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  1. drsawzall

    Chapter 12

    I have to wonder if this response is an automated one from a civilization long past… will it be Gremlin who pulls everyone’s bacon from the fire? Jessie isn’t going to “return” Isaiah if he refuses to return to the father…. Is the father any match for Mickey’s mother?
  2. I understand that people have lives after work, and...gasp...sex!!!! Set up a date so you can have a fun evening...
  3. I'm a bit disappointed with Sam, knowing he wanted to and hopefully, have a stable relationship with Emory, he beds Peter and then tells him to, in all sense of the words, to take a hike... That conversation, the adult thing to do, would have been to tell Peter right away...
  4. A story like that could have an explosive ending...middle...or beginning....
  5. From this... To this...
  6. What he said... Mother needs a jar of Valium, and Father needs to stop forcing expectations as well; perhaps he could share the Valium...
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    Chapter 7

    It could possibly be a back door into the city as well, however…knowing the dire conditions within the city, is an ally as well….
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    Chapter 7

    Hopefully Ashot was out of the tunnel before the earthquake….
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    Chapter 8

    What becomes/became of Ser Mark, will we learn more about him?
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    Chapter 8

    And so it began…a journey that will change everything and everyone a thousand times…..
  11. A thoroughly engaging tale ripped from the annals of a very turbulent history of England at the signing of one of the greatest documents ever written, the Magna Carta. I strongly recommend this story to one and all, you won’t be disappointed!
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    Chapter 31

    A bit late to the party, and the comments above encapsulates my thoughts and feelings, 100%…. As someone who has enjoyed your other works, I need to tell you that in my humble opinion, this is your finest work. There was a constantcy from the very beginning and throughout the story to the end. It never let the reader down and kept all of us waiting for each and every chapter. For that, I thank you, and can’t wait for the second book!!
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    Chapter 18

    We see this in the deepening relationship the boys and with the acceptance they get from Rowan and Declan…not to mention the email to what was home. I still have fears that the troglodyte’s who oppose the government sponsored archeological works will do something to upset the connection with Cianan….
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    Chapter 11

  15. I still wonder the real reason to go after Kent’s inheritance, if it was simply that, Niran was/is an idiot. If it was as a result of poor financial decisions for any number of reasons, then he proved he played the game badily. One hopes that we’ve seen the last of him…. And, the following speaks volumes… This is business,” he said, adjusting his cuffs. “You forced it to become procedural.” “It never was,” I answered
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    Chapter 3

    Thokk is closer to understanding his nature, the cause of his loneliness, and how he may play a part in a larger role. I don’t envy him…
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    Chapter 2

    How in the heck did I miss this?? It would appear that Thokk has some serious soul searching to do….
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    Chapter 23

    Danilo has the truth of the matter….and the knowledge and means to be effective… Will this be the moment? Could Benedetto “accidentally “ fall his donkey, or over a bridge? Benedetto would depart for Siena. His absence brief. His return anticipated.
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    Chapter 6

    All of this in the name of a loving, just god who is abused when others are misappropriating his message, on both sides. And both sides are equally guilty….
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    Chapter 11

    Well...there's another shoe to drop, what are the chances it is a visit either by Mickey's mother or underlings... It is frustrating as I bought the book and won't read ahead!!
  21. Another one of my favorite genres, and my humble thanks to all of you who read my story, it is the best payment an author can ask for.
  22. When the head below the belt has all the brains, and won’t listen to it….
  23. Just so sad and so tragic…That Claude was able to do his thing for so many years without attracting notice is shameful…
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    Prologue

    With bated breath, and on to the next chapter….
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    Chapter 13

    It would behoove our amateur sleuths to watch the comings and going’s of the glassworks for a few days and look for patterns… Until proven otherwise I suspect our minor nobles wife….
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