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  1. Aditus
    Happy birthday, Conner!
  2. Aditus
    LOL OOOkay:1. Maybe it was a whole pitcher? 2. Yeah me too. 3. Irri hat a very convincing idea. :thumbub: 4. Good! 5. Thank you for your comment.
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    Thank you Sly! You tell me. What could he have asked?
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    So what could he have asked, hmmmmm. Not telling! Thank you Lisa!
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    Good! And no, not a chance. It's a seeeecret. Thank you for your comment.
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    Thank you Valkyrie! I'm glad you like it. Ha, but that was my intention. I'd love to read the questions you came up with.
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    You captured this dreadful moment of life perfectly. Great work, Mann.
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    Prompt 353

    Aditus commented on Valkyrie's story chapter in Prompt 353

    Ha you had me with the accident! I really thought Evan was dead. I liked that there was hope at the end.
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    Super Clusters

    Aditus commented on Daddydavek's blog entry in Daddydavek's Blog

    Fascinating. I already read something about this on google news.
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    “I can’t believe you asked him that!“ Ralph slapped Andre upside his head before he passed him a wad of paper napkins. “Yeah, me neither.” He took the tissue and dabbed it at his face and chest. “I’m such an idiot.” “That and you stink of beer.” Ralph sniffed at him. “I would never have thought—“ “--yeah that’s obvious.” Ralph shook his head and turned around on his barstool, hopping down on the far side, making sure he didn’t land in the puddle of beer around his friend. “Thinking really is
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    Finished.
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    352 is mine.
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    Doing the Tanka

    Aditus commented on Jaro_423's story chapter in Doing the Tanka

    Someone pass me a jacket. The desire for warmth comes out loud and clear.
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    Lol, thank you Lisa. As I said before, take out of it what you want, make it your own, which would make me happy.
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    Thank you. I might.
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    Thank you.
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    Tanka

    Aditus commented on nostic's story chapter in Tanka

    Is it bad that I laughed out loud when I read this? Don't know about the direct speech, but I really like it.
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    The 'I' is always problematic. In this case I wrote 'my' which suggests there is an 'I'. There is the volcano, which destroys but the lava will also be good soil eventually. A person, the 'I', can destroy, with words, with what they do, but it can also be the foundation of a new beginning.Did this make sense? Maybe I just thought too much about this. Thank you for your comment Ron, I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. 'Grace' hmmm nice, love it.
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    Cool! Thank you Jo Ann. I visited Sicily when the Etna erupted, it was spectacular.
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    Good idea. Sasha and I have to wait a little until the leaves actually turn red, but wouldn't that be fun? Thanky for your comment nostic.
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    Thank you Jaro. That's the special thing with poems, everyone can take what they want out of them and make them their own.
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    Ha! But that's exactly it. It's the Etna on Sicily. I thought it's a good image of how something destructive can also create life, literally and personally (as in what doesn't kill you makes you stronger.) Thanks Irri.
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    I love this. It's sad, as most of yours. The inner person fears its own storms and lightning, that's what I see.
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    Tanka No. 1

    Aditus commented on Ron's story chapter in Tanka No. 1

    Okay so I cheated by reading your response to Irri's comment. I'd never dared to say I actually thought of air-condition when I read this. LOL Very good, Ron.
  25. Aditus
    Out of my shadows, rivers of red stone arise, burn to become life. Green slopes swaying in the wind, veiling the lines they came from.
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