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Very good story C. You did really well drawing on their feelings and portraying the setting. I really hope they do get to start anew and the planet is everything they hope for. Well done..

This was heartbreaking but beautiful written. They were only just celebrating their engagement and now we're here. A harsh reality that it could all be taken away in a split second. What a roller coaster of emotions, as you captured each man's despair and distress but gave us hope. With Romeo's memories breaking through, their love will be that much stronger the second time around. Really great job Adi! (five hankies)

So, I won't admit to checking around the doors as I move about the house, or making sure that I have a night light on later. That was just the kind of eerie, scary, creepy stuff that I like. You did a great job leading me in Val.. Well done.

This mama bear is so proud of her cub. This was really a good story and the descriptions were so clear, I could place myself there. Luke described too, how he took care of his bike not trading it in because of faded paint. It belatedly made me realise, well of course he's not going to give up on a years long friendship. He's not that guy. Adam on the other hand is obviously going to have to come to terms with something that maybe interferes with his beliefs. I hope his response to the text reflects the value of their friendship also.. There was mention of calculus and slopes and quotients .... I skipped it as I had no idea what that meant! Very well done Drew!

This was a wonderful story of a love so deep and determined. How lucky is David to be worthy of that. When he came back David was ok. Was David's pain what he was feeling, why his own suddenly went away. I wondered about that too and that's the only thing I came up with. Beautiful and well told Gary..

I love when David surprises me. I never expected him to go full force on the first visit. I am so proud of him.. Now I'll be patiently waiting to see how it goes. I read your response to CG. So happy Kathy will be getting the ax, I don't care how messy it is for her or David. When David said she was 'less than impressed' after his cooking spiel, I was ready to be done with her.. Speaking of cooking, I don't know if that's your intention, but Ginny's cooking lessons strike me as a form of therapy for David. I only say that because I use play therapy in my classroom sometimes to draw a particular child out and get them talking without causing stress. Something about the cooking isn't about recipes, conversation just reminded me of that. Very cool. A great chapter SkinnyD. ps: I really want David to stay on CG's good side.

Very emotional poem Parker. It touches a deeper part of Andy than we already see. Great job..

Lol... This was great.. Larry probably heard enough of his dads, to go find out on his own what the fuss was all about. Enter Penny! We'll just ignore her owner. James and Faris are always a delight. Funny, sexy, loving, teasing and never fail to lighten any mood. Now we add Francis to the mix.. I see all sorts of fun.. Thanks Tim

This turned out to be good for now. You know, a lot of what happens to Andy has the potential to out his situation in the worst way. It's terrible that bad things still befall him, but I'm encouraged that the outcomes so far are kind of positive. I have a bit of concern about the phone call he made from Zander's dad phone. Is it in possession with the police? Are they keeping tabs, and what if Zander's dad decide to call the number for whatever reason. I am inclined to believe that this is where it begins to unravel, but not necessarily for the worst although it will be difficult going forward. Great chapter Parker.

Happy Birthday!

Gah!..... Landyn told Noel, not to ignore his 6th sense, yet they all did anyway. Considering what happened the last time someone should have insisted. I get the losing face bit, but I am sure the council, knowing the threat should understand. Unless they're in on it.. I am thinking perhaps, Diarmand bit Noel as a way to connect them? Maybe since Diarmand drank his blood he will sense Noel somehow? Monday is too far way! Anyway, their coupling was endearing as it was hot.. Breakfast in the morning with the rest of the gang was too funny and very realistic. Another great chapter Adi.. I'll try not to think about the cliffie.

This sudden urge to 'claim' Kathy, is further cementing David's plan to arrange his life. But it seems the harder he pushes, the push back is just as insistent. Just like that, we throw Matty into the mix of things that throw David for a loop. Matty would be thrilled if he knew! I think Ginny has a pretty good read on David, judging by her advice on how he should approach the doctor. I don't think any of us are expecting those first sessions to go well. There are shadows lurking on the edges of Twoey's memory.. Right now, I worry about what the repercussions of that memory will do to Twoey more than his love for David... Another good one SkinnyD....

I love this one Gary. (not that I don't love the others) Its amazing how a walk in this case, or a run gives clarity and provides perspective. You are so aware of your surroundings and the pounding in your ears, the smells, the burn, the sting of the cold and somehow all it does is help you keep focus. Troubles not gone, but not insurmountable, possibilities endless, the future a lot less daunting. It's the best! Then you find you've gone much further than you intended.

These poems are powerful Tim, and they speak volumes. You are so good at articulating your feelings and with such honesty. It makes it easy to recognise what those words represent personally. My hope is that these illusions are fleeting. That there is a sure certainty in the hope you allude to. That the trickster will eventually fade into obscurity. Hugs....

Oh, Flauros... Ok so I don't know anything about them, but I am excited to find out! The impending mystery is very intriguing.. Love the set up. The Alectarian's disdain for Audra is appalling, and I just know they will regret it when she ends up having to save their ass. Especially the little smart mouth kid. Audra is amused by her brother and Merrick, meanwhile she has her own knight standing by much as she hates it. Watching those four toggle work and want is going to be so much fun.. Thanks for another great chapter Lit!

No! Just no.. Everything I was going to say just got thrown aside by that ending.. Leaving us this way is cruel Parker....

Great first chapter SkinnyD. I was totally caught up in this story. So interesting how Toph is, or chooses to be so different from his fellow Euphorites his parents included. I wonder how that happened. It did make me like him immediately as someone who knows who he isn't. Could Garret be Gary the new roommate? That would be a trip. I look forward to the rest. I absolutely agree with Parker, it's a pity the slow roll out on chapters, but it will be worth it.

How does Jason stand up to Pamchenko and then allow himself to be reduced pint size by his mother.. I happen to believe that she is no better than the fiancé. Love the sinner hate the sin BS. Jason's horrible outburst at Shane probably had a lot to do with those ideologies and not wanting them to be turned on to him for being the same as Shane! Hope he comes out of that really fast. It seems like Pamchenko really cares for Shane. I'm curious to find out about his son, and how their family broke apart.. And now how and where will Jason fit in..

I caught the interview too Lisa.. I had just pulled in to park when it came on, and Elvis said Troye. I only listened because of Drew too. I'm glad I did as it was a good interview and Troye is a very well spoken young man!

Given all the hints, I fully expect David to spiral further down this path before he even begins to want to confront his truths, whatever they are. There is only so much the kid can take, and there is so much going on beside his confusion over his sexuality. I also think that because Ginny recommended Dr. K, he will be the kind of doctor David needs. I'm betting he will see beyond what David says and work with him from the point David is comfortable at. That's important, so yes the road back to reality will be long and agonizing. David will do head scratching stuff but I'm still on his side. Maybe David will decide the Dr. doesn't work for him and Ginny will have to talk him into it. His mother could find out.. David is such an unknown right now anything could happen... I'm rambling I know.. Kathy will be an obvious casualty, sad but unavoidable. I feel badly for Twoey, but only in the sense that his hurt will come from not being able to do a damn thing for David.. Maybe Erik will help him pass the time. I don't want to underestimate Twoey either.. Good chapter SkinnyD!

It did make me smile! That was very fun, I can see the magic happening as the elves work away! Thank you Tim!

Dear PROMISING AUTHOR, this was a fantastic chapter!! Passion purple it was.. Kendall and Michael are so beautiful together. Nurturing, attentive and passionate. I really enjoy how they talk to each other, considerate of on another. This is how it should be in a perfect world. You did them good. I am glad that their alone time happened in their old home. It's almost like they came full circle there. Now they are leaving as new men in a way, with a new home to look forward to, a new baby and new memories to make. Also, time alone will be hard to come by with a full house. Wait.. Maybe they should have kept the apt as a get away. It was great running into Chet. I love what Agnes is doing for her boys. It makes total sense. Talk about full circle huh, who would have thunk! Thanks Gary, for never letting us down with these guys.

Well, I sure didn't expect that! I'm glad Andy didn't kill Green hat even though he deserves it. Now he's penniless, his friends are probably reeling. The repercussions are sure to be life changing, the questions are unavoidable I would imagine. I don't think his friends will turn their backs, but they won't be okay with a shrug now.. It's a wonder Andy isn't half way across town now. If anything Andy has proven he's resilient, but this is such a step back from all the personal progress he was making.. Great chapter Parker..

Aw, they were looking for Andy at the party. Seems like his friends really do care, but it's becoming a tad bit more personal. How long before the gang stops accepting shrugs as answers. I am glad that he's getting out though and experiencing a day at the movies. There's so much he needs to get current on. Good chapter, moving on..

CONGRATULATIONS GARY, it is well deserved!