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joann414

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  1. As a reader, and just a regular author, you're doing all the right things. You're mentioning your chapter in your status, you have a discussion thread, and you're putting the word out there that you have a story. And it a damn good first chapter if I may say so.
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    Chapter 1

    Interesting and entertaining first chapter. I'm a sucker for best friend romance. Can't wait to read more
  3. We're in the seventies in the afternoon now. Crazy weather
  4. Very catchy tune. I'll have to play it for my grandson. He loves these songs.
  5. LOL. I agree. I'm so hooked on Matt Cardle right now that it's pathetic. I listen to him on youtube all the time. His rendition of "The First Time I Ever Saw Your Face" is unbeatable. Just makes my heart swell
  6. A rollercoaster of emotions, but the journey is just starting. Great job:)
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    The Shop

    Another chapter of this wouldn't hurt.
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    Chapter 4

    I have my ideas, but bottom line, I hope Chris gets to make his own choices about his life, and not have to follow suit, if you know what I mean. sometimes we have to cut ties and live our own life, regardless. Frank doesn't seem scared, just confused. great story, and entertaining as hell. Love Catherine.
  9. Owned time two. lol. Now, Sly has me curious. gotta go back and read the other. Loved this one.
  10. I'd be thrilled with the ring, but wouldn't sleep a wink for weeks wondering what the hell happened Great take on the prompt.
  11. Congratulations. I'm sure you deserved everyone of them and more.
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    Quench

    I don't know who to dislike the most, Waldron or Asmo. Lots going on here. You put a lot of thought and effort into this. It's obvious, and you're doing a great job with it.!
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    Chapter 6

    You did it! You let it eat his hand too. Shame Thank goodness for Ruwan and Will. This showed how deep Will's feelings are and it was just after there were doubts. Everyone love romance and rainbows, but a little drama thrown in keeps you on the edge of your seat. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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    Prompt 301

    Good grief! What did you eat before writing this sad story? Great writing tho
  15. It's all good. warms my heart.
  16. What I wonder is how a girl or woman becomes a whore or bitch if the man she thought she loved is gay. I'd call her disillusioned, and I think very few actually want revenge unless the relationship she has with the gay male is marriage. Then, I can understand the revenge, still not the whore. As for bitch, I think at some point, we all can claim that title, and i don't just mean women If I'm called a bitch at any time, i probably deserve it. As for the whole my gay boyfriend dumped me for another gay. Bitch, maybe until she comes to terms with it. Whore? Why? Just my thoughts.
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    Chapter 1

    Well. "tries to catch breath" That was quite a start. Needless to say, I'll be waiting for more. Your dialogue is hilarious at times. Love it
  18. Candace was a rare jewel herself. She made Sterling think about things that he always assumed. Life throws you some curve balls, even in the form of a friendly sales lady and knowledge that attracts you to the item and to the person giving you the information. Great take on the prompt. Like it very much
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    Chapter 5

    This is one of those chapters that makes you want to sigh happily. But, I feel a sense of foreboding. Sharks? Are they going to appear? That's something to worry about Looks like the guys are just getting to a good place. I'm enjoying this so much. Basil is such a sweetie. Gotta love mom. Made sure had baby had clean clothes and his toiletries. That's a Good mom now. Love the small things like that that you throw in your stories.
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    Chapter 3

    I'm not even going to try to guess who the brothers are, but I'm sure having all that eye candy to look at doesn't hurt one bit. So glad they decided to go out. Chris seems really interested. Love how you have everyone guessing. I'm trying to follow the clues Ready for next chapter please.
  21. Perfect! I hate working on Caterdays, but have to today
  22. MikeL, I think the poster is just sharing, no more, no less. We're all going to get old, and who knows what's going to happen. the first response just threw things a little off balance.
  23. You'll be fine Aaron. We only bite once After that, you're safe. Pull up a chair and read, write, and visit awhile.
  24. Welcome!!!! Have fun and enjoy ))))
  25. RIP PSH. A great talent lost
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