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Good King Abe should deal with the poisoner...
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It begs the question... who's behind the attacks???
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There's a special place in hell for JJ's parents
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Simply a masterclass in story arc and development. In many ways it was a rollercoaster ride for the gamut of thought provoking emotions. All in all it demonstrated that as flawed humans we are capable of redemption. Poingant, sanguine, and heart wrenching. I found the ending simply powerful.......Thank you!!! Thanksgiving is coming up in six weeks or so. MJ will be there. Come up to the Twin Cities for the holiday. Carrie would love to get to know you, and the kids need a chance to meet their uncle.” Sarafian’s face looked wary. “I don’t know. I’m not—” Knowing what a leap for him such a visit would be, I cut him short, and covered his hand again. “You have to be there. You’re family.”
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As noted above, incredulous comes to mind, insipid you ain't.... Love the Corporate Galactic series and a new, fresh set of interesting settings and inhabitants. Well done and thanks!!!!!
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There's moving on and then there's moving on towards the light... Alzheimer's or dementia is no joke and trying to find his father in a memory care facility in a large city won't be easy...would like to see another chapter or two...
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Loved this and it is begging for more chapters...please and thanks
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The Answer and a New, Shocking Relationship
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The Answer and a New, Shocking Relationship
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Cousin David & the cabin
drsawzall commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Cousin David & the cabin
Loved the thought of ''Handbags at dawn"!!- 13 comments
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After they are done frying golems, I can think of a certain feline that could use a good singe or two!!
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Thanks Bill...a great tale for the spooky season!!!!
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Looks like Prince Aaron is suffering from DSB...deadly semen backup...
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Lord Sarin and Dowager Finley need a bit of comeuppance!!!
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It looks like another home will be built and rest in peace Marcel!! A true friend, father figure, and mentor...
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A very informative chapter and a good reminder of it's eat or be eaten...
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6. Teaching a Lesson in Power
drsawzall commented on W_L's story chapter in 6. Teaching a Lesson in Power
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5. Teaching Lessons in Control
drsawzall commented on W_L's story chapter in 5. Teaching Lessons in Control
One can only hope the thought that the box and the avatar are lesser beings as Jules believes... -
4. Teaching Lessons in Pain and Pleasure
drsawzall commented on W_L's story chapter in 4. Teaching Lessons in Pain and Pleasure
Oh my...you just knew when the box was set down that things were going sideways...what could possibly happen, for right or wrong -
3. Teaching Lessons in Desire
drsawzall commented on W_L's story chapter in 3. Teaching Lessons in Desire
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When What’s Left Is Faith A La Tombola Vignette You ask that the location of this planet become available to those who would mindlessly extract the scant resources for the benefit of a few to the detriment of lifeforms we barely understand. That is your decision the quest for profit becomes paramount. What is being proposed is nothing less than a violent, mindful rape; a willful, uncalled-for action without care or concern for those or what might be harmed. That while life exis
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Not everything is as it seems, what would you do when faced with insurmountable odds?
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2. Teaching Lessons in Fear
drsawzall commented on W_L's story chapter in 2. Teaching Lessons in Fear
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1. Gatherings and Departures
drsawzall commented on W_L's story chapter in 1. Gatherings and Departures
Once the devil has your soul it's cooked unless your Mark Twain -
Reminded of an old saying...If wishes were fishes...beggars would be kings...
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Yea... what they said....
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