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Everything posted by drsawzall
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Including @drpaladin, Not very likely at all, moved back to farm country and happened on a hike to pass a steaming manure pit nearby. Thought of Caleb and what they both had in common. Relief flooded through Caleb. The horse and donkey were the only living things he cared about. He hated to think about the beautiful Palomino getting hurt because of his stupidity. He already had enough of that in his life. That's what we are blaming this whole mess on, stupidity...sorry but that excuse just does not cut it. Caleb made the decision to turn traitor, leading to the mutilation, death, and science experiments gone bad on young pups. As I see it, there ain't no coming back from that... One has to wonder what fortuitous sequence of events can wash the stain of his actions away.... Luke asked for the truth, but Caleb knew he wasn’t ready to hear it. His friend still remembered the old Caleb, who was trustworthy and honest. That man ceased to exist the day he decided to betray his pack. So he veiled the lie behind the truth. Ain't that the truth... Ok, haters...I've stocked the fridge and I can withstand the siege..., nearly finished the move and have unpacked several boxes. Got 11 miles on the rail trail this morning, feeling somewhat less grumpy. Only one or two trips back and forth left. On a positive note, my attorney just handed my cousins attorney invoices and copies of canceled checks, I've got 'em by the short hairs, with interest due...There just may be light at the end of the tunnel for you know who.....
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I agree with this comment wholeheartedly, Seth's mother given a choice as to how her new born daughter should be cared for, raised to be able to eventually mainstream, has all the hallmarks of abuse...while I can sympathize with the tragedy Stacey's birth was, there is no excuse for taking every possible step to get her the care and rehabilitation she needed, then to top off the treatment of Seth endured over the years, without explanation is unforgiveable... Lastly, where is the father???? He did himself little favor for disappearing. Quite frankly legal advice, proper care and counseling should have been legally mandated...
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Or a malleable BF for Stacey???
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Of course Valrinda has been hurt and drugged, Parallax the irresponsible feline has a lot to answer for... There's nothing wrong with broccoli if you cook it right!!~!
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One thing is for certain, there is a bumpy road coming up...good on Toby figuring some things about himself, somehow, I suspect Toby might be accidently outed...but there are so many other directions the fireworks can come from...
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The E Now Stands for Ewwww
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The E Now Stands for Ewwww
Jeremy DOA or badly injured? @weinerdog had a thought that it might be a DOA, I'm thinking badly injured, needing much assistance during recovery. Oh...I would not go so far to call it a cliffhanger, more like a 'wait and see hanger'. -
Humm, an interesting beginning, let's see where this goes...
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Who needs enemies with friends like that??? It's a freaking wonder that Pandemonium has lasted as long as it has....
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How soon till Lip betrays Travis???
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I have to agree with @raven1, I found this elsewhere, and the writing for this is so much better. Looking forward to seeing how this one develops....
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Remembering Thanksgiving and the First Real Physical Contact
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Remembering Thanksgiving and the First Real Physical Contact
I think someone should have had the discussion with Carlo about dialing back the retribution, but sadly it is too late. While Mike will need intensive medical care and months, if not years, of therapy, Carlo is lucky that Mike will most likely live. Once the story comes out about what Mike did to Lance, and then the fight with with Travis, and the past history of Mike's bullying, Carlo will most likely won't be charged. I'm not sad or sorry about what happened to Mike, I just think that in the moment it was overkill. The kick to the head was unnecessary and uncalled for. Mike was down on the ground, unable to defend himself. If it proves to be fatal, Carlo deserves whatever the legal system throws at him. I happen to think that at this point, Carlo isn't any better than Mike... -
A great chapter and like the others I had to 'visit' some of these places via the web...truly fascinating and educational!! Petroglyph National Monument (U.S. National Park Service) (nps.gov) Loretto Chapel Miraculous Staircase | Loretto Chapel
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Thanksgiving and a Trip South for One Couple
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Thanksgiving and a Trip South for One Couple
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Well...there's a twist or two...Can't disagree with any of the comments above. Lady Cicely has the right of it, her comments at the King's dance several chapters back are coming to fruition... It's about to get messy, Gustave isn't as obsequious as we thought him to be, he's much more aware of the comings and goings of his retinue...Fran was lazy in this regard...
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As others have noted, Lucas is set on capturing his own 'wilding' and it won't be oats he'll be using for bait... The following bothered me a bit, I have a nagging feeling the Sherriff ain't one to let go so easily... Lucas met his gaze for a few blinks before looking away again. “Appreciate that, and all I can say is Reid is my friend, but he needs to be respecting I know what’s best for me and that I can make up my own damn mind… and I have.”
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I was visiting my aunt and cousins for a bit while the folks were adulting without us kids... My aunt was late for work one morning and while doing her hair up, accidently grabbed the can of Raid bug spray, you could hear her yelling from the driveway!!!
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That begs the question, actually a couple, do you cast a shadow and see reflection in a mirror?
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The Lady is much more than a tramp and her unmaking can't happen soon enough
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Thanksgiving and a Trip South for One Couple
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Thanksgiving and a Trip South for One Couple
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While the boys are shagging anything with a pulse and a come-hither look reality is just around the corner...
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including @drpaladin and @James Carnarvon as well...you haven't lived till you had some of these...
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It would seem that Jj is going from the frying pan directly to the fire...can this work out well?
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Special agent Calhoon is a putz of the worst sort, he hasn't a case, so he is trying to manufacture one...here's hoping the upcoming hurricane deposits him close to an alligator's nest....Food for thought, was/is there a relationship between Special Agent Calhoon and Danny??? How are they connected???? After reading the following Micco is right back at the top of my suspects list.... Chase winked at me. I hated football more than Brussels sprouts.
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There's nothing like good food and family to share it with!!!
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If only it could be used to make toilet paper....
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