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carringtonrj

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  1. Lovely idea. Love the original. Always happy to see it adapted in new ways. Looking forward to seeing how you've gayed it up!
  2. It's a good start. I like the closet case idea as a starting point - so much potential for drama emotion - secrets are sexy!
  3. carringtonrj

    Chapter 1

    This starts with a real feeling of bounce and confidence, like you are right into your stride and really enjoying what you are doing. A great new set up. You write brilliantly, N.
  4. carringtonrj

    Chapter 16

    Lovely end to the story. I do like a happy ending. It has been a great read and I look forward to the sequels. You have a very curious imagination, and you write with such conviction. Thanks again.
  5. Looks gorgeous. Sounds fun. Nice cap in the pic!
  6. carringtonrj

    Chapter 1

    I think I recognise this feeling, KC. It's terrible when it grips you, huh? Hope you're feeling OK really. You write with great power, honesty and precision and say it all so directly. Thanks for sharing.
  7. He is definitely missed here!
  8. carringtonrj

    Chapter 15

    Drawing things together nicely. But, yes, enough remains to be discovered and explained for the sequel to be required! You write with such heart and conviction and belief in your own created worlds - lovely to behold! Thanks for this story, N. Hope you don't end with a nasty twist!
  9. Thanks for sharing this. It's great that you had such a great time with J. I'm sure things will just get better and better for you in the future!
  10. carringtonrj

    Chapter 14

    Neat little chapter. What is love anyway? Can Glory love Sar? How? Was it meant to be and can't be denied?
  11. Hope things improve and you get a chance to meet with your friend soon.
  12. Thanks G and L. It's so nice to have a story in amongst all those great pieces!
  13. carringtonrj

    Chapter 13

    another very fine chapter, n. you sustain your world so effortlessly. it all seems so natural and real. great handling of glory's consciousness, slipping into unconsciousness.
  14. carringtonrj

    Chapter 1

    A very interesting piece, really different. Really treated the reader with respect, leading us on without spelling everything out - intriguing and imaginative. You write beautifully.
  15. carringtonrj

    Story

    Very powerful and convincing story, creating a credible world within the real world. And all your usual facility for smart, fluent, well-constructed writing. Wolves have something, for sure. Coincidentally, I just ordered The Philosopher and The Wolf before I read this. You certainly have the essence of a major saga here if you want to embark on it. Thanks for the read.
  16. carringtonrj

    Chapter 1

    Powerful and imaginative story. You build things up really well and create a credible, interesting, moving tale.
  17. carringtonrj

    Chapter 1

    Really smart and well-developed story. Keeps you guessing until the end. Brilliant.
  18. A particularly strong piece, N. Very powerfully built up. Visualised perfectly. Tension manipulated for maximum effect. Lots of nice touches of characterisation. You write so well.
  19. carringtonrj

    Divine Love

    Really interesting slices of classical life. Good reminder of how gay it all was in ancient Greece! Something really different and intriguing for this anthology. Liked!
  20. an enjoyable read with lots of details. you write with confidence and precision. a successful legend. obviously, leaves us wanting more.
  21. carringtonrj

    Not A Legend

    Lovely piece. Sweet sentiments. A clever twist on the theme.
  22. carringtonrj

    Chapter 1

    Lovely story, J. A perfect fit for the legend category - the unsung legends, who endure so much, without being noticed. Great to have you back on GA. Thanks B, for posting.
  23. Really nicely done. Cute ending. You are so comfortable handling supernatural ideas, gods, etc. A really enjoyable read. Bounces along with real confidence.
  24. carringtonrj

    Funny Story

    i think people shouldn't "beat you over the head with a baseball bat" when you're already in pain! hope you feel better soon.
  25. carringtonrj

    New update

    your current pic is great. of course, the model boy was very pretty, but the real you seems to have more character than the pretty boy. just my opinion.
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