Lisa

Awww, Addy, Daddy, Mann, Ron, Sacred, Slytherin, and Suvitar, thank you so much!!!! It's so nice of you guys for thinking of me. =)

Thank you, Addy! I'll talk to you later this morning and tell you about my crazy weekend.

Fantastic chapter, jadore! I love Alex! I was a little wary once things started to heat up and he wasn't listening to Joe, but thankfully he stopped. I wonder why Justin didn't mail Joe's phone back to him...I can't remember from the first chapter - Justin knows Joe left it, right? I really love this story! Can't wait for chapter three! Keep 'em coming! =)

Ah, so glad the previous chapter wasn't the last! lol I'm still trying to figure David out. Is he bi? Is he just experimenting? Is he going to break Dan's heart? I thought it was so obvious that Chris was jealous, but I didn't realize he liked David that much. I feel badly for him. I want him to find his own David so he and Dan can both be happy.

What a beautiful chapter, James. Luce's parents and Charlie's parents are one in a million. Not many kids would be able to say the same thing. I absolutely love this story, but more importantly, I'm learning from it. Terrific chapter, James!

I love your new story, Cole! I'm intrigued by Danny and Cayden. I'm also very curious about this accident that happened eight months ago. First I thought that maybe it was Brian that was hurt and Danny took care of him, but then it was mentioned that Brian sings and changes lyrics for Danny and that didn't sound like someone who was hurt in an accident. Unless it was his mental capabilities... Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Glad to see that Corey's dad suffered some humility with mom. I hope SHE'S the one wearing the pants in the family! lol How sad it must have been for Corey to see his mom (could care less about his father's comfort), having that small room for a bedroom with not even a closet. What a good mom. And she made the father help her put together Corey's room. I'm glad to see C&C getting closer. (yup, love those 'C' names. What happened with Lee, Trouble, and Jenny? lol You're slacking, Krista! lol J/K Hopefully when that prick Cj comes back, Clinton won't all of a sudden pretend he doesn't even know Corey. I think that would really kill Corey. Excellent chapter, Krista! Hopefully the next one will within the next four months or sooner...?

If Ray was living at the Collins' for two years, then why hadn't he ever met Andrew's parents and brother? Or Camilla's sister, Melinda? (my sister's name too. lol) Does that mean Camilla and Andrew haven't seen their family in two years? I know Ray is going to LA to be on Idol, but why would he think that the Collins' would just kick him out on his birthday? I mean, if I were a foster parent, and everything had been working out great for the past two years, I wouldn't kick the kid out. If he's not going to college, then he could find a job and pay a little towards food and such and still stay at the house. I'd never kick him out. Ray just assumes these things w/o even discussing it with his foster parents. I'm sure they don't want him leaving. I know Ryan doesn't want him leaving. Too bad he can't take Ryan with him to LA.

Jeezus, Jaemin is wacko!!!!! Miracle will never forgive him if he ever finds out what he did! Sterling isn't dead too, is he? He's just knocked out from the drug, right? But Jaemin didn't turn Sterling's car on and like push it to get it going, thinking that the car would crash into something, like Melanie's car? Shit, he is crazy. And Jasmine - she was much better off taking food orders for the group. She is just on a path of self-destruction, no thanks to them. I can't believe all the bad shit that has happened just in the last few chapters. Shit, Melanie was Miracle's best friend. He's going to be mourning her as well as Sarah.

In your response to the first review and the second review: then write, write, and write! You can update as often as you'd like, Sasha - you certainly don't have to wait a whole entire seven days!!!! Think of your poor readers, sitting here, hitting the refresh button every ten minutes! lol Ok, maybe that's just me who does that... I also like the fact that Luke can be out and no one cares. Hopefully soon Erin will find that he won't have anything to worry about either. Oh, I found a picture of Jameson Parker I wanted to show you. He was a pretty boy back in the day. =)

Well, now I can pretty much figure out what happened with Scott, despite his promise that he wouldn't run away. The bastard. I really enjoyed the conversation about the Porsche though! It was nice that they were able to be light-hearted at least for that short time. As I was reading this chapter I was questioning why Scott was acting so volatile when Noah told him he went to adjust his classes. I was trying to remember how Scott was in the first story. I understand why he would be upset that Noah didn't talk to him first about it and why Noah decided to do it in the first place, but it was really not necessary for him to go ballistic like that. It's no wonder Noah didn't feel comfortable telling him. This story is more riveting than the first story and all I want to do is continue reading it...hopefully the next chapter is in the works...

Damn, I forgot to add in my review for chapter four that Noah and Scott were so excited to buy Charles' house and Noah got to putter around doing small projects like fixing leaking faucets. I'll tell you, if I bought a house for almost 1.5 mil, the faucets better be made out of gold and they better not be leaking!!!! lol

This sentence was at the beginning of the chapter and I wanted to know if it was written this way on purpose: '...but I had already had my heart broken by a great guy, and not long before Mike came on the scene.' Not long BEFORE, or not long AFTER? Did Noah meet Mike BEFORE Scott left? Did that contribute to him leaving? After I found out about Mia (so, so sad, for Noah as well as for Zach, and of course Scott also), I was thinking that maybe Scott couldn't handle all of this and he just took Mia and left. Needless to say, it broke my heart when Zach finally confessed to Noah that he was afraid of his friends leaving him. I understand Scott having problems, but he was selfish, so, so selfish. Was he even thinking about Noah and Zach at all? Did he not remember his promise never to leave them? And no note, nothing? How can he do that?????? Ok, I gotta go on to chapter five.

WTF just happened? Where's Elliot? Why was Keith drunk? Is there an epilogue so we know what happened?

Another tearjerker chapter, but these were happy tears. lol Thank God Elliot's back! What an awesome way to show Keith too - what a great idea Hayden had!

So glad Cody's dead! Finally, as story where 'what goes around, comes around' is true. I think it's terrific how everyone is eager to be friends with Luka and Luka is opening himself up to their friendship. I look forward to the next chapter. For some reason, I thought CJ was going with Danny, Dylan, and Jesse...

Omg, small world or what??? And I don't buy Melanie's explanation about her father at all. lol I think she's playing Jaemin. She wants all the money,the estate, etc. all to herself; she doesn't want to share shit with Jaemin, brother or not. lol She's a master manipulator and she just played Jaemin right there with her bullshit story. At least that's the way I see it. =) But...did Paula say that Melanie and Jaemin's father were one and the same? I don't remember...maybe they have different fathers? Interesting to hear about Martha. She always seemed pretty sweet to me. Wow, what an actress. lol

Between Jasper's words to Elliot and Keith's words to the comatose Elliot, I don't know whose words are more heartfelt. Jasper words really touch me though. I also agree with Jo Ann; the imagery of the ink black river and the half bridge where Keith is waiting on the other side, was really beautiful. Another Kleenex moment. lol

Well it's about friggen' time, Danny! lol J/K But they have been best friends for the past three years so it's not like they just met. I wonder when Danny will feel comfortable enough to say those three little words to Jake.

I have to say, I am really proud of Andy. I honestly thought he would take advantage of the fact that he had Randy all to himself and they'd be going at it like rabbits. lol And Randy sure surprised me b/c he really was acting like an ass. I felt badly for Thomas. Another great chapter, Elias!

Wow, jadore, what a fantastic story! I'm dying to read more, I hope this isn't the end????? I haven't read all that much fan fiction, but being a groupie for four years while in college, I know how Joe felt at the concert and even before, when he realized he bumped into Justin Bieber! lol See, I was right! It was a picture of Justin Bieber in your gallery pics! lol Boy, what a buzz kill that Shayna (is that the way it's spelled?), is! I mean, I know exactly what's she's trying to say, but jeez, she could have said it nicer! Poor Joe...I really hope there's more to the story - I'm addicted!

Hmmm, I just remembered, I have a bff like Jackie - pain in my you-know-what, but she means well. lol I'm glad Jackie planned on apologizing to Mark. I know it's a weight both of them carried around since that dinner at Jackie's. Great chapter, Renee!

Holy shit, Trevor! I can't believe you killed Sarah!!! She was such a good person! But it took Sarah's death to "change" Melanie. Is Melanie going to be nice and sweet from now on? Or will it only last a little while until she gets tired of it? That slime Eric. He got away and we still don't know how he knows of Brad's family or what the letter said. Shit. Now I'm on pins and needles. lol Great chapter, Trevor!

Eric from Australia! I remember him! What the heck is he doing in the city? And what does he know about Brad's family? Hmm, the plot thickens. I actually like the Sterling/Jaemin "friendship". I think that will work out, especially since Jae now knows that Sterling isn't after Miracle. Ok, on to the next chapter!

Omg, I could feel Mikeal's jealousy radiating through the computer screen. That brought me back. Oh how I know that feeling. it's so horrible. Thank God his jealousy was for nothing. "My sister is neither a bimbo or a bitch." (Ok, I'm paraphrasing, but it was funny!) "Sister?" lol Great "make-up" scene! This is such a great story, Cassie. I love how you describe things. Not the cigarettes though. "Sweet, smoky smell" Sweet? Cigarettes? lol Not the word I would use. As always, your chapters leave me wanting more. =)