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  1. drsawzall

    Chapter 23

    So much to ponder, I suspect another trip to the nether...they aren't ready by a longshot...
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    Chapter 23

    do you mean snatching defeat from the grasp of victory???
  3. drsawzall

    Chapter 23

    Could the ancients got around in one of these...skodas???
  4. drsawzall

    Chapter 16

    Brilliantly summed up...
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    Chapter 76

    Upon reflection, this has me waiting with bated breath... “I shouldn’t wonder, my lord,” Addington said. “Can you explain the nature of your conflict with St. Vincent?” Granger had been expecting this, so he pulled an envelope from his satchel bag. “I fortunately anticipated your question, and have written a narrative and included copies of the pertinent correspondence, Your Excellency.” He handed the envelope to Addington, who held it as if weighing its contents. “Thank you, my lord,” Addington said, then handed the envelope to Lord Eldon. “Perhaps you can review this and then acquaint the rest of us with your impressions, my lord?” “I will be happy to do that, and I will ensure that everyone here receives a copy of my summary, Your Excellency,” Eldon said.
  6. drsawzall

    The Ceremony

    Once this is over, what will Simon say?
  7. Much like the tales and lessons of old, whose purpose was ingraining morality, this story invokes age old dilemmas. How can you ascribe to a belief system/faith yet still have unbounded hate in your heart and soul? Then how many time can you beat, abuse, and cast out those who aren't like you before the other cheek turns...and it ain't pretty?
  8. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    A powerful lesson about abuse, by those who should know better from the book they glean their faith from.
  9. drsawzall

    Chapter 76

    Could not say it any better, I do worry about St Vincent being perhaps more than a bit petulant, and...I can't/won't trust Caroline to remain in the shadows. Let's hope the Dutchess can restrain her husband as well. Loved this chapter, want, need, and am begging the fates that you are allowed more time to write more!!!
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    Chapter 2

    Let's see how the stars in their eyes collide...
  11. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    looking forward to seeing where this goes, great start!
  12. drsawzall

    Chapter 22

    Well, there is an avaristic nature to the Pertwee if I read the beginning of this chapter correctly, they seek profit while guarding some secrets closely
  13. drsawzall

    Chapter 22

    Why does Gorge remind me of...
  14. drsawzall

    Chapter 22

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    Chapter 30

    In order to preserve what is left of my waistline from expanding further, I am so glad this chapter came after I ate my supper!!! Well done, looking forward to more as time allows!!!
  16. Ya just had to go with the evil coconut...
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    Disp Ch 13

    Hopefully they remain flying under the radar as far as their hostile neighbors to the north go. We've had enough boats/hotels blow up...
  18. Another well written chapter, thank f'ing goodness the store is still open...and I'm having 2!!!! Perry and Kyan together, as certain as my having 2 ice cream sammies tonight....
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    Chapter 21

    Al...its just past what time the rooster crows for this retired old fart...I had to look up both before the caffeine kicked in...talk about conundrums...😉
  20. A story of love and redemption overcoming long odds.
  21. drsawzall

    Prologue

    The Egg Stone In the time before and in the time after does the following take place on a planet with two suns and three moons. For there are many tales that follow this story. The time is one of change as the inhabitants are moving from the nomadic to an agrarian lifestyle, where trade is conducted between remote villages and the first use of metals has started. Technology has advanced to the levels to support a merchant class coexisting with the farmers, hunter/gatherers and the religious
  22. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    La’gan made his way across the hot dry dusty public square of the village with a heavy heart. He knew what would be asked of him, he was certain of that, why else would he walking with such a heavy heart? More to the point, despite any and all of the objections he would raise, he knew at the end he would have to do what would be asked of him. This dilemma tore at his very soul and shook him to the core of his being. That death was certain was no doubt, either a lucky stone would find it’s m
  23. drsawzall

    Chapter 21

    It remains to be seen if the Pertwee have any magickal abilities or can be taught. Jamie and the others know now that they can/have been tracked to some extent and travel now will be different. While I can't recall the exact chapter, one of the first or second stations seemed to be a warehouse of some sorts. Might it be possible for our intrepid travelers to send one or two after Porvus??? I for one shudder at the thought...
  24. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Like all of you and some of you...I want more and I know zilch about horses... But to assuage your concerns about the story ending I give you the following, as most of you...like me...have short term memory issues... The Case of Cloud Rider - 1. Chapter 1 “Jimmy? I know it’s been a while, and I’m probably the last person you want to hear from, but we need to talk.” I gripped the phone handset so hard, I thought it might break. My heart pounded in my chest, and I felt like all the breath left my body at once. Was this really who I thought it was? I know..I'm a real...
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    Chapter 193

    It was too hot to cook either lunch or dinner, so I compromised...
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