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  1. Lisa

    Chapter 26

    Well, I hope Clinton is worth it too. I think he is. Corey should't have told Greg what Clinton said about him being worthless (now I forgot if that's what he said, but it doesn't matter); Corey took that totally out of context. He failed to explain to Greg that Clinton was saying that b/c his asshole friend Cj (why is the 'j' not capitalized? I've been meaning to ask you for the whole story! It's driving me nuts! lol), barged into his house and started going on about him. So when Corey said that to Greg, it made it seem like Clinton was really an ass and saying it b/c that's what he really felt. I know Clinton really likes Corey and I hope they can work it out. On the other hand...there's always another hand, Krista! On the other hand, I feel sorry for Greg. He barely admitted to himself he's gay or bi or whatever - he doesn't even know and he comes back to town to I guess apologize to Corey and see if they can start over. Now Corey's "with" Clinton and Greg's trying to understand why, since he thinks Clinton isn't any good for Corey. Greg was actually being nice to Corey and trying to cheer him up. Corey wasn't even trying. But then again, WHO TAKES SOMEONE TO AN ICE SKATING RINK WHEN THEY HAVE NEVER SKATED BEFORE AND THEY HAVE A BROKEN ARM????????? lol That may not have been the smartest thing Greg has ever done! Luckily Corey didn't break anything else.
  2. Lisa

    Errors of Omission

    Reading impunity's review J&K being straight never entered my mind! lol I thought their secret might be that they're not really together. But wow, being straight would put a different spin on the whole long, hot kissing thing. lol
  3. Lisa

    The Show Must Go On

    Too bad those other dancers bailed out. I can see why the crowd got bored with just J&K dancing all the time. Well, at least they have some pocket money. It'll come in handy since they'll have no job to get back to once they're back from the island.
  4. Yep, Addy! Ya left me out to dry!!!! I had to read about it in a forum thread, thank you very much!!!! Lol, you know I'm just busting your chops!
  5. Lisa

    Arguments

    Fantastic chapter, Cassie! I agree w/Adam that he shouldn't hide who he is with Mikeal's family. I agree with Timothy; Mikeal should at least tell his dad over the holiday break. I loved Adam's confession and I am so, so glad Mikeal heard it! I hope he doesn't fall back asleep thinking he dreamt it. lol
  6. Daylight Savings Time is tomorrow??????????
  7. Bonjour Benedicte! That's an awesome job you have there! You get to do what you really love all day long! Welcome to GA!
  8. Lisa

    Chapter 1

    Jeez, I read this twice and I still cried. Damn you. lol This was such a beautiful story, Cassie. It was so imaginative, creative, with wonderful descriptions and strong characters. It was a truly captivating tale.
  9. Lisa

    Surfer Strip Show

    I can't wait to read about the strip show. Unfortunately I think George is going to interfere and maybe cause a scene. Either way, I think Keither and Jansen should look for another club to dance at. I'm glad the General had a chance to out-smart and out-maneuver Felecia. That'll teach her to mess with an American General! So there! lol Ok, on the the next installment...
  10. Just get J & C back together and I'll be a happy camper!!!!! =)
  11. Tomas, your location suggests you're in Neverland also. lol Hey, I have a question for you that has nothing to do with Mardi Gras but it has to do with New Orleans. How safe is New Orleans for a bunch of college boys? Are there better parts of the city they should gravitate towards and other parts they need to stay away from? I'm only asking b/c you seemed pretty educated on Mardi Gras. Thanks!
  12. Congrats Stellar!
  13. Lisa

    Quest

    Wow, so much info to take in! =) I'm glad Yadrey's stage of grief is now at the anger stage. I hope he finds Waldron and guts him alive! lol The end confused me a little with the elves and Cai. I hope they don't hurt him any more than he is already hurt. Taranis will have a fit! Oh, I noticed a word in one of the sentences three-quarters of the way down. This was when Yadrey went to the smith's shop and found Nevron and Sunron but they couldn't see him. It was written: "'Hey lads, where's Waldron?"...They didn't look up or pause in their labors. It was like they could hear him.' Shouldn't it have been written: '...It was like they could not hear him.'? Terrific chapter, Cole. I'm really getting into this story! Now I read Addy's chapter and your chapter. Can't wait for Jo Ann's!
  14. Lisa

    Chapter 3

    Well, none of your other reviewers complained about having to go out and buy a new computer. This reviewer did. My screen just combusted from all the heat in your chapter! I hope you're happy, Adam! I'll send you my bill. I think I want a Mac... Seriously though - I think it's the tender scenes that will eventually get to Jeff. Also knowing that Fitz wasn't looking at their encounter as a one-night stand. And bt dubs: I never thought you had too much erotica in Crosscurrents. To tell you the truth, so many of those scenes (all with Matt and one with, shit, I forgot his name. I'll get to him in a minute), were so tender and beautiful that even I fell in love with the participants. There was a scene after Andy had told his teammates what he would do with them but they would have to do the same thing back to him. Anyway I forget the guy's name, but the one scene where they promised each other they wouldn't fall in love and then they went to breakfast after and agreed they weren't in love. Well hell, shit, I was in love, dammit!!!! I wish I remembered the guy's name. Something with a 'D' maybe...anyway, he guy had never been with another guy before and it was just so beautiful and tender and romantic, not just like a wham-bam-thank-you-ma'am (or mister), type of thing. So I totally disagree with that other reader. The sex scenes in Crosscurrents should go down in history. Man, even when Andy met that one guy, shit, I forgot his name, but I fell in love with hm also! He transferred to another school or something and left Andy heartbroken. Andy was in love with him too, dammit! lol So yeah, don't listen to those naysayers, Adam, stick with what you're doing. Your scenes are so tender and sweet and loving and that's why us girls love 'em! lol hehe Ok, so, yeah, great chapter, Adam! Keep it up! hehe, so to speak...
  15. Lisa

    Rumors and Secrets

    And I cried a second time reading about Taranis' mom's death and how she saved one of her sons from her husband's insanity. I have read a few stories about kings and when they're ready to step down from the throne they hold fights in the arena - fights which include his children, male and female. The brothers and sisters fight to the death to see who will be the next King or Queen. I think it's sick and barbaric. No wonder the father went mad (as in crazy, loco, not angry, lol), especially after he killed his own kin. Sick. As you can tell, Addy, I really loved this chapter! lol
  16. Oh no, I already have a bad feeling about this island. Lol I was cracking up when the boys were reading about the disasters there. Of course no one knows The Scar is back & he thinks they are helping the general. Another great chapter, CJ!
  17. Man, I gotta get their new CD! They're coming to Jersey in August and I was begging my thirteen-year-old niece to take me with her! lol
  18. Lisa

    Chapter 8

    Move over, LadyDe, I found him first! lol "Mom, quit crying all over Marcus; that's my job..." Ha, that was funny! Thank God Tony was able to react and kick Daniel 'where the sun don't shine'. What a douchebag. I can't imagine how terrifying that was for Tony. So how long has Sam been doing photography? Hmm, maybe I should take it up....lol He did a great job with the pictures. And Marcus...man, he knows about EVERYTHING! Gotta get me a clone, gotta get me a clone... I pass Hampton Beach driving to and from UNH in Durham. Maybe one day I'll get to stop there; it sounds like a great place. =)
  19. Loved the chapter, Renee! I think it was a perfect time for the "I love you's"! Of course they love each other- it's so obvious! I totally agree with Suvitar; Trey's parents will be over the moon if Trey goes to school close by and I think they will be thankful for Mark for suggesting it. =)
  20. Lisa

    Prologue

    Yes, definitely nice pictures, Zandra! I feel badly for Seth - his life certainly does not seem easy. Especially with a father like that.
  21. I haven't read his "New Kid...." story or "A Class by Himself" b/c when I came on here I think the stories were like 1,000 chaptes deep, so yeah, I'd be reading them to this day and STILL not have caught up! lol One day, one day... When I finally realized the story was a fan fic, I had to Google all those guys. I even listened to a few songs of Greyson's and I admit, they're pretty good. But then again, I'm a big One Direction fan. lol Which is why my kid calls me a dork.
  22. Ha, Comicality is writing a story about him. "Waiting Outside the Lines". And being the dork I am, I didn't realize it was fan-fiction until I was more than halfway into the story. lol
  23. Lisa

    Chapter 10

    Wow, "Back to the Future" - those were awesome MJF movies. I think the whole writing of the book was very cathartic for Scott. He was able to get all his feelings down on paper. The therapy session seemed to go really well, and Noah and Scott were even able to go for coffee afterwards and talk about the book. Their light banter back and forth was pleasant also. I'm rooting for these two. I hope the therapy session goes well with Zach. Another awesome chapter, Fitz! Hey, I hope you enjoyed your birthday!!! I sent you b-day greetings.
  24. Lisa

    Prelude to Battle

    Shit, I can't believe General Bradson met Clump and he never recognized him! Well of course he didn't! At least he's a little wary b/c he thinks The Scar was lying about the plane crash. Now The Scar's going to find the pictures Bradson took of Eric. Not good, not good at all.
  25. Lisa

    Falling to Earth

    I can just see it now: Eric sleeps through the rest of what he had to do, plus he misses his flight. lol But on a good note, he didn't drink any tequila.
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