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Prompt #328 - The Spell
Aditus commented on Cole Matthews's story chapter in Prompt #328 - The Spell
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Hal as in HAL 9000? I liked the image of candle flames for the crew's minds. Like Kitt I can see lots of trouble ahead and I can't wait to read about it. As a side note: I really want one of those showers now.
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Welcome November. Interesting name.
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So it was actually yours? You're a poet!
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I want one of those showers. That said, the story behind the blight is convincing, its impact on humanity and its gender composition promises to be an interesting background for the story. I could see the ship, was bored together with the main character as well as intrigued about his findings. The telepathy was a surprise, I'm not yet sure what to think about it. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Thanks for a sci-fi story. Yay!
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Yep,cliffie! *proud* Couldn't resist. Thanks Jo Ann,
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Dragon. Yes! I love dragons. Can't believe how cool Jonas is with everything, and he has magic too? Or did I understand something wrong? Anyway good chapter but way too short. Next one please.
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Absolutely. Congratulations Cole!
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Ugh. Do you think that is a bad omen? And lucky for E. I didn't sing but R.
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This is my brother's wedding song.
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Happy Birthday Cole!!!
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Just sent my brother off with his other half. I played this for him yesterday. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mh6OAIP8Quo
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Happy Birthday Thorn Wilde!!!!
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We already discussed what a writer can or cannot do with a tablet, so of course I keep the PC. I would really miss my smartphone, but oh well we have to make sacrifices, I can still use a map without getting lost.
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Why do you think Taranis is strange? Is Fear in love with Taranis? Would you like that? I haven't decided yet. I write this story more or less on the fly, getting ideas from Cole's story and strange places in my head. So, everything is possible even influencing the author, this time.
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I could use my Samsung tablet, I even have a bluetooth keyboard, but before I do that I use pen and paper when I get an idea in the middle of the night, or listened to a conversation I could use somewhere on the streets. I still have a little black notebook I carry around all the time for this.
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Argh...cliffie. This a pretty neat device Quennel has there. Can it do other things too? Great chapter, Cole. What happens next?
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Happy Birthday Sasha! Have a wonderful day, weekend, year and may all your wishes come true, bar one.
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I somehow missed this while I was on vacation. You got Button's reaction perfectly right. Parents should really think before they do things like that, both of them.
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Eyes narrowed, Ailill took a step forward until he towered over Fearghas. "King Nevan of the Fae wants to kill my grandson?" 'He has the right. Taranis is a second generation Fae-Elf hybrid; they have brought great disasters on the world in the past. His very existence is against the law and the punishment for this offense is death,' Fearghas answered, completely unimpressed by Ailill's anger. Taranis pushed his grandfather aside but Ailill held him back by his arm. "Taranis– Taranis shook hi
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No sunshine and unicorns but lightning and thunder. I love it.
