bjorde

Not sure enjoyed is the correct word. Greatly appreciated it though. Strongly written.

Therapy - definitely therapy.

Hooray for our side.

J was terrified about how this was going to turn out. It may take a while and several deep breaths to recover.

A deeper magic. From before recorded time. As told at the hearths of old.

I like where this is going. And I like the way you write.

Well, having been schooled here in England I know nothing of these strange sports of which you write. Nonetheless, you have made me care about your characters. Thus, I too require more chapters - if only to see how Joel gets on with his new team. Or whether he returns to his old school? Thanks - even if there's no more.

Aaaw! Yer big kid. You nearly had me weeping.

I'm a reader on the site but a full-time carer in real life. The few ideas in my head won't coalesce into writable stories even if I had the time. I've resisted a Premium subscription for reasons of time (daren't fritter away more hours here - and I would) rather than money and wish there was a way to chip in a small donation from time to time to assuage my guilt. Real life is a little too concrete for me so I enjoy the fantasies most - lycans, sci-fi, magic and so on. Of course, the coming of age stuff in the US seems quite fantastical to me too! Thank you for all of it.

Sorry you've had a rough time. Glad you're back. You are extremely readable. Well your stories are at least - you might be!

Wordy, complex, clever and fascinating. Requires concentration and a determination to finish - but well worth doing so.

Neat, sweet - too petite.

A new one to me of your many marvellous tales. Wonderfully crafty - the story and, I suspect, you too.

Soppy! In all the good ways.