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Here I have to disagree with Shakespeare as to parting is such sweet sorrow....Part of me hopes that there is a path forward for the two of them....Hopefully, and most likely futilely, there are several chapters left. Would either of them ever fully be welcomed on either side of the river?
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This was the Christmas that both boys needed, along with the gift of the picture of the four of them at the restaurant labeled 'Family" had me reaching for my 'hay fever' tissues .... Later, when the worst of the heat had eased and most of the adults had drifted into the backyard with cold drinks, Jamie found Levi in the hallway. ‘This is the best Christmas I’ve ever had,’ Jamie said, very quietly, as if saying it too loud might break it. Levi didn’t try for anything clever. He just pulled the younger boy into a brief, firm hug. ‘Good,’ he said. ‘I think that’s the whole idea. And it’s the best Christmas I’ve ever had as well.’ I must have missed it, or at my state of age and decrepitude, what is the significance of the fuzzy die? Like others, Casey's disappearance is very troubling. He's a known sexual predator, a behavior that leads to unfulfilled desires and unfinished business...that his two cohorts seem to be troubled is equally bothersome...Perhaps the cricket bat should be a constant companion following the two boys... Other than that @Summerabbacat, how do you truly feel???
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I have to agree with the comments above, tho I suspect in a former life stingy jack was a lawyer... "I sent nothing that was not already within my gift to send," said he, and here his smile widened, though it touched nothing of warmth in doing so. "I promised you a companion, Jack, and a companion I gave you, freely and entire, exactly as you asked it. What he did with the gift once given was his own affair, and none of mine. I am a scrupulous man in the matter of my own word. You will find no fault in the letter of it, search as long as you please."
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Chapter 14: The Alternate Timeline Episode
drsawzall commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 14: The Alternate Timeline Episode
Is the alternate Guy actually gone???? -
Well...I was gonna post 14 stories for the anthology, and then...I woke up....
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I understand I may have been a bit harsh in my comment last week, and while I would like to blame it on sheer stupidity, which is usually the case with me. Having gotten back from a wonderful vacation and then a plane ride from hell, filled with tiny, crawling germ factories, I had a head cold from hell. It's been nearly 10 years. Along with the news that one of my closest friends since 1969 is losing a 5-year battle with lung cancer. I'm not using these as excuses; I know better than to temper my reactions in my comments. Yes, I can be harsh, but I try to be fair, and in the case of my comment last week, I totally missed the mark. For that, I can only offer the author my... What does Mia Culpa mean? If you’re in the habit of saying mia culpa or mia copa, I’ll say you may have been led astray. The correct phrase to use is always mea culpa in response to being shown your mistake. While mia might work if you’re speaking Italian and referring to my something, it’s not how the Romans owned up to their oopsie. I'm, along with the jury in my head, still processing these last two chapters, and will have a comment with the next. And for all of you smart asses folks out there who are wondering, yes...I still remember when dinosaurs roamed the streets of our neighborhood.
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Chapter 32 ~ Echoes in the Mind ~
drsawzall commented on Vcs's story chapter in Chapter 32 ~ Echoes in the Mind ~
JR Ewing was played by a B-list actor whose claim to fame was starring in the television sitcom I Dream of Jeanie. He could have taken the role in Dallas or another sitcom called Waverly Wonders, which cast Joe Namath as the lead when Hagman played JR Ewing. An interesting note: his Mother was Mary Martin, a well-known and respected actress on Broadway...Waverly Wonders did not make it to a second season... This was, like all the others, an excellent chapter, and I feel Little Man is going to have a breakthrough soon!@!! -
Chapter 13: The Command Test Episode
drsawzall commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 13: The Command Test Episode
Your government at work making things better for all of us.... -
Chapter 13: The Command Test Episode
drsawzall commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 13: The Command Test Episode
Still loving this, and when do we see Tweek with the baseball cap??? Hopefully a Red Sox insignia....even tho they sucked last night -
Oh my goodness...there is hope if they both discuss the situations a bit further, at his age Dremakk may think he is out to pasture so to speak, losing a loved companion after so many years can not be easy, but Dremakk should ask himself, what would Varokk want for Dremakk in this situation?
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Gesi Ajai still walks free….that worries me….
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Gesi Ajai, the snake, still walks free, he needs to be carefully watched. The whole process was a masterpiece in unraveling this plot! Cant wait for that snake to meet his just rewards!!
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And that light is in all of us, if we choose to listen… but I will keep searching for the light that never learned how to die
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Our crown prince is putting quite the target on his back, ruffling all those feathers. I expect some quiet resistance.
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And how will Sam feel about this? I like the idea of the decorations; it will be magnificent for the little ones...and that bonus is a life-changing sum of money for everyone...
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Titus mentions the redheaded boy who was shoved to the treeline? I wonder who it was... Was the man watching Marcus, Berulf? Once, in the middle of it, arms crossed, expression unreadable in the shifting light. The man looked away before Marcus could place him, and Marcus let it go, too tired and too full of everything else the night held to wonder long about one still face among so many moving ones. Arminius has arranged a ransom; does Ingormar ride alone or with company? I would guess that, because of the coin involved, there would be more than one escort, or someone following close behind. "You'll ride out alone with a Roman, on your cousin's word alone." Berulf kept his voice low, pitched for Ingomar and no one else, though Marcus was near enough to catch every word. "I was at the fire two nights past. I heard three men from the eastern camp say Arminius won't hold this alliance past the spring thaw. Maybe they're wrong. But you're staking your neck on his word being good a month from now, and I've watched cousins' words come apart faster than that." "Say what you mean, Berulf, or don't say it at all," Ingomar said. "I've said it. You're riding out on his authority. I don't know that it'll still be standing when you ride back.
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I haven't taken all the nails out of the ends of the 2x4s @Summerabbacat and she can stop by anytime!!! Three things surprise me, some not so much, and another pleases me... For all the years Jason and Taylor have known each other, for him to ask Taylor if he was a "fag"...was very eye-opening, and when combined with Taylor's unease he mentioned earlier about the "gay" jokes at lunchtime...Jason is truly coming across as extremely self-centered...Forgive me for using this line again...Jason is like a river a mile wide but an inch or two deep... Cynthia is a star...I have to wonder how far she will go in 'protecting' Taylor and trimming that female dog's nails.... The following shows me Taylor does have testimonials, two of them to be exact, no longer hiding underneath his little friend...Finally, he's showing some 'spark'.... I stopped when I noticed one from Jasonsgurl. I couldn’t figure out why Stephanie would be emailing me. I opened it up, and my face burned with anger when I read it. Jasonsgurl: Your not fooling anyone FAGGOT... Umm, a fine demonstration of her native abilities...and inbred intelligence...should that Your, actually be You're?????? I can't wait for her to take the stand...
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I'm trying to figure out how you truly feel @Summerabbacat....considering how her upper sphincter has teeth, I'd shudder to explore the others....I see her as one of those women/girls with fingernails too long to do anything practical with...
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The interaction with the Queen from the land Bitch showed us her claws...Taylor isn't alone and help is waiting...
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Oh boy, there is a bumpy ride coming up....Taylor has all the evidence his friend is 'straight' having admitted he "did it" with his GF. Perhaps he should be releasing some of those pent-up hormones a bit more frequently, and look to make other friends...and talk to other boys!
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Chapter 11- Nos's Gift
drsawzall commented on BendtedWreath's story chapter in Chapter 11- Nos's Gift
Will Cal and Nos want a child of their own? -
Chapter 12: The Episode With A Real Budget
drsawzall commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 12: The Episode With A Real Budget
From your keyboard to the ears of the gods.... -
Chapter 12: The Episode With A Real Budget
drsawzall commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 12: The Episode With A Real Budget
One hopes they don't jump the shark, à la Fonzie until season 7.... Hate it when this happens... Tweek let out a soft, contented sigh. "Five more minutes, Mom. The warp core is sleepy." -
Like others, the following gives me pause...along with the dog barking and the car driving slowly past the house... They found out that Casey was released on bail later that same week, but nobody saw him around town. It was like he had disappeared from the face of the earth. Levi finally being rid of his inner demons is a good thing, and having his involvement explained. I think our young, very wise-to-the-world police officer is playing an age-old game. Using bits of information to rattle some of the sewer rats. I fear that Casey isn't done with Levi...
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What tangled webs we weave...and don't think things out... or understand the possible consequences...
