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  1. Timothy M.
    and he's even got the sticky-out ears, LOL. I like JAR's Brian better, but I can see the appeal... He might grow on me after a while.
  2. Timothy M.
    I'm sure everyone else got the point just fine, but I'm utterly hopeless with knowledge of music and artists - which I probably shouldn't confess. Or else I should have googled Hank Williams and 'Your Cheatin Heart' right?
  3. Timothy M.
    I'm sure Mr B's story was awesome, but I have to confess I didn't get it.
  4. Timothy M.
    Sorry.. I love your fantasy and I hope Cynus will make the dream come true. Please ?
  5. Timothy M.
    Welcome as a CC reader, Dathi, I'm delighted you are following the story and that you like it. Please visit the story forum to see some of the places mentioned and various discussions of the themes and characters. I'm always happy to get feedback from my readers without whom it would be much less rewarding to write and post stories.
  6. Timothy M.
    Oh right, now I get what you mean. But as a matter of fact the band cannot tell anything but the name of Silas and the fact he's roaming the world on his own, because Drake never trusted any of them enough to tell why he'd run away. (Or at least that's my impression.) I think you're right about the journalists initially, but my point was something else - and you can go read AC Benus' story Dignity to see what I mean about becoming 'famous for being a runaway'. So say that Silas Drake becomes a name people associate with the song and the band. There is speculation about who he is and where and why etc. Of course his family and friends in Crow's Lake won't betray him, since they know he might run if they do. Worst case scenario Drake leaves anyway - now he cannot use his real name anymore for fear people will ask him: "Drake? as in Silas Drake the Navigator?" How do you think that will make him feel towards the band and in particular Brady ?
  7. Timothy M.
    sorry to contradict you, but:
  8. Timothy M.
    Thanks for reminding me to check up on this week's Grammar Rodeo, I had missed several great posts and a good laugh.
  9. Timothy M.
    but grammatically correct.
  10. Timothy M.
    I think you'll find that reading it again, now you know the origin and conclusion of the curse, will prove most satisfactory and interesting. I certainly enjoyed both my second and third read (as editor and then reader on GA). However, the fate of Ahmed and Junyad will still make you cry.
  11. Timothy M.
    Oh, I thought you were just waiting for Mark to change the story status to Completed, in case he added an unexpected Epilogue or something. Hope you're feeling better now.
  12. Timothy M.
    Well, I thought it might depend on when he heard the song and what his circumstances are. Drake is a very private person, and he might not appreciate having his troubles broadcasted, even in this fairly non-descriptive way. In fact my main worry isn't the song itself but Brady's insistence the dedication has to be included. If the song becomes a hit (as we all expect), and the band gets interviewed at some point, the media (perhaps just in the shape of online music magazines) will ask about Silas. If it catches their fancy, he might find himself or at least his name 'famous' overnight. NOT something you want, if you're running away and trying to keep a low profile. So if Silas has stopped running and hiding, he'll probably be OK with or even thrilled about the song. If not... You're so sweet.
  13. Timothy M.
    A chapter, a chapter :D runs around in small excited circles
  14. Timothy M.
    Oh yes please !!!
  15. Timothy M.
    Re today's chapter: I was so focused on the brat getting in trouble I forgot to comment on the interesting development with Liam's parents. His dad finally admitted their decision to forbid Liam to go to Neil's party was a mistake. I'm guessing the lifting of some restrictions is happening because they like Neil and his influence on Liam., so they don't want to hinder them from dating. Oh and I was glad Liam told Dough that Neil had urged him to spend time with his friend.
  16. Timothy M.

    Chapter 11

    Timothy M. commented on Cynus's story chapter in Chapter 11

    You know who I'm most disappointed with in this chapter? Pastor Gregory ! He was a coward, quittting and letting Pastor Simms take over rather than stand up and tell his congregation that Daniel was no sinner and the peope whose bigoted and outdated views made him kill himself, were evil and would burn in Hell unless they repented and made amends. Jenny really needs to get Chelsea to see a therapist even if Silas has managed to pull her back from the brink of suicide. It would also reinforce the case against Pastor Simms. I'm hoping the two other churches have told Chelsea's church they are excluded from the joint bake event.
  17. Timothy M.

    Chapter 43

    Timothy M. commented on Graeme's story chapter in Chapter 43

    Oh brat... I'm not sure whether to be exasperated or impressed at Ty's development as a person, but I'll take Patrick's word that the brat's sincere remorse is a good sign. But a two game suspension of the Leopards best player at a moment they've just lost a game is bad. And winning the match will simply reinforce the cockroach's opinion that heckling is worth it. But I shall have my revenge when Ty is drafted by the Blues and the Roach is left behind. The idea about the football Clinic is awesome ! Most of Liam's friends probably look up to the local team and having the players interact with Neil and seen as his friends will mess with those stupid high school boys' petty minds and ingrained attitudes. And I'm sure having Todd and Paul looming over them asking Why the fuck they are calling Neil nasty names will do wonders for their behavior.
  18. Timothy M.
    And so perfect for Drake - now I wish I could hear the tune.
  19. Timothy M.
    can I have all of them...? I'm surprised you didn't complain they needed a haircut.
  20. Timothy M.
    Do you think they used ice cubes on his nipples to make them stand out like that ? And those shoulders are sinfully... *wipes up drool and returns to writing*
  21. Timothy M.
    Arrrgh, why did you post such a perfect prompt for my next chapter this Friday? Now I have to finish the prompt I'm currently writing AND write another in just one week, in order to be on time. But I guess my Rob fans won't mind...
  22. Timothy M.
    So Kitt, are you the one to poke Sasha in his den and remind him of his faithful and hopeful readers waiting to find out what happens when Hel wakes up?? Please?
  23. Timothy M.
    LOL usually it's the L key which refuses to work on my keyboard, but this time the T went missing. And my headaches weren't helping either. Thanks, dear Editor, opportunity is all fixed now.
  24. Timothy M.
    Thanks. I'm glad you haven't given up on it, in spite of the infrequent posting of chapters. Patient and kind readers are a blessing.
  25. Timothy M.
    Michael was sitting at the kitchen counter, staring at the door, waiting for him. That was my favorite moment of the whole chapter. Michael like a cute, devoted puppy eagerly awaiting the home coming of his beloved master. For some reason that melted my heart together with the admission he wanted to run after Kendall crying "Where's my morning kiss?" In Danish we have a name for women who are incorrigible matchmakers: (Kirsten) Giftekniv mainly used by the Danish poet Ludvig Holberg. So I'm gonna call Deuce Kendall Giftekniv from now on. And I guess the offer of money from Ace's parents continued the winning streak, as did the improved condition of Michael's knee.
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