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  1. All those poor little swimmers…and NNN to boot…well done and loved that twist
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    Fort Huachuca

    Not sure what TOA is… At least it wasn’t millions…. This was just the right length chapter and well done!
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    Chapter 17

    I’d pay twice to see this if it were a movie and if a TV series, I’d put up with the political commercials too! And yes, a shout out to Big Z, owner of one of the hardest slapshots… You've been hit by Zdeno Chára
  4. Could not say it better and as a doctor with a license right from the box of Cracker Jacks I concur with the diagnosis above…
  5. Paddy is a practical legend to say the least…now in the planning of further capers, they need to widen the circle as to lead suspicion away from the estate….and spending that much money at once is bound to garner comments…and notice… I still would like to see Lord Fat Ass Cheating Bastard to pay his “dues!”…
  6. Curiouser and curiouser…I admit some, actually, most of the math escapes me, while Norris and Viv, who would have guessed….And now a hint of the Knights Templar and possible royal blood lines. Could there be interested parties out side of the school? What could possibly be hidden at this school that someone died?
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    Chapter 7

    I am throughly enjoying this story! As a history buff it is excellent!
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    Chapter 22

    Before I read any other comments, I’m rooting for Marco Polo and Robbie…the other two are smucks…..
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    Chapter 2

    This was intense and so well written…had me forcing my self to read slow and carefully…Thank you for an excellent chapter!
  10. I can only imagine that Julien will appreciate what Oliver has done. Understanding that Oliver found what teams of legal beagles couldn’t..
  11. Bittersweet, and to live as one half of a whole...
  12. All of those backed-up little swimmers, with nowhere to go....
  13. Agent Crin.... -4" 🍆🤔
  14. Ohhhhh...what's going on here??? Focus, he ordered himself. You are a hunter. You are the Hammer. He adjusted his flashing glasses, entirely unaware that a secondary personality was currently sleeping inside his own brain, actively looking forward to a coffee date with the exact people Crin was trying to arrest.
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    Chapter 20

    A truly beautiful chapter, releasing sorrow while keeping that love close to one’s heart…I still have hope tho
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    Chapter 16

    Sure it is… Hockey was a game of habits. Good linemates picked up each other's habits. Coffee. Stretching. Music. Skating patterns. That was all this was. Probably.
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    What Is Love?

    A case of wilful ignorance perhaps... Jessica shouldn't have to live her life devoid of romance. It was only a matter of time before someone caught her eye. Poor Sakis will just have to accept his loss.
  18. Well told, and you are to be congratulated for the manner and style; it added a richness and depth to it!
  19. This happened to me once...but I got better... ‘Unlike somebody, I know better than to trust gas station burritos for twenty-four hours.’ He grinned. ‘You're talking about one incident.’ ‘One incident that evacuated an entire motel room.’
  20. I'm loving this, and I can't wait to meet Nana!!!
  21. One day at a time, one board and nail at a time. The Molly House is becoming increasingly attractive, and unpaid and assumed debt is still debt...
  22. Well now...someone(s) was/were asleep at the switch and guilty of shoddy paperwork and of reviewing all the facts concerning this case... It is tragic that someone died, and I won't diminish that fact...but Julien deserved so much better...
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    Still Here

    The insurance company screwed up. To me, it is their responsibility to make it right. I can't see how Julien's testimony is going to change anything... Hopefully this f'up is rfesolved quickly in Paris. Oliver said the right thing to Julien... “Go. Do what you need to do. Come back.”
  24. This was an amazing chapter, and I am experiencing a profound sense of loss, as noted, a necessary loss, but still... if only there were a way. Kudos, Topher, one of your best yet!!!
  25. We interrupt this storyline for a break in the action...stay tuned!! Now a message from our sponsors. Having problems with a storyline that has yoy gripped by the seat of your pants? Try our new and improved ...
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