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Chapter 1 - The incident
starboardtack commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Chapter 1 - The incident
A tragic, powerful start. You have set yourself a challenge to keep it going. I am looking forward to seeing what you do with this.- 26 comments
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I have largely given up reading stories from the various sites I follow. Just need a break. Tonight I happened to check in on GA for the one or two stories I still want to follow and I saw that you are posting again. You are one of a very small handful of authors I still want to follow and I was elated to see this new post. Your first chapter did not disappoint and I look forward to once again enter into the world that you create. Welcome back.
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Bryce a Firenze, Parte Tre
starboardtack commented on Late to the party's story chapter in Bryce a Firenze, Parte Tre
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As I was reading this chapter, the thought came to mind that this work goes beyond mere storytelling. There is a depth, a weight, a meatiness to your writing that sets it apart from much of what I read (and enjoy) on this and other sites. Please know that your efforts are much appreciated.
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Needs a bit tighter editing in terms of spelling and grammar but the story is solid and a great start. Looking forward to see what you do with this. Keep posting!
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I adopted my son from Ukraine when he was 5.5 y.o and I remember his first Halloween. He was very cautious at the first door, more willing at the second door, and once he figured out there was candy for the having, he was OFF LIKE A SHOT! Lol. And yes, I remember the things I would do just to see HIM smile. This chapter rings so very true. Thanks for awakening the memories.
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I adopted my son from Ukraine when he was 5.5 y.o and I remember his first Halloween. He was very cautious at the first door, more willing at the second door, and once he figured out there was candy for the having, he was OFF LIKE A SHOT! Lol. And yes, I remember the things I would do just to see HIM smile. This chapter rings so very true. Thanks for awakening the memories.
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Thanks for a wonderful journey. I especially like how you let your characters evolve but not be perfect. They were so very human. Take a well deserved break — for a day or two.
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When Ashton typed out “I missed you,” my eyes filled with tears. That has never happened in years of reading Gay Authors stories. Well done, sir. Very very well done.
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Your creativity and imagination never cease to amaze me. The threads you weave into your stories……..!
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Chapter 37: Endearing Epilogue
starboardtack commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 37: Endearing Epilogue
I haven’t been able to let go of the previous chapter — the one that garnered such criticism, including mine. Something has been gnawing at me. I have trusted you through the delivery of all the previous excellent chapters and the thought came to me why not with regard to that chapter as well? What am I missing? This morning I realized that your storytelling is in keeping with the tradition of trickster gods who interfere, overturn, and make a mockery of human expectations and demands, for their own purposes or even whims. I realize now it was a masterful chapter entirely consistent with this type of narrative. Well done, sir.Very well done! -
Chapter 37: Endearing Epilogue
starboardtack commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 37: Endearing Epilogue
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Thanks for a creative, fun, and occasionally stressful journey. The love all your characters had for each other was incredibly touching and real. Nothing seemed forced or contrived. Great story -- many thanks/ Looking forward to what's next.
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Chapter 36: Mischievous Mind
starboardtack commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 36: Mischievous Mind
You can either focus on the critical comments you are receiving on one chapter or the uniformly positive comments you received on 35 chapters. Up to you. -
I had tears in my eyes during the birth scene. Beautiful. It sent me back to the day I adopted my son -- different, I know but in some ways the same. A perfect chapter.
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Splerm and cup-o-sperm? I almost hurt myself laughing. Thanks!
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A story lovingly crafted. Many thanks.
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Great transition chapter.
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I am betting it’s J’s father orchestrating the whole thing to drive him back in the closet and back home where he can be controlled.
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I appreciate how Granger continues to grow.
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Thank you for a wonderful story.
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Yet another beautifully written chapter. I know the smart money is on Reza being gay, but there also is a bit of hormone-driven teenage boy to this story. I mean, what kind of (questioning, horny?) teen would (could?) say no to Otto’s tender ministrations? Talk about making vacation memories. Reza will have a whopper! You are a consummate storyteller. Thanks for the joy of reading your writings.
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What Siblings Are For
starboardtack commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in What Siblings Are For
Such an incredibly tender and living chapter.- 51 comments
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Did I ever tell you how much I hate cliffhangers and curve balls? So now by way of penance, you have to post early! Bad author, no doughnuts for you! 😂😂😂 great chapter.!
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An incredibly well-written chapter. Simply perfect!
