I asked myself a lot of those same questions when I watched the episode. Tonight's episode is going to be... I'm planning on watching it tonight, so that means I won't get any sleep. lol
The description of the gray is so apt. I like how you use the color to dispel the gray, but as Parker said, the gray is still there. The last line is a beacon of hope. A mantra to follow when the gray advances. The colors are still there. Great job.
I can't think of a more perfect collaboration. I tried reading A-Z and Twoey simultaneously as they were posting, and had to stop because I kept mixing the characters up. That the backdrop of this collaboration is Letchworth State Park makes the story even more special. The descriptions of the park are spot on and I can clearly imagine the spot they picked to watch the race. I'm really looking forward to reading more.
I saw this on FB and immediately thought of our resident mathematicians drew and @Parker Owens It's fascinating, even to a non-math person
https://phys.org/news/2017-08-mathematical-mystery-ancient-babylonian-clay.html#
Thank you so much I'm glad the story wasn't too much for you. Penguin is based off the cat in my avatar, although Joker would never make a good therapy cat. lol
Oh believe me... I had plenty of pitchforks aimed my way when I posted this story... lol Thanks again for all the comments. It's been great reliving this story.
This is a great story and well worth the read. I read it as KC posted it and eagerly looked forward to each chapter. Great choice for the Classic Author feature.