, in one piece ). Likewise any passengers who ill-advisedly accept a "fright flight" with Mr B. Only, they may not "come down" at the same time, or in the same place, as Mr B's plane ... ........... Yep, that was my first thought! Mr. B's plane, with a reluctant passenger. Then I tried to imagine other scenarios involving the Florida cast and came up empty
MartyS Posted September 25, 2011 Posted September 25, 2011 ........... Yep, that was my first thought! Mr. B's plane, with a reluctant passenger. Then I tried to imagine other scenarios involving the Florida cast and came up empty Hi Benji, Like TalonRider says, we will have to wait until, "SOME," Tuesday to find out. BTW, I like your new picture. Are you waiting for a goat to ramble past? Be careful some goats ain't fit to eat. Marty 1
Benji Posted September 26, 2011 Posted September 26, 2011 (edited) Hi Benji, Like TalonRider says, we will have to wait until, "SOME," Tuesday to find out. BTW, I like your new picture. Are you waiting for a goat to ramble past? Be careful some goats ain't fit to eat. Marty ............Actually I hear that goat meat is a great meal to eat!! Edited September 26, 2011 by Benji
MartyS Posted September 26, 2011 Posted September 26, 2011 ............Actually I hear that goat meat is a great meal to eat!! Benji, I didn't say all goat meat, just some is tough and grisley. Definately not pleasant to eat. BTW One thing for sure, with Greg's wife now actually involved in the story (not just baking Key Lime Pies) and Mrs Blake finally making an appearance, it looks like your long time prediction about Rachel will be proved correct in the not too distant future. I am glad you convinced me. Marty
Benji Posted September 26, 2011 Posted September 26, 2011 (edited) Benji, I didn't say all goat meat, just some is tough and grisley. Definately not pleasant to eat. BTW One thing for sure, with Greg's wife now actually involved in the story (not just baking Key Lime Pies) and Mrs Blake finally making an appearance, it looks like your long time prediction about Rachel will be proved correct in the not too distant future. I am glad you convinced me. Marty ................ Like an old sheep, some meat is as you say tough and grisly yet a young sheep is very good, I'd assume the same of a young goat! . Edited September 26, 2011 by Benji
Benji Posted September 26, 2011 Posted September 26, 2011 (edited) ................ Like an old sheep, some meat is as you say tough and grisly yet a young sheep is very good, I'd assume the same of a young goat! , That said, I have always thought the goats inference to the pies, especially the Thanksgiving one were a hint of (Trevor's) his mother. Opps! Sorry for the double post! Edited September 26, 2011 by Benji
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