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  1. drsawzall

    Chapter 2

    There you go...exorcism by insemination!!!!
  2. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    An interesting start..
  3. drsawzall

    Chapter 34 S1

    An interesting chapter, where I used to live there was an Audubon Sanctuary on my street with 3 large ponds and several feeder streams. This was just under 30 miles from downtown Boston, they had to call in a beaver remediation expert as the impact the beavers were having was impacting not only the sanctuary bit one road going by it. By damming the stream they were impacting the safety of the road with the large volume of water behind the dam. Back home and living on the farm, the beavers created a large dam, flooding nearly 4 acres of lower, fields that were mostly swampy and wet for the most part of the year. It is interesting to see how the ecology of the area has changed. If I had to guess the beaver dam is nearly 100 feet in length!
  4. I could not have said this any better, while never having owned a horse, or owned by a horse, I grew up with dogs who meant every bit as much and can understand the complex mix of feelings and emotions one feels when they lose such an important part of their lives...my heart goes out to you Gary. This was a seminal chapter, and a masterclass in pacing, tension, fear, and raw courage to do simply what needed to be done! I shuddered, winced, felt the scrapes, herculean effort, the abrasions and minor cuts, and the determination to do...for the one you love. Lots of directions this can go in, I have to believe Lucas will live, he's lucky there was an exit wound. The danger now is the possibility of infection. If Lucas came back from washing up down at the crick wearing his shirt, the bullet most than likely brought some fabric from the shirt, and we know it would not have been clean...I have to believe Lucas survives this due to the quick thinking on Jubal's part. How far is Sheriff Reid down the road, would he have heard the shots fired??? Once again, thanks for this chapter and my deepest condolences Gary on your loss....
  5. drsawzall

    Chapter 25

    I'm confused byTy, he appears to be like a will-o-wisp, his affections all over the place. After years of longing for Seth, he for the lack of better words, dumps him. Will he need a lock for his belt to protect the next good looking boy that catches his attention??? I give the boys credit for the yard and house work and lord-almighty...we finally see Seth's father. Why am I reminded of an old TV show...Instead of Lucy, transpose Jim...and boy does he have....
  6. Never a dull moment with Derek...what a mess we've got going on here...
  7. It is amazing to see how Toby is thriving n a loving, positive family setting. One that encourages personal growth. He is learning not to see the world as black and white, that it OK to be inquisitive. As equally important, Toby knows where home is!!! Time away from his incubator has given him the freedom to understand the difference between his parents and it is all to the good... As noted above, this chapter has some serious foreshadowing. I suspect some serious bumps in the road ahead, however...keeping track of the comments made by the incubator and the previous behavior of the Neanderthal she is sleeping with, will work in Brian and Toby's favor along with competent legal representation.
  8. drsawzall

    Chapter 18

    One of the constants in life is that nothing stays static, you can lead or follow, grow or stagnate... The following is so frigging true, specially when the chips are down and the odds look insurmountable...The old axiom applies hee...safety in numbers and never leave a brother/sister behind... What is the definition of insanity??? Doing the same thing over and over again and expecting different results.... Everyone turned when Rory said, “For the strength of the pack is the wolf, and the strength of the wolf is the pack.”
  9. drsawzall

    Chapter 8

    Oh...it's slamming alrighty....
  10. It looked like the enemy was like a bad rash that just wouldn't go away...I fear that this is/was the first of many waves of assaults... Where is Simon??? He can't be dead...
  11. drsawzall

    Chapter 8

    Ya know...you had me and the jury with the water under the bridge comment, such a beautiful metaphor... Then you had to describe Caleb's scent as leather and...coconuts....freaking uggg... Everyone knows how evil coconuts are, I mean ya caint' even go to a beach without smelling the slippy rascals...the jury might/may be deadlocked...mistrial anyone???? BTW, loved this chapter...
  12. drsawzall

    Chapter 224

    What a brilliant idea to have James write a book, with a renewed sense of purpose and a potential best seller!!
  13. drsawzall

    Chapter 20

    Let's hope the time the folks who run and work at this fine institution have a chance to experience all the benefits that JJ and others do...hoping their brains then turn to jelly before being put down...
  14. If Mark lets his lower head to the thinking for an hour or two, he just might see the light and come on over to the other side for at least a visit... I get the feeling the troglodytes have a few stupid moves up their backsides...Did anyone think to have the security cameras covering the waterpark car lot checked for potential culprits??? Just saying...
  15. drsawzall

    Chapter 2

    There was a lot of stuff crammed into this chapter, and Greg has a lot to learn!!! So don't we all!!
  16. drsawzall

    Chapter 8

    Was on the road wrapping up a vacation and for those aficionados of red herrings...and boy...o...boy, do we have 'em!!!
  17. Well, it's hitting the fan now...no telling how Fran can pull this off... Where is Lothar and does Gustave somehow survive to work with Edith? And what of Gustave's brother???
  18. drsawzall

    Chapter 19

    Somehow I think these folks are find a way to use Pro...
  19. Hey now...I like vanilla with sprinkles.....
  20. drsawzall

    Chapter 8

    Spot on and were there security cameras??
  21. Thanks Bill for another entertaining Halloween story!!
  22. Was reading this while waiting at the airport or my flight back to Boston, I was laughing so hard I passed gas. I'm now sitting in an entirely different boarding area....Anyone fancy a trip to Portland?? Thanks Aaron....
  23. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Very entertaining and thanks!!
  24. Given a choice I know what burger/Berger I'm wanting to eat....and hold the condiments..... Funny; it may be the only kind of burger I ever get again. I may be limited to cheeseburgers, not Jeremy Bergers.
  25. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Wishing you the best!!
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