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Chapter 28 - Olona, Kosephaji, & Relliduna
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 28 - Olona, Kosephaji, & Relliduna
Yes they are but only if you coat it with pringomite.... It certainly looks like Kosephaji may have found a career path... It won't be a snipe hunt but a Gunge hunt!!! -
Part Two. Chapter Seven.
drsawzall commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part Two. Chapter Seven.
@weinerdog, I'm glad I wasn't the only one to suffer the joys of a colonoscopy this week...Doc wasn't too pleased when I told him I was ready for my close up https://duckduckgo.com/?q=gloeia+swanson+ready+for+my+close+up+images&atb=v314-1&iax=videos&ia=videos&iai=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.youtube.com%2Fwatch%3Fv%3DVg1mYd-To8A I'm betting the 4 munchkins along with Trudy and Jed might help to smooth troubled waters... @kbois noted, I wonder and am concerned about Kyan's background/family, there should be more forthcoming... Loved the idea/thought @spyke- 167 comments
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Peace in the Valley Once Again
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Peace in the Valley Once Again
So glad Matt had time to talk with Alistair, helping him to better understand the reasons not to rush into a situation that might not be right...I give him a lot of credit for being non-judgemental and level headed... Drew is a hoot, wonder how he will react to being at/in the pool with Candy... -
Chapter 26 - Dozi, Ilya, Tchama, & Unadi
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 26 - Dozi, Ilya, Tchama, & Unadi
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Chapter 26 - Dozi, Ilya, Tchama, & Unadi
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 26 - Dozi, Ilya, Tchama, & Unadi
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Boy...the trouble Lil Ivan causes 🙂 Enjoyed this chapter immensely, glad to see Silas doing much better and I'd bet an apartment is being created for Pat!!
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This sums it up neatly for me other than to say, as with his father gauging the variables leading to a course of action, young Lord Grainger has the measure of his mother...
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Chapter 25 - Dozi, Ilya, & Tchama
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 25 - Dozi, Ilya, & Tchama
I think in some manner Newton's laws of motion apply here... A body remains at rest, or in motion at a constant speed in a straight line, unless acted upon by a force. When a body is acted upon by a net force, the body's acceleration multiplied by its mass is equal to the net force. If two bodies exert forces on each other, these forces have the same magnitude but opposite directions.[2] https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Newton's_laws_of_motion -
Chapter 24 - Unadi
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 24 - Unadi
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An interesting take on how warped and twisted those who profess to teach and preach christianity, have gotten it all wrong...One has to wonder how many lives have been ruined as a result... Thomas Jefferson saw through all the false dogma, kept an annotated bible that only contained what could actually ascribed to Jesus. One of his proudest achievements was ensuring that one could worship or not. And no longer would taxes be collected to support a state sponsored church...
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Oh really, that's what Seth's mother has to say for herself..... “Now, Seth,” my uncle said. “After we finish with that business, Mr. Ellis and I are going to take you home to talk to your mother. You’ll have to make the decision if you want to stay or not.” He looked at Aunt Marie and added, “We personally would like you to remain at home. It is where you belong. I know your mother was harsh on you yesterday, and she said and did some things she shouldn’t have. However, she is deeply sorry. While you and Blake left to go get something to eat last night, she came here to talk to you. She doesn’t hate you. What happened took her by surprise, and she is aware that she made some mistakes. When you return home today, hear her out and find it in your heart to forgive her. If you can’t, then you always have a place to stay here.”
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Things are moving quickly, the flush of hormones will only carry them so far...will they find similar likes, interests, college???
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I get the feeling the boys confession as to how each other felt will last a bit longer than a bus ride, will they room together??
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Back to School and Marty's Trial Prep
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Back to School and Marty's Trial Prep
I am very surprised/upset that the school did not see fit to expel Marty and set him up with alternative learning till his case was adjudicated... I can't believe that Marty's father was smart enough to shelter all his assets, bring on the lawsuit.... -
We're at the point where we're gonna need a scorecard to keep the players straight..or whatever...
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I'm not sold on Ryan's health choices... I’d kill him if he gave me something—and he knows that, so much so that he'd shown me his negative STD lab results a week ago to give me the go-ahead to fuck him as I wish. Though it’s unfair that I haven’t shown him my results, I've never had any test whatsoever to prove that I have a clean slate. I disliked getting pricked with needles, and I'd never had bareback sex apart from a couple of ex-boyfriends I’d been with and Ryan.
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The Wretched of the Realm, Part 2
drsawzall commented on Stephen Wormwood's story chapter in The Wretched of the Realm, Part 2
I'm reminded of Imperial Russia before the revolution of 1917. Conditions and circumstances of that time have often been described as a pressure cooker set on the stove and left unintended. As an example, personal family lore tells of a story of a pressure cooker left unattended, as Christmas preparations were underway. Inside that pressure cooker was lutefisk, a dried, salted cod being rehydrated as part of a traditional Swedish Julebord (feast). When the unattended pressure cooker popped, the exploding lutefisk destroyed the kitchen as it became embedded in the walls and ceiling... The object lesson here, as noted in the dance for the new king, Fran's dance partner hit the nail on the proverbial head when she noted that the current ruling class was blithely unaware of the pressure cooker they were all living in... The rule of unintended consequences has begun, no plan of battle ever survives first contact with the enemy... Or as grandma used to say, cakes are baking dearie.... -
And a naked one at that @drpaladin...causing all sorts of speculations...
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Chapter 21 - Let's Have a Kiki
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 21 - Let's Have a Kiki
I am hoping Lahari is brought back to full health and looking forward to seeing the plain building reach its potential... -
Chapter 20 - Sumi & Harakin
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 20 - Sumi & Harakin
And we have further confirmation as to what the building our two beloved queens were looking at, will be used for -
Raging hormones, half listened to conversations, misunderstandings, the government wanting a lab art, and a terminal illness ...what could possibly go right...or wrong???
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I believe we may be kindred spirits when it comes to antique wood...But seriously, check out his other works as well, all equally good as well!!!
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The mirror scene is intriguing and the following as well, not forgetting Greg's dad called him the alpha amongst his friends... What is going on here??? Chris couldn’t resist the joke and said, “Maybe you can find an artful naked lady.” Dad and I rolled our eyes while Scott gave him a rough shoulder bump, causing Chris to glance at him and mumble, “Sorry, Sir.”
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Loved this chapter, absolutely freaking loved it!!! More please and thanks...Vincent surely imparted the lessons Jubal needed, even iffin they could not be a couple...He imparted a trade and skills that would serve Jubal well, anywhere he goes... As a young man growing up, i was fascinated with colonial and western history and still am. The discussion concerning proper building methods struck a cord with me and brought back memories of one of my favorite books and authors... Please take a moment to check out the link/images below... https://archive.org/details/a-reverence-for-wood/page/30/mode/2up Talk about ingenuity...
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Or if the parents were truly evil, name the kid Holden Richard....
