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    Chapter 63

    Ron commented on Don H's story chapter in Chapter 63

    Love vibes? That cracked me up. As always, loving the story and I appreciate the new chapter. If I had one thing to offer, it would be that feel good sincerity permeating the chapter does begin to feel too overarching by the end. I'm all for these great and caring relationships and that's absolutely part of the stories appeal, but unless you're amping up for a crash soon -- or sainthood for this extended family -- pushing the 'feel good' here feels a little akin to overreaching on what is all ready a well recognized and good thing.
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    Chapter 31

    Ron commented on dkstories's story chapter in Chapter 31

    To add to Stephen's comment, that and how important David's graduation was to him stuck out for me. Still, that was one heck of a chapter. Brian . . . well, he's some kind of saint, isn't he?
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    Sound Bites

    Ron commented on Ron's story chapter in Sound Bites

    A little experiment in words and I'm glad to know it worked. Thanks Suvitar.
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    Sound Bites

    Ron commented on Ron's story chapter in Sound Bites

    Hey, thanks for your thoughts, Avidreadr. I'm happy to know you liked it.
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    Chapter 19

    Ron commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in Chapter 19

    I'm thinking that last line really does sum it up for Luke at this point in time. That was an exciting and enjoyable chapter. No offering too much detail for us folks that don't know the game, you made it sound appealing.
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    Sound Bites

    Ron commented on Ron's story chapter in Sound Bites

    It's summer. I didn't want to take up too much of anyone's time. Thanks for reading Dave.
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    Art?

    Ron replied to Zombie's topic in The Lounge

    I saw this in Madrid and it's stunning. This is no small work, Guernica, as it is about eleven-and-a-half feet (3.5 m) tall and around twenty-five-and-a-half feet (7.8 m) long. It makes you sad to look at it, and thoughtful. In 1937, when this was completed, Picasso's art would arguably be considered modern art, I'm thinking.
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    Sound Bites

    Ron commented on Ron's story chapter in Sound Bites

    Thanks so much!
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    I tried my hand at Prompt 332. Sound Bites
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    Sound Bites

    Ron posted new chapter in A Prompting

    "Try it again, and I will kill you!" "Ah, shut up, Johnny. It's just mud." "Yeah, but did ya have to hit me so hard, Mark?" "Don’t be such a big baby." "Do that thing with your tongue again, Mark." "You liked that, did ya?" "Tastes good, like spearmint." "Scoot over here, Johnny." "You keep doin' that, you're going to make me fall in love with you." "Oh yeah? What is it you think I'm doing, Mark?" "You keep lookin' at me like you do; I can't think right, John." "Yeah?" "What
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    Prompt 332

    Ron commented on Valkyrie's story chapter in Prompt 332

    Insecurity comes in all forms and beauty really does belong to the eye of the beholder.
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    Happy Birthday Stellar!
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    You bought a free standing home then - older, newer? which neighborhood did you choose? My partner and I bought into a 150 year old townhouse in the Southend 14 yrs ago. One of five condos and the repair expenses are shared, but it seems like they've been non-stop over the years. It's a lovely space, don't get me wrong--we love it, but I hope you don't have to deal with repairs as much as us over the years.
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    Happy Birthday W_L and many more!
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    Coin in the Fountain is a great tale. Sometimes, you get what you pay for!
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    Hey Jaco! Welcome to GA.
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    Chapter 30

    Ron commented on dkstories's story chapter in Chapter 30

    Thanks for reposting your story. Please continue. I'm enjoying it immensely.
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    Welcome to membership Chris. I think many of us read on GA before signing up, including me. Remember, membership has its privilege, now you can like and review and comment all that you want.
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    This is an extremely interesting story. You've paid a lot of attention to detail and it shows. Great story telling Dave!
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    Good luck and best wishes for finding that special place.
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    This was one of the more humorous scenes that I have read in a while. Guys in wheelchairs tend to be good at cunnilingus, so stands to reason they'd be good at fellatio - had me snorting - as did the practice run with the fingers. I laughed aloud at a couple of things as well. Zu's time alone moment doing research . . . I think you nailed it!
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    Chapter 10

    Ron commented on Andrew Todd's story chapter in Chapter 10

    Did that chapter just end with a send? That's going to freak those boys out a bit. Of course, our elemental, psychic friends should be gathering allies, because whomever is after them is likely to be very organized. Next chapter . . . Flame On?
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    Welcome to joining up on GA, Jared. Have you read the Help topic located in the maroon bar up top yet? If you can't find the answer there, you're welcome to PM me.
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    A lovely chapter. Just . . . lovely!
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    This is a story that is worth the price of admission. Sign up for a month if that's what you can spare, read the story and others, and support GA in the process. Who knows, you might want to continue your support and have access to some great writing in the future - found only on Premium Access.
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