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That's the thing about rumors - people don't need "proof" to believe or disbelieve them. And it does matter because should those rumors resurface during his college career it would affect both how he is treated on the college gridiron and his chances at the NFL. Remember - this is all taking place long before the first openly gay man got drafted this past year, and as I recall, that man hasn't made a whole lot of progress beyond "getting drafted". I can't help but wonder if that is all due to a need to develop his talent more or if his sexuality is playing a role.

That's why UPS and Fedex were founded.

I knew that thing would come in handy! I don't get to play with this one - I have read a couple chapters ahead of you guys! Brett is way better IMHO because he is old enough for us to lust after - Rob is a teen and therefore off limits!

Promises, promises! I don't think there is a good writer in the world able to completely resist a good cliffie!

Will being at the meeting was a good idea of for no other reason than Zach had a safe ride home after, rather than trying to drive a hot little car while thoroughly upset. Seriously, just his being there and dealing with Wally's animosity head on shows that he does really care for Zach. There are not a lot of 16/17 year old guys who would put up with that sort of nonsense and not walk away. It's important for Zach to see that caring other places than the bedroom at this point. I can also see that the fact Zach lives with Frank and Isadore may be another point of contention with Wally. I can see the councilor wanting to at least talk to them on the phone, if not have them come out for a sit down with Wally and Clara. I can easily see Wally blaming Frank for "replacing" him in Zach's life. And then there is the whole power play thing about how Zach will support himself should Wally and Clara disown him. Do they really think Brad would leave them in charge of the trust money should they do that, rather than set Zach up with an allowance and replacing them as trustees? He has done it once already with Gathan, when it became obvious he would not be fair.

There is only one thing I think you need to add to chapter one. A discussion forum and a link to it.

Nice outline with potential, but I would have liked to see it go somewhere.

Happy Happy!!!! May your day be fantastic in spite of the weather we expect!

It is never easy to accept that nothing you ever do will please a parent.

I could swear I have read several stories that sound like they could have stemmed from some of these prompts!

Well go read the chapter silly!

Welcome back. Does this mean I can eventually expect things in my in box?

Warped is usually taught by warped friends or relatives - sometimes totally beyond ones own control.

Knowing where you DON'T want to go in life can be as important as knowing where you do.

The others have said it so well so I will refill the mugs and glasses and toast along side Carlos! Thank you.

Appalled. Such a lovely word for the situation.

Isn't Thomas Hartford the kid from Book 1 that eventually became a TA for JP? At first the only Thomas Hartford I could think of was the Penn State kid who died after falling from an upper window at a frat party, but Never sent me back to reading!

Yessir Sacredlove. Your turn

I think Wayne has the right word - eventually. And I though I was the only one who did things like that!

Sorry LBO but nope. Try again

Well you have come to the right place mister! This is about the friendliest spot I have ever visited on the web. You can get writer support in the form of editorial help and beta readers if you like, there is a chat room you are always welcome to drop into, and the most accepting bunch of people I have ever met. Welcome to GA!

"Lord, it's a miracle! Man up and vanished like a fart in the wind!"

Princess Bride.

Yes sir! Your turn to post a quote.

Ok - here is an oldie but a goodie "Hearts will never be practical till they are made unbreakable."