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  1. Is it Coradiel's time to die or did Arlo just kill Lillian?
  2. drsawzall

    Steaming ahead

    While I am saddened by the fact this is beginning to wrap up, I find comfort in knowing that there will be so much more to come!!! @Summerabbacat, it was 39 degrees F this morning, and yesterday was the first day of meteorological summer here. Supposedly, we will see temps in the 80's and 90's F this week. This Saturday past was the 12th Saturday in a row that it rained.... I am hoping today to get my garden planted...fingers crossed!!
  3. Will the Mermonster even let her on board?
  4. All I got is...
  5. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Could it be... Then, a vibration. Subtle at first, a tremor through the floorboards, growing into a low, guttural rumble that made the glass in the window pane hum. Bob straightened, his daydreams scattering like tumbleweeds, ears pricked. This wasn't the whine of a semi or the polite purr of a family sedan. This was something raw, something with teeth. The sound swelled, a deep-chested, throbbing roar that seemed to shake the very foundations of the desolate station. A machine of sheer, breathtaking presence rolled onto the forecourt. It wasn't just a motorcycle; it was a chopper, a sculpted beast of gleaming chrome and paint so black it seemed to drink the sunlight. Long, raked-out forks stretched to a minimalist front wheel. Ape-hanger handlebars swept upwards, daring the sky. The fuel tank, a teardrop of polished obsidian, flowed seamlessly into a deeply dished leather seat, backed by a wickedly tall sissy bar. Twin fishtail exhaust pipes, chromed to a mirror shine, promised thunder. Bob felt his breath catch. He’d pored over pictures in those dog-eared bike magazines, dreamt of them, but never one this… perfect, this potent, in the flesh… or rather, steel and chromium.
  6. drsawzall

    Chapter 20

    Well now...haven't the red herrings been spawning... Why are the Detectives pushing a couple of half assed theories.... Did Joey have any previous connection with either detective? Why did Keiyara have Joey's necklace? Why did Laura get so antsy when Robbie Meade was introduced...more importantly, what else did Robbie Meade not divulge?? Catlin's comment of not letting anyone hurt the baby is/was very telling... Robbie Meade is justifiably terrified...is he #3 on the hit parade?? Where is the rock right now? A DNA test is waiting... Why haven't we seen or heard from Miki's brother Lurch...could he have been involved with supposedly straight Joey??? And...Does Miki have an alibi???
  7. Thanks for sharing this with us!
  8. drsawzall

    Chapter 19

    Well duh....just who wrote the story.....that would make Josh the mxcweoi jdfnefgmvg, followed by the sound of a body hitting the floor....
  9. drsawzall

    Chapter 46

    Thanks for the chapter and the update! As Liam and Marc Adam discover, that any port in a storm, might not always be the best choice….
  10. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Alls well that ends well….
  11. drsawzall

    Chapter 7

    A hunger that won’t be satisfied anytime soon….
  12. The following gives me hope that Anduin and Claire just may have an accident with an 18-wheeler carrying hot asphalt to a road repaving job... Anduin, on the other hand, was very clearly wearing a frown as he came in at that moment and stepped over to beside Remy. "What is going on?" he muttered, nodding in the direction of the black boxes. "I don't know. I thought maybe Claire would tell you something beforehand." "Not really. How many times do I have to tell you that she and I aren't exactly a good team, anyway?" Remy shrugged and looked over at Claire. Mistress and slave might not be friends, but he'd seen the same, no-good glint in both pairs of eyes far too often by now.
  13. Today marks the first day of meteorological summer. Yesterday was the 12th consecutive rainy Saturday, a streak that began in mid-March. Somehow, I have been able to squeeze in some much-needed yard work...Mowing the lawns has been more like haying the lawns!!! There's only so much housework that can be done on rainy Saturdays, which means I can catch up on my GA reading list!!!
  14. So true, but duct tape can make it quiet... Gavin...the stupider they are the harder they fall.... Kudos to Leon!!!
  15. drsawzall

    Resolve

    Wow...wow...wow...so glad a rested reading this till I had time to sit down and quiet my thoughts... I would think by now that Jean Lundgren would have thought to work with Liberty Academy considering the following... “Jean Lundgren, DCFS. I’m here to collect Theodore Robertson. Which one is he?” Her no-nonsense gaze swept over the two boys sitting on opposite sides of the imposing conference table. “Well?” Neither boy answered, and Bobby eventually intervened. “Theo is the younger one, Mrs. Lundgren.” He couldn’t miss the look of betrayal he saw on Theo’s young face. “What kind of trouble are you in, Theodore?” Jean didn’t seem concerned by the boy’s obvious lack of legal counsel – only annoyed at the delay police questioning would cause in her already over-scheduled day. “Theo isn’t being charged with anything. He is helping the CPD with an ongoing investigation in which he has unique, first-hand knowledge.” Bobby noted the social worker’s dubious expression. “Well, in that case, Theodore and I will be leaving. Once he has been placed, you can make an appointment with his case manager or guards if you have any further questions.” Jean put out a hand that everyone ignored. “Guards?” It was Phil Morris who asked the question on everyone’s minds. “Emergency placements are difficult.” Jean shook her head theatrically. “Juvenile hall is about the only place that will take teenagers like Theodore on short notice, especially on a holiday.” She sounds like she is burnt out and truly of little use... Then there is the unbridled enthusiasm of both Emilio and Elio, who, it seems, have Thomas's magic touch around badly abused or wounded boys...This part of the chapter had me unabashedly reaching for the Kleenex....I can't wait to see what wonders they work next, hoping they get the brothers to connect... Then there is WSIII, aka the Turd; his thinking that he has the situation under control is going to be his downfall. This last sequence with him shows that his thinking has lost some elasticity and problem-solving ability. He's started digging a hole that will only get deeper... Next chapter quickly...PLEASE!!!!
  16. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Let's hope Yale stays free of STD's....
  17. drsawzall

    A Royal Gamble.

    Not all that sure I can trust Thomas, Etienne's time with Prince Charles was known in the circles the Prince traveled...Here's hoping they make good on their escape...
  18. drsawzall

    Chapter 16

    Get the man a frigging tongue so they can properly communicate....it's way past time....
  19. drsawzall

    Armand

    Well now....that's a fine kettle of fish called Matthew....not sure just what to think/feel about him now...
  20. drsawzall

    Chapter 43

    I have to agree with this as well, I actually found it a bit disturbing as well....it was borderline non-consensual at the very least...Alan needs help....
  21. drsawzall

    Chapter 19

    Then again...where were Gabe and Laura when Joey was murdered...Laura can be a very convincing actor.....
  22. It could have been @Gary L's Weiner schnitzel pups typing while he wasn't looking...
  23. drsawzall

    Chapter 30

    When Rory starts drinking pickle juice and pistachio ice cream with peanut butter, I'll start to worry....
  24. The 64 thousand-dollar question is, what did Jake forget, or will he make a mess of the evening and come home early???
  25. Better fog than froggy.... Need to see what steps the rebellion will/are taking against the humans
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