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Puppilull

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  1. Puppilull

    The Escape

    I've got a soft spot for steampunk, but I haven't dared to try writing any myself. Lord Tillerson sure is resourceful and crafty, killing the king in such a sneaky way.
  2. Puppilull

    Crack Someone Up

    For a moment, I thought he was going to start telling jokes. A chiropractor is very useful for setting the body free.
  3. With the way things are going for young people fresh out of school, this matter thing isn't all that improbable. I hope Chris sticks to his guns and gets an actual paying job.
  4. Puppilull

    Wrong Footed

    Faris sure keeps their life together interesting and fun. So nice to visit with them again!
  5. Harsh sun beating down on him. What was he lying on? Sand? Was that sand? Sound of moving water. Something was touching his legs. Waves? Why were there waves? His eyes refused to open, but luckily his mouth had no objections. Gasping for air. Only he got a mouthful of sand when he did. His head was throbbing and his back itching, rough from salt and sand stuck to his clothes. Why couldn’t he get up? As he tried, the throbbing inside his skull intensified and he collapsed, falling back in
  6. Puppilull

    Chapter 1

    So things weren't what they seemed? It will be interesting to follow Prism back in time. See how it all began.
  7. Going from annoyed to super protective in a heartbeat... That's family bonds, though luckily I haven't stumbled across any member of my family shot.
  8. Puppilull

    Chapter 28

    Their mutual and strong attraction isn't a surprise. I just wasn't expecting an actual bonding. If it is what is usually meant by bonding in other stories.
  9. Puppilull

    Chapter 28

    And that is a problem, I think. He should find himself first. Even if he doesn't think so.
  10. Puppilull

    Chapter 28

    That was an unexpected twist! Bonded! I wonder if Kohen is ready for such a commitment...?
  11. Well now, Steven... Looks like you're up a certain creek without a paddle. But don't worry. Your superior Alpha skills will see you through. Oh, wait. Is that the sound of those skills leaving you...? How sad!
  12. Puppilull

    Epilogue

    Betrayal all around... With Neredos so far away from reality, floating in his own importance Veil will have lots of opportunity to do evil. The boys better prepare. Too bad they don't know who they are up against...
  13. Puppilull

    Chapter 25

    So our three guys are united and ready to take on the world? I think they'll have their work cut out for them, but will find strength in each other. Can't wait to see where this leads!
  14. Many people here in Sweden were sad to hear the terrible news. He had been ill and his personality wasn't perhaps the best for a performer. He was more the shy guy. I thought he would recover and keep making music even if he didn't tour. There was a memorial for him in Stockholm on Saturday. Fitting to remember him through music and dancing.
  15. Puppilull

    Chapter 1

    I don't think we should be too hard on young Tyler. However, both friends should have seen the need to get in touch after a while. Sometimes parents are a good thing. Lovely to see them together for such a wonderful life. To love and be loved is really what it's about. Romantic love or not.
  16. Puppilull

    Chapter 1

    Poor Carman! I guess first on the agenda is a talk, man to man. No chickening out!
  17. Puppilull

    Forgotten?

    Oh, poor Eric! Being sick is terrible. Being sick alone, cold and completely without food is much worse. Andy needs to get closer to him and take him under his wing, without Eric noticing of course. Stealth carer. That is an apt title.
  18. Puppilull

    Chapter 24

    Sad to see Prism go... But it was as he suspected. At least he went fighting for what he believed in.
  19. Puppilull

    Chapter 23

    Oh no, Talia! What a pickle to land yourself in! But I'm confident you'll find a solution. I'm a bit surprised the general didn't kill her at once, but perhaps doing it from such an advantage wouldn't be fair play. Nice to see Alex and Carl get at least some alone time.
  20. Puppilull

    Chapter 27

    That was scary. A morphing creature posing as anybody? Good thing Kohen can smell them...
  21. Puppilull

    Waltz

    Nothing would make me happier than if we all could learn how to see the actual person in front of us and not only our expectations of the person. Especially if we can't refrain from getting annoyed if the person doesn't act according to those expectations...
  22. Puppilull

    Chapter 7.3

    A trial on them all to keep moving like that. Especially with Simon falling asleep unconditionally... I'm curious to meet those bears.
  23. Puppilull

    Waltz

    Yes, he does make you feel pretty good, doesn't he? I'm really pleased you liked the dialogue. It's always a challenge to get it to sound somewhat natural. Especially when writing a younger person. I aim for flow and leave it at that. I thought Lucas would make an appearance, but I guess he was busy at work and he never showed up. Bri was probably studying. Diligent girl...
  24. Puppilull

    Chapter 23

    So many dead and then when Neredos finally shows up, he of course does something ill thought through. He's so full of his own superiority that he can't imagine having to listen to anyone. I'm hoping Grim slippedout of that helmet at the last moment.
  25. Puppilull

    Chapter 22

    So united at last! Now, how will the boys handle sharing and caring for Styx? And perhaps each other? I guess we'll see. I feel sad for Max losing his father, but it had to happen for change to happen. Now, on to the next part of the battle!
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