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    Chapter 3

    drsawzall commented on Albert1434's story chapter in Chapter 3

    Like everyone else, I am loving the slow burn as Julian becomes accepted by the crew, most importantly, Sam...However...if the cook doesn't come with him all bet are off... What I see developing is that this ship and crew will somehow be instrumental to Julian as he builds his business on the islands....
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    Chapter 16

    drsawzall commented on andy cannon's story chapter in Chapter 16

    I wonder if herein lies the key... Until now, he had assumed each memory was a fragment of a life moving towards its inevitable conclusion. Now he was no longer certain. That knowledge frightened him almost as much as the memory itself. For the first time Christopher realised that not every memory hurt because it ended. Some hurt because, for a little while, they had been happy.
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    Chapter 11

    drsawzall commented on Mark Paren's story chapter in Chapter 11

    Petronus is an ass, his barely disguised lust/affection for Marcus is troublesome....He harbors grudges real and imagined....
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    Huh????
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    Wow... lying through my teeth and yet, to date, no one has even come close... well, there was one tickling the ivories...
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    Just where were the fingers??? Hummm?
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    The Mad House

    drsawzall commented on Richie Tennyson's story chapter in The Mad House

    And...down the rabbit hole we go...talk about the Mad Hatter's tea party....
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    Chapter 27

    drsawzall commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 27

    Esca has no idea of the hell he just unleashed....
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    Loved how seamlessly this chapter evolved. I do have a question: in what context was "being pushed against one of the pigs" used?
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    My cup runneth over with luck of the draw.... Or maybe not; good thing you folks can't see my lying face...
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    SSSShhhhhhh, it's a state secret.....
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    There's a danger here that has gone unmentioned...According to urban legends, those who aren't flatulent have a greater preponderance of crappy ideas... as we see in the highest levels of governments all over the world...
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    Chapter 24

    drsawzall commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 24

    Or...more often or not? Remembering that no one is perfect, I'd give Levi a pass as 85 tp 90% is so much frigging better than Casey's constantly being 100& Grade A, A..hole
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    Chapter 24

    drsawzall commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 24

    Casey, for the lack of better words, is the exact opposite of Levi; where Levi operates from a set of principles based on the good book, Casey is the devil's apprentice...We have light vs. dark here...
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    It's getting to be like... Or maybe not...
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    How did I miss this update again...oh...lying through my teeth and denying any sort of involvement in the Secret Author contest, even if I was listed as one.... That's my story, and I'm sticking to it!!! As to what my friends and I call each other, Google-Adsense wouldn't like it very much, nor any of the 42 words we use....
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    So far.....so good.....
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    Oh, this is going to get messy, is Orion working for Nos's mother?? And Orion is becoming tiresome....perhaps a hut in the Mojave Desert....
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    Chapter 20

    drsawzall commented on Enoch's story chapter in Chapter 20

    Then again, one needs permission if the property is privately owned, even if rented for events. Needless to say, just loving this story!!
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    Well...this interlude was anything but calm or quiet, and Runyan certainly proved to be a capable asset...If those two boys make it to the grandfathers, here's hoping the uncle had expired on the trail somewhere...it would be interesting to see them again. Now will the uncle come across them and not cause any trouble, best have one hand on the pistol when he's spotted... Where in the heck is Willy James, ahead or behind??? It may not have been an actual cliffhanger, but it was almost a trailside hanger.... Is it next Monday yet?
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    Chapter 20

    drsawzall commented on Enoch's story chapter in Chapter 20

    Thank you for this update, a fantastic chapter that had me glued to the computer....the tension was on par and had me nervously reading...well done !! Now, the man with the phone, while he was supposedly fiddling with is, was he taking pictures? Robert and Firestone should have asked to see his photo gallery...
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    Or maybe I am...
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    All I can say is no one has guessed correctly for my entry, looks like I am still in the witness protection program...
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