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Aditus

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  1. Aditus

    A Storm is Brewing

    I like it, content and form. Well done.
  2. You captured the feeling with only a few words. I can relate. Well done.
  3. Aditus

    Mark

    Mark Wisps of fog faces, torn gliding past my eyes. Snow flakes perfection, melted running through my hands. Rain drops tears, dried never moist my skin. In vain. In vain. In vain.
  4. Mark, a character from my story Cumulonimbus, inspired me to write this poem. It can be understood without reading the story.
  5. One of my favorite.
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    Chapter 12

    Ha. I really thought he washed away the magic and all that was left was a plain albeit beautiful bowl. Whew! Love Fire. I guess Jonas' life just got a little more exciting. Next chapter please.
  7. Because of you I laughed at the wrong time! And the wrong place!
  8. We will win this thing again this year, either by racing or by trial. Yay!
  9. Aditus

    Weekly Wrap Up!

    Sung or howled?
  10. This inspired me to write a story. Heard it again after years on the radio and bought the song. Jessie by Joshua Kadison
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    Cia's Torturing Me!

    Now I almost feel like I missed something for not getting a friendly message so far. I read the instruction 'how to post a story' three times, at least, and waited with bated breath because I always misunderstand instructions. Not this time, but there is always the next story. Anyway, thanks Cia for all your hard work. If nothing helps there is always the tawse.
  12. A bunny? I have to pack my lap top DDK.
  13. 2 € Good news: My best friend has finally a job again.
  14. Aditus

    Six Feet Under

    You know that I almost didn't want to read this chapter, yes? Evil, evil.
  15. Aditus

    Unexpected Turns

    *writes furiously* Thanks for your comment. I try to get the next chapter out before I'm going on vacation. Still, it's an important chapter so it might take some time.
  16. It's a difficult piece and something unique to remember.
  17. What a way to start a confession. In a way it's very realistic. Didn't we all start a difficult conversation with some silly question to break the ice some time? I might have difficulties to look at crocuses for a time.
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    Cumulonimbus

    Thank you Andy. I'm a romantic too and I always want to make it all good at the end. Life just doesn't work that way.
  19. I call this conformity with a twist.
  20. Welcome alfredofranco. We love to chat about our stories and encouragement is always good. Hi John you're at the right place. Welcome.
  21. And again: Der letzte Kuss
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    Queen

    There is scheming in every corner of the island. I really wonder how this will work out at the end. To be honest, I have no idea. I like the 'addition', it makes everything more clear.
  23. Aditus

    Unexpected Turns

    I can't answer that, now can I? But you're asking all the right questions. Thanks for your review Lisa.
  24. Aditus

    Unexpected Turns

    Plans within plans...We're not finished yet, right? Thank you for your comment Cole, I'm glad you like it so far.
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