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    Chapter 10

    Marcus acquitted himself very well….Ingomar is having doubts and an epiphany…first contact may have been more a probe for supplies. Running into two patrol’s wasn’t part of the overall plan…I would not be surprised if a larger ambush is coming… I still don’t trust Arminius….
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    Debate

    Get Marcus to the puberty doctor…..pronto
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    Chapter 23

    Brilliant chapter…please share whatever it is other than coffee that creates such insanity….
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    Chapter 22

    Never ever underestimate preteen werewolves on a mission… I have conducted a preliminary surveillance assessment of Esca Tyrell’s glass fortress. The compound utilizes a state-of-the-art, billion-dollar biometric security grid, motion-sensing lasers, and infrared cameras. It is designed to keep out elder vampires and corporate espionage teams. It is entirely inadequate against a twelve-year-old with a spool of heavy-gauge wire and a Swiss Army knife.
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    Chapter 21

    Well Bartholomew and Andy are full of surprises …And whats not to like about a scout troop full of werewolves sharpening their stakes…
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    Big & Oaf

    Just loving this story and the slow pace, can’t wait to see Neil’s exhibition!
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    Multitasking

    Quite frankly, you had me with the beef ragu and pasta...ooops...my pants fell down... Nico cleared the plates. He did it efficiently, two trips, stacking with kitchen economy. On the second trip back to the table he did not sit down again. He stopped behind Henry's chair and bent low, lips brushing the back of his neck, just above the collar. "Table is done," Nico said quietly. "We are not."
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    Veridien Boys

    humm Since Steffy was busy now serving other clients, Lawrence continued his work on the sketch. It wasn’t half-bad, and now that he looked at it, the details slowly filtering away from his mind to remain on paper, he realized that there was a certain pattern on the sole of the boot he hadn’t stopped to analyze. He’d been too careful not to let the photographic memory slip away. Then there's the drunk, middle-aged man in good clothes, known for waiting for a letter that never comes, and now we have the Knights Templar, royal curses, royal children who supposedly died, those who did, and extinct bloodlines that aren't extinct... Sounds easy don't it? I believe Bastien is the heir to all of this and more, as supposedly extinct royal blood courses through his veins... That's my story, and I'm sticking to it, until I am proven embarrassingly wrong. 🤔 And....Who's the chauffeur who was giving the boys to the disco??? Anyone check his boots?
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    Chapter 24

    It is bound to happen that someone will let it slip that both Levi and the car were at the bonfire... leading to...
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    Chapter 23

    All I got is...
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    Chapter 24

    From his dreams earlier about the tower, his steps have been leading to this. Now...how does Darren get to the tower, through a dreamscape, and what of the one who bound his power to the Deathbringer? Where will they be?
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    Chapter 1

    Hope you have a fan or two, no @weinerdog I meant the kind that blows...air on you... I'll be across the pond in November, hoping cooler weather hits by then... Loved this Thursday short!!
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    Chapter 10

    Both are very strong, and valid points....
  14. Now...if he were to be a doctor, one has to wonder what his medical specialty would be???? One million worthless bonus points for the first correct answer...
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    Chapter 7

    Dang it...and here I was hoping for a meteor hitting that mud puddle I mentioned in the last chapter... Seriously tho, well done and enjoyable!!
  16. The snippet below informs me that the god fearing wann-be christians have crossed several legal lines, with serious consequences. While not conversant in Australian law, it is based on the common shared English principles, and I'd throw the F'cking book at them... Liam kept a protective and reassuring arm around Mark as he talked. “They even started harassing the company Mark worked for and accused the company of all sorts of things just because Mark worked there. In the end it got too much, and that's when Mark decided he had to move away from Adelaide. He moved to Sydney. His company was supportive and helped him find a job here. He's been staying with his aunt. She’s Mark’s mother’s sister and she has never been associated with the church, so she was OK for Mark to stay with her. But somehow the church found out and now his aunt is getting abusive, harassing and even threatening calls and messages.” The following is not far off the mark, and it is very concerning For those who wonder how something like this could happen...the following link will give you pause.... Warren Jeffs - Wikipedia
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    Chapter 5

    Time to do some quiet investigating, hire a lawyer, and why do I suspect the news won't be good and both boys do a runner???
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    Chapter 5

    With this author...it's gonna take some time, like not tomorrow, the day after, not the week after with so many chapters remaining...
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    Ghost of a friend

    Such interesting creatures we humans are, the ability to create or cause pain in others we can't see or feel...They say time heals all wounds; some will take a lifetime. Be well my friend.
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    Chapter 10

    From the Prologue...And out of curiosity, what exists now at the location of the modest stone hall mentioned below? Along the shore stood clustered cottages with smoke drifting from their chimneys. Nearby lay a small market square where nets and barrels were stacked, and beyond it a modest stone hall that served as both meeting place and refuge when storms came down from the headlands. While it may not have anything to do with anything, it just stuck out in my mind.
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    Chapter 10

    One might say it was a sharp and pointed day...
  22. What better way to script an ignominious end than to land face down in a pile of horsecrap... I've often thought that shining a light on ignorance and stupidity is one of the best ways to combat it, especially when asking those who spout such drivel to ask them to intellingently cite their sources. Or, as Jack Webb would say in the old TV show Dragnet, "just the facts, ma'am, just the facts, ma'am".... When found to be spouting nonsense, humor, laughter is a disinfectant par none....
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    Chapter 1

    In January of 1848, gold was discovered at Sutter's Mill south of San Francisco. By April of that year, word had gotten out, causing a stampede west of inconceivable numbers. Fortunes were made and lost in supplying those with gold fever. Many businesses went belly up while a few succeeded. Yet in Hawaiʻi, fortunes await to be made by those who grasp how the island's economy runs... This should be very interesting...
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    Chapter 9

    How many of these lives will he remember??? Will they learn something to break the cycle?
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    Chapter 9

    Settling in has become part of a routine that has yet to form into something that can be identified....Marcus learns that everyone says things with words they don't believe
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