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Jason Rimbaud

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  1. I slept with two pilots, a customs officer who smelled of fish, and a random twink that didn't help the cause, he just looked like the statue of David. Cost me three orgasms, and a fake one. Cheap on the grand scale of things.
  2. Is it the more physical aspects you like? You know, Cassie is a certified member of the Parent Teacher's Association, I'm sure she's good a paddling.
  3. Damn, your loyalty is all over the place. Just know I am steadfast, I don't waver, I'm an equal opportunity shit stirrer. .
  4. To anyone reading this, the other person that does, Davide not only knows the name of my restaurant, but he's gotten a virtual tour sponsored by HotOnes, as well as I overnighted him an order of wings because he found me on Google Earth out back of my restaurant drinking coffee and smoking my strawberry kiwi vape. .
  5. She's not a Pokémon; you can't just summon her like a vengeful elf when Ben gets out of line. *holds up a card* I summon QueenCassie, destroyer of worlds, putting in place Jason's of every stripe.
  6. Don't be so modest, you were so proud of your new "nickname", and now when the hornets are flying, you pretend you are innocent! .
  7. Not sure, last summer, I went silent for two months while I worked on my secret project. If I get in the zone, I tend to hyper focus on projects. Also, around the SuperBowl, I took off two weeks as I had to contend with that madness. Hahaha, I might put up what I have under my throw away file.
  8. You need to get better sleep! Then you wouldn't be so tired! .
  9. I'm assuming, the "us" you are referring, is Ben and you, right? Ben wanted me to ask.
  10. Not sure why I decided to kick that hornet's nest today. But I'm sure Cassie isn't going to let that go without some kind of retort. Not saying I don't deserve her wrath, but my Monday was going too well, had to upset the status quo I guess. As for Thirdly, she likes me, but I'm probably going to get it from her as well. As I only assumed she was Between-The-Boobs, as I admitted earlier, my kryptonite.
  11. I'm not so sure you want to get between those two if they ever decided to stop playing around and just admit they are in love with each other. You might get squished. .
  12. Jason Rimbaud

    Amalgamate

    No. So we have one solid vote for Twin Brother. Noted.
  13. Jason Rimbaud

    Cain

    I've come back to this to read multiple times now. I love the imagery, the anger throughout, the lustful desire, and incest. And then, once the deed was done, you have murder to boot. This is a complex yet angry look at religion and the adherence to a manual written by Bronze Age tent dwellers. Sorry it took so long to comment. This stuck with me, and I've thought about it for days. I also had a much longer comment, but my views on religion aren't important here, or anywhere really. What a wonderful piece. By far the most subversive of all the entries thus far. Love it.
  14. Good instincts. Do you remember earlier, when I said the characters started dictating their own behavior and personality? Much like with Brandon and his love of watersports, Tyler was never supposed to be the bottom. When I was writing this scene, suddenly he was sitting on Brandon's dick, and it was a huge surprise to me. In my original notes, Tyler was the top, and Brandon was the bottom. But looking back, I had included dialogue and narrative beats that, like a trail of breadcrumbs, march straight ahead that Brandon, smaller, bullied, and overlooked, was a top and Tyler, popular, successful with the women in his life, was a power bottom. And the whole weak, little twink that needs protection from the big jock, was over done. Flip the power dynamic and see what happens. I think it works well for our duo. I always assumed, Brandon thought, if this was the last kiss, he was going to make it last all night. If this was the last time he was ever gonna hold him, he'd hold him tight til the morning light. If this was the last time, they'd ever be together. Then he'd give him something tender to remember him" Maybe Lee will get the reference, maybe.
  15. Jason Rimbaud

    Amalgamate

    You know there was a planned trilogy. I'm not going to write it probably, unless something happens and this story becomes popular. Let's go over the rumors again. Who is our mysterious man? Is it Frederick, Mehmet's man sent to kill both the Senator and Gabriel? Is it Gabriel's twin brother, in a desperate attempt to save his brother? Is it a Homeland Security agent trying to stop the assassination attempt? Is it an old army buddy? If so, what could the motivation be? If you look over the theories, only one really makes sense to me. What do you think?
  16. It's Monday. I'm continuing my re-watch of Survivor. I am not midway through Season Twenty Heroes VS Villains, the season where the Queen stays Queen. (those of you, maybe one, that know, know) Quick Update. I finally got a version of Frosted Hearts last chapter that I'm super excited about. I know people have been waiting patiently, but I wasn't going to do something half (rabbit) ass just to get it out. So look for that shortly, as I am going through final edits. Gabriel's Gambit is two or three chapters away from ending. I've been posting one chapter a day for about a week. The goal is to have both stories wrapped up this week. The stress I put on myself with Frosted Hearts is one I won't be repeating again. I will no longer ever post a story until it is finished. It's not fair to the readers, all twelve of you, to have to wait, and I don't want to deal with the anxiety of deadlines. After I clean the slate, I am jumping headfirst into Tyler's Dilemma Part Two. And I'll probably go silent for a while as I spend all my time in that universe. This year, new content wise, is looking like Tyler's Dilemma Part Two, maybe the Secret Author story if the theme is one I like, and the third Christmas story in Glacier Bay. I've put out more work in the last year than I have in twenty years. But that damn one chapter Christmas story broke my brain. I am currently dabbling with six different stories. After Tyler's Dilemma, I think I'm going to jump headfirst into a story I'm calling the Echos of The Last Dawn. My take on the literal end of humanity as we know it. Currently, I'm about 80K words into a planned 140K. But that could change just as fast as I discarded my plans for Gabriel's Gambit to be a trilogy. So this year might be sparse unless I drop a one off story here or maybe there. I need time to write in the manner I am most comfortable with. Rewrites and more rewrites until I am happy with the final result. Who knows, I might even still write my epic Sci-Fi novel G I Ants. The next masterpiece starring members of GA.
  17. Sex scenes have no place on GA! Whether AI assists or not. Jeff and Topher have the right idea, just hints, and fading to black.
  18. I dare anything! Congrats you two!
  19. Thank you. This was one of my favorites for sure. Probably written twenty years ago now.
  20. Jason Rimbaud

    Amalgamate

    They are straight, no dirty gay sex for them! Promise! I thought it was a fun twist on his super macho image, plus I wanted to show that DJ is fully committed to Michael. They need to be a strong couple moving forward. Damn, I already spoiled this in my above comment. Pretend you didn't read that. I don't know if the Senator lives or dies. .
  21. Jason Rimbaud

    Amalgamate

    He's just a good father. It's her birthday, he took her to see her favorite band. He's there more for her than for any other reason. Or the reason is the plot. He needed to be there so Gabriel's story began. He is introduced in this story and had a bigger part to play in the next story, like Michael and DJ, and Tiger Lane, who was also introduced for that same reason. They are all important in the future.
  22. Ahem. *steps on soap box* "Why are we objectifying people's looks? Isn't it enough that they went around the moon? They are highly trained, highly disciplined men and also women who have done something not very many people have accomplished. We should be heralding these humans as heroes, not some weird space fetish." *steps down off soap box* What do you really think? "None of them are that attractive at all, and the thought of them boning in space kind of makes me nauseous." So the whole soapbox statement was just to be contrarian? "Pretty much."
  23. The Senator and his daughter had left the park after a final publicity photo op with the guys. Mysterious Neon now went to the main pavilion to do their live broadcast and choose the winners of the contest they had been promoting for weeks. The prize consisted of two backstage passes, front row seats to the show, and the VIP after party. At the last minute they had thrown in an invitation to attend sound check. The package had their fans flocking to the park for a chance to win tickets to
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