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  1. Timothy M.

    Chapter 17

    Timothy M. commented on Cynus's story chapter in Chapter 17

    I can't understand I never left a comment for this chapter. Anyway, the song was awesome, and while I can see why Silas is upset, I think Chelsea did a good job on making him see the matter from a different angle. Drake is much too clever not to work his way through the initial feeling of anger, and he knows Brady would never betray him.
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    “I need to find a way to make this right.” Jasper sighed, then grunted as Carolyn hit a sore spot below his shoulder blade. He really didn’t want to discuss Rob’s ex while getting a much-needed massage from his girlfriend, but she dug her thumb into the tense area, and he winced. “Ouch, yeah that’s the place, but could you be a bit more gentle?” A kiss on the side of his neck was followed by a tad softer but persistent circling of her strong fingers on the muscle which bothered hi
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    I'm an avid SF reader and one of the things I admired about Crave was how well the tech stuff was handled. You didn't go into boring detail, but on the other hand we got enough explanations to make it believable. My question is: did you intend to include a strong, independent female character or did Audra develop as you started writing the story?
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    Ooops, I missed this topic also. But I'll wish you Forsinket tillykke med fødselsdagen and here are some Danish birthday celebration flags
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    That's so funny, we have the exact opposite choices for three stories, but we agree on Fool's Gold.
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    I can see a Stories button as well as a Stories Extras button in the red banner across the top of the page, if that's the one you're talking about?
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    The not knowing is hard, especially when I read his words about not being able to read or write, except when he's in pain, because the meds make him fade away. Maybe he never saw all the posts here. But I tell myself he knows we all think of him and miss him. I want to imagine him lounging on a cloud and dipping into our minds whenever we think of him or talk about him.
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    Fool Me Once

    Timothy M. commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Fool Me Once

    LOL, Lisa, I wondered about those student papers too. Hopefully they were printed from uploaded papers, so he could print them again.
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    Frankie twitched the curtain aside half an inch to peer outside for the sixth time in an hour. He knew he was being stupid, but he was nervous, or maybe scared was a better word. He had never felt so many new emotions at once, some good and some bad. No amount of pacing or breathing slowly helped. Mr. Dan had left him here and told him to stay and wait. “Nobody’s going to look for you in a grotty motel in one of the city slums. Just relax and keep calm, Frankie. Don’t go anywhere or contact
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    Frankie loves his job. He's good at it too. But events conspire to set him adrift. Grid & Dice prompt: A neurotic tollbooth operator hides in an inner city one-star no-tell motel because: "Fuck, they saw me!"
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    I may return to Frankie one day, and I'm delighted so many people liked him.
  12. Timothy M.
    My Unintended Consequences entry has been written and beta-edited. It's now in the final editing stages. I'm hoping to get an editor on the Anthology team who hasn't read the other two A.I. stories, in order to test whether this one works as a stand-alone too.
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    Nobody does, Lisa, but it's not a big deal, since I check in here almost every day, anyway. Mainly I feel sorry for the Admin for having another bad bug to sort out.
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    Chapter 4

    Timothy M. commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in Chapter 4

    Su Yin fits in there perfectly and I look forward to him meeting Nassau and some of the other humans. The chapter ended in a strange place, I would have thought ending it at the * was more logical. Or did you mean for us to speculate about the mirror and those other gifts.
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    January 27, 2022

    Timothy M. commented on Lux Apollo's story chapter in January 27, 2022

    Well, I'm sorry your posting has been messed up a bit, but at least the unpublished chapters aren't visible. I still get all when Bobby tells Johnny he needs to be with him too.
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    Thanks, I won't do anything about my stories with many comments.
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    At least anyone else who experiences the same problem will have a solution to try.
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    Thanks Cia - and Clo. At least I know it's not me who can't figure it out.
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    I'm no longer getting an email notification when someone sends me a PM on GA. I've tried to look at my Notifications settings, but I can't find out where I've gone wrong. Can someone help, please? It's not urgent.
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    I'm able to edit old comments and replies in all the places I've looked, including ones which are way older than the comment Drew left on my prompt story. I would be very sad to see this option go, so I hope Drew's situation isn't what the rest of us should experience too.
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    January 27, 2022

    Timothy M. commented on Lux Apollo's story chapter in January 27, 2022

    I'm not quite sure if this chapter is supposed to be published or not, but it doesn't have the small red icon on it. I'll stay away from the next ones though. I'm so glad you're doing this in flash-back, because it would be hard to bear, if we didn't know Bobby and the others were taking good care of Johnny.
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    Chapter 5

    Timothy M. commented on craftingmom's story chapter in Chapter 5

    LOL, Craftingmom, you sure do know how to rile your readers up.
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    What about formatting in comments (the old reviews) and replies? Right now they are unformatted including emoticons. I can make them behave by editing and saving (though things like italics have to be redone from [ i] italics [ /i] to italics via the I button). But with more than 2,000 reviews written and over 500 replies for my own stories, this will take a long time. I'm on a laptop in Google Chrome, but the same thing happens in Firefox. Look at Def's comment on Gary's Morningstar chapter 47.
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    I have a soft spot for stories where Mother Nature finally manages to rid herself of the disease called humans, or at least most of them. Losing the life you thought was normal or yours by right can bring out both the best and the worst in us. I like seeing people focus on what matters and use their wits to survive and improve the world. This story wound its way into my heart even when it made me sad or upset. The love shone brightly too.
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    I can't recall this one. I may give it a try.
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