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The Hospital and The Chaplain
Defiance19 commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in The Hospital and The Chaplain
I continue to admire your blunt honesty in sharing some of your darkest times. You are a survivor, and you've had amazing people help and guide you. More than your honesty, I admire the strength and determination that you possessed in order for you to get to here. You already know how much I love you, and that I think you are amazing, and that I hope you continue to be unwavering in this journey. But I always like to say it again, just in case... -
Sticky Fingers be Damned
Defiance19 commented on Dayne Mora's story chapter in Sticky Fingers be Damned
Finally the gift giver revealed.. Preston and Indie, I can't wait to see what gives, as the two of them try to prove whatever to the other. I think you know Preston is my fav, and I think he and Indie make so much sense, so just don't have Indie be a total ass to him. So we got three chapters really fast. I hate to ask if there's more coming? -
Graeme has a good idea, but there are so many good lines to choose from. Was Indie actually trying to be nice to Cory, even though he had to be disappointed that Cory was not reall hung over? Chapter did not disappoint, Dayne.. Well done!
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This was a perfect chapter, I thought. The only blip was Andy think he was responsible for all the chores. That somehow he had to pay back the good fortune. A little knee jerk reflex, which I'm sure will happen from time to time. I was wondering too, why Mrs S was surprising him with those appointments, but I'm glad that Andy asked and got a satisfactory answer. I hope the doctor is able to help Andy make his life a more meaningful one. I couldn't be any happier that Andy is loved and is learning to love in return. Excellent Valentine's Day for both boys and the parents too. The note he left Zander's parents was so heartfelt, and of course Zander is his. I do love their connection. Great job as always Parker!
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Week Eight Wednesday, October 22, 2014: Getting Dumped
Defiance19 commented on skinnydragon's story chapter in Week Eight Wednesday, October 22, 2014: Getting Dumped
Finally,the Kathy dump off. Don't even care who dumped whom. (I'm thrilled on behalf of CG). Hope she and Cal are happy. By the looks of it though, Gary may have something to say about that. I feel so sad for David. Even with his dad's reassurances and Ginny's care, he is still so lost. For lack of a better word. It broke my heart that he fell asleep crying. To Parker's point, I think Tommy's mother is so far gone, so deep in the pastor's clenches, that she probably would entertain throwing David out because he said it was the right thing to do. Whether Gramps or their dad manage to get her to see reason remains to be seen. The Erik, David and Twoey study tripling is going to be most interesting. Great chapter SkinnyD. More please! -
Smitten Wolfie, Drunken Boyfriend
Defiance19 commented on Dayne Mora's story chapter in Smitten Wolfie, Drunken Boyfriend
No one should be subjected to Frozen! And I probably say this because I've been made to watch it multiple, multiple times! This was as usual a great chapter. The boys bumping uglies was hot of course. I wonder how much Cory will remember in the morning and will he be embarrassed when he realises they had company.. Let's see how Indie's morning noise plan goes over. All the nicknames... Preston is boss. -
Completely understand Andy's ambivalence. None of these feelings are going to disappear soon, if ever. He will have to learn to deal with them and hopefully with a good psychologist he will. It must be hard existing in that space where you want to feel good but can't really accept that you deserve it. However hard it is, he is showing that inner strength again. Making it through the Doctor's visit was tough. Thankfully he had Zander whom he could totally break down with.. It's a long road to recovery, but he is not alone. I didn't think Terry and Kaz knew about Zander, but that puts their whispered conversation earlier into perspective. Nice how Zander and Andy came out as boyfriends. An exceptional chapter Parker.. Well done!
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Week Eight Tuesday, October 21, 2014: Jeter Retired (again)
Defiance19 commented on skinnydragon's story chapter in Week Eight Tuesday, October 21, 2014: Jeter Retired (again)
One of the things David got right when it comes to his perception of the relationship, is the emotional disconnect between him and his mother. I lack colorless language to describe her. For all his bravado, David must be aching inside. At least he's thinking he has places to go if he does indeed get kicked out. I think the sinister plan is worse than that, but we'll see. Josiah does need his face rearranged. Luckily, I'm not a violent person.. It was nice to see Liz btw. Matty is working David and I love it! I can't wait for David to get a clue. And Twoey needs to give his love a hug, he needs it too.. Great chapter SkinnyD, feels like trouble is waiting round the corner.. -
Poetry Prompt 17 - And To Sleep, My Son and Don't Wanna
Defiance19 commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Poetry Prompt 17 - And To Sleep, My Son and Don't Wanna
You. Nailed. It.!! Both poems speak perfectly to those parent/child moments. The pleading back and forth, that little tug of war to see how far they can go. It brought back memories and I still sort of go through that with little ones. I really loved them Tim. So great! -
HAPPY BIRTHDAY DUGH!!! May this birthday be as amazing as you!
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Haha, Romero ordering Preston to fix it! Preston is such a good friend.. Also an attack twink, lol.. Indie should be worried. It's so cool that Efrain was the one to go the boyfriend route. I especially liked their talk in the truck. They could have done that from jump, but poor Cory was understandably hurt... And now we move on.. Next..
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Poetry Prompt 6 - Elegy
Defiance19 commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Poetry Prompt 6 - Elegy
Such a beautiful ode, to a love that stood the test of time. I feel your words Tim, so very meaningful.. Great job, sir. Thank you for sharing it... -
You Can Look, But You Better Not Touch
Defiance19 commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in You Can Look, But You Better Not Touch
Winter is off to a fantastic start.. CJ, Thiago and Harley still got their magic. Their interactions are so real, I totally believe their characters. Harley should never change, ever! And the jeep, detonator yellow! Finally, the color is revealed along with the name. Defiant- love it. Now I know why shaking the dads present was pointless.. CJ chose well. CJ is ready to explore Australia. Ceasar's little chat should go a long way in preventing little mishaps, but I can't wait for this adventure to begin.. Next stop Oz.. Thank you Carlos! We are back! -
I have to come back to like this, but I loved the story.. It was absolutely sweet and wonderful and full of heart. Bear and Ben were great together, and for sure I wouldn't mind if you let us peep in on them again! Thank you for sharing.. Happy New Year!
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MY BEST WISHES FOR A VERY HAPPY NEW YEAR EMI!
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Chapter 3- CG- On My Mind
Defiance19 commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 3- CG- On My Mind
I'm so glad you posted this Gary, thank you. You expressed how we all feel beautifully. Our thoughts are with CG... -
Loved the scene between the judge and Mr S. Very realistic. I hope that things in Carlsberg aren't too complicated and can be easily resolved. At the same time I want to know what went there with the investigation. This is an amazing new beginning for Andy, and I am excited for him to start off with all of that not weighing him down. When things calm down I wonder if Zander or the gang will remember to ask who Green Hat was, since Andy did claim him as his father. Then there's the unknown of Uncle Ray.. I'm looking forward to where we're headed next Parker.. Thank you for another great chapter.
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I'm ready mate.. Can't wait to join CJ and the gang down under... Yep, Aussie speak. Be happy you can't hear the accent Which goes with it.
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Exactly 'shit'! Indie strikes again! He really needs to get over himself. Poor Cory, sucks to have to hear all that.. Can't wait for Efrain to smooth this over, it's not even his fault.. Another fantastic chapter Dayne..
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Tantalus was great.. Can't wait for part 2.. The Pact was creepy, (spiders ach!) but so good.. Albert's writing is just amazing!
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Chapter 53 Two Winning Hands
Defiance19 commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 53 Two Winning Hands
Nate and Bodie really can't get any sweeter can they? Oh to be young and in love.. They really have something special between them, and it's beautiful to watch it bloom. I'm curious as to what the engraving will be on the chain. Can't imagine what the uncles will say once the see it. Also the box sounded really cool. Unfortunately, Josh missed out on Nate as a boyfriend, but he has a great friend who gives good advice. I really hope things go well for Josh as well and he doesn't have to be scared. I appreciate the great strides that Mark is making, especially by talking to Bodie. His offer to be there for Josh shows how far he is willing to go. As usual Big Mike had me smiling big.. All sorts of things can happen at the skating rink. Can't wait to see what comes next.. Thank you for another lovely chapter Gary. -
This reduced me to tears. It was beautifully written, but heart wrenching in its delivery. I felt, still feel so deeply for Mark.. Great chapter..
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So. Much. Heat.. Not complaining! Oh Indie with the snark.. Love Efrain falling apart, breaking his rules almost as much as I love Cory falling for him.. Smart one that Efrain, leaving his mark on Cory! Preston cracks me up... I know more is coming, so I won't resort to begging.. Another great chapter Dayne..
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Week Eight Monday, October 20, 2014: Anticipation
Defiance19 commented on skinnydragon's story chapter in Week Eight Monday, October 20, 2014: Anticipation
Well even as good things are happening, there is an ominous undercurrent. First Burch, what the hell btw, and then Josiah!! If each had happened singularly, maybe there'd be no need for concern just yet. But yes, something is definitely up.. Even frikkin Kathy wasn't stalking him.. Speaking of which, Twoey is back! Lol.. He came out Lanni too. Not gonna lie, I thought Lanni would have her little own confession too. I love the easy back and forth with David. Nice of David too, having everyone text him to keep his spirits up.. That's what good boyfriends do..hehe.. I still feel that David even as he is aware of his feelings for Twoey, and he's not denying it, there is that separate space. Boxes you call it I think.. But he is changing whether he realises it or not. Small things he does and says. Planning future dinners with Twoey, being nice to Erik, falling asleep comforted by Twoey's I love you. Slowly but surely, and I know, not without some difficulty. Yay, Chapter 50 SkinnyD! And it was a great one! -
Still a wonderful present even after Christmas.. Hopefully this means that Levi will have a better go of it this time around. At least he and Matt will enjoy the holiday.. Lovely chapter Puppilull
