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I really want those cops and Gibby to join forces and bring some serious whoop ass on Daddy dearest and the deacon. Not in a violent way, but as harsh a treatment as the law can bring. I hope Ezra soon realises Josh and Abby will never let him go back to that house. It will take time to find trust though.
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Hmm... I'm beginning to wonder what really has happened to Emmett. Why is he so hesitant to have a relationship with someone he actually cares for? OK, he's worried about losing their friendship, but this seems to go much deeper than that. We've had no mention of previous hurt. On the contrary, Emm seems to have had a loving family, good friends and a successful school/work life so far. To leave Jian like that is not good. Jian must be feeling crushed, having made his gamble while Emm is in bear mode and he lost. This chapter was called 'Talk' but they haven't. Not really. Next needs to be 'Talk, seriously'.
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Door#3 - The Candy Man Can
Puppilull commented on Aditus's story chapter in Door#3 - The Candy Man Can
Waiting for toffee or fudge to be done is alays a guessing game... Even with a thermometer it's so difficult to know. We made fudge several years in a row and always forgot one ingredient (vinegar for some reason). It turned out OK anyway, but it made us laugh like crazy everytime. Oh and knäck is sooo good! I'm guessing Adi this time. So hard to tell, but it's fun to try. -
Isn't that the most important? To be together, snug and safe? Even my kids want that most of all, just have time to spend without having to rush off somewhere. The lodge will still be there another time. I'm guessing Aditus here.
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That's the thing about holidays, isn't it? All the flooding memories, both good and bad. An important message to focus on the good and let them carry you through the bad. Besides, a good cry never hurt anyone. As for writer, I'd say Valkyrie. Maybe the bay window is tricking me or the piping hot coffee...
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Well, Zac... You should feel like shit because you act as it. But I guess it's only to be expected. He never did get over Adrian and it's all too easy to be blinded by desire. Still, being asked to wait on the street hidden like some cheap secret when Austin's mom is all kinds of cool... That should tell him a thing or two.
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A very nice way to reconnect their bond... Just a moment to be simply Kraig and Deke.
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My heart went out to Austin in this chapter. How many times has he been disappointed in people, thinking they would be friends only to be abandoned? He's acting so hurt and suspicious. Very sad to see someone scared to open up even the slightest. Now more than ever I hope Adrian doesn't put any weird ideas in Zac's head. Perhaps they won't be boyfriends, but they should definitely be friends. Good for Billy to listen to himself. Perhaps the first time is built up to mean a bit too much in my opinion, but you should decide for yourself and not be pressured into it. Their parents have done a great job at raising these boys.
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Gruesome business, soul collecting... It seems improbable that Lahja will ever find his own way to do such a task. A very big leap from angel to demon in that respect. Also, I think he should ponder his question more than the actual answer...
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Oh no... Now that was not a nice ending! How will I be able to handle the suspense until next week?!? Gah!!
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LOL I don't know about believable, but I'm glad it was at least not totally outrageously fantastical. As a sucker for romance, of course there had to be romance. When I've read the other stories, most were on the sad side, so perhaps my 'little' story lightened the mood somewhat. We'll see if inspiration strikes again... Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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Yay Zac! Just don't do something stupid now, like let Adrian mess with you. I'd hate to see Austin hurt. He's such a sweet guy.
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O. Henry Short Story Prompt 3 - Hour Of The Dogman
Puppilull commented on Defiance19's story chapter in O. Henry Short Story Prompt 3 - Hour Of The Dogman
Very true how ordinary life can lose it's appeal if you're not careful. Drifting apart is all too easy and any relationship needs work, no matter what Hollywood or fairytale tell us. So I guess Sam is stuck with Wilmer. Like that one uncle we all have. A bit grumpy, not very nice actually, but family nonetheless. And once in a while, that uncle tells us a truth or two. -
Seems to me Jian is patiently waiting for Emmett to wake up, for real. He's just taking it easy, slowly hauling in his catch but being extra careful not to break the line. And Emmett is just flopping about, almost not even aware of how hooked he is. I'm glad it was a dream, because that's not the first time Emmett should treat Jian to. And preferably there will be no angry moose.
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I was sitting here thinking about A brave new world and 1984, and for a moment I felt sorry for the guy. Then he turned out to be a sleeze... So perhaps he gets what he deserves. Even if I as a lawyer rebel at the thought of someone being judged without a proper trial... Very nicely done!
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What? Where did they go? They'll end up wherever it is together, which is good.Kiorl should know his way around and back. And at least they are talking now. That's an improvement. Even if they mostly end up annoyed or frustrated. Oh, and I love that Nassau cleans up the mess he made... LOL The Prince of Hell picking up cushions...
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So both Carl and Ysabel are struggling with understanding the decisions and actions of people who they thought could be trusted. Something tells me Chamberlin could have a slightly more nobleor perhaps sane reason for not standing behind Carl. Or could he be a snake in the grass...? Yago seems to exist on his own planet somewhere, so I can't even begin to imagine what he's up to. The clouds keep gathering for our boys... Good for Ysabel to get her demon in check, but I'm curious about her change of heart. Is Alex rubbing off on her?
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Happy birthday!
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I think the conservative forces are in for a bit of an awakaning? A terrible way to bring it about, but at least some good might come from all this? I have a feeling they have to stop this and not by being even meaner to the human werekin. A meeting... Will be interesting to see how they all react to Kraig. And how Deke in turn will react to that.
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Ha ha! I also sat here and thought "I must have read this before..."! A sweet story, perfect for dessert after a long day at work (here in Sweden...)!
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It seems to me this pause in their relationship was for the better. They seemed to not talk at all before, so bringing kids into that would have been a disaster. The way they ever ended up in a house with plans of kids in such a short time made me think they saw what they wanted to see about each other, not the actual man in front of them. Perhaps now they have a better chance to have a real relationship. But word of warning... There will be late nights and lots of work intermittently for Leon. That's just how it works...
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I really enjoyed getting to follow Chase on his journey of selfdiscovery or perhaps of really getting to know himself. I can only imagine how confusing it must be to feel you don't fit in any of the more known 'boxes'. Good to see him acknowledge his feelings at last. I think Terry did the right thing. No need to fan the flames to high right away. A slow burn will probably have more longevity.
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Oh, to really endulge my Trekkie side! What a dream... I just need a lot more time to build a new world. Or I could cheat and just have a sneak peek? Hmmm... Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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Chapter 11 - Releasing the Burden
Puppilull commented on Cynus's story chapter in Chapter 11 - Releasing the Burden
So there was an explanation other than asshattery... Still, I feel his parents must have realised just how bad it all made Zane feel and still they said nothing. I can't understand such behaviour from his mother. To allow your child to suffer because they were afraid his father's career could be hindered? The tiger mom in me is rebelling strongly. I'm glad he got to go live with Clint and could find his true family, the family built on actual caring and love. Thank you for sharing your story! -
Chapter 10 - The Gravity of the Situation
Puppilull commented on Cynus's story chapter in Chapter 10 - The Gravity of the Situation
Now that was unexpected! His father has always seemed really unpleasant, but a murderer? How will his mother deal with this? Unless she gets rid of that weirdo, Zane will have ot move out. How could he possibly stay there? So perhaps his wish for Clint's father could come true sooner than through marriage...
