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"...given Brian all he needed to finally decide who's life he wanted to live." - In the end, that's what really matters. He can't and shouldn't let his father's betrayal define him. Thank you for a wonderful review Puppi, I really appreciate it.
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I always want to hear you say I did great, because I'm always so twisted up inside when I send you stuff. You input and guidance help me so much and I can only hope to do better.. Thank you for supporting me and for all your help. I appreciate it more than you'll know..
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Lisa, I think it's pretty awesome that I'm responding to your review on my story. That is insane. Your reviews are legendary.. Brian's dad is definitely a coward and maybe not worthy of his sons' forgiveness. I wish I were confident enough to say yes to a sequel! Thank you so much for reading this story and loving it and leaving such a lovely review!
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You are welcome! I'm glad you loved the story. I had fun writing it. Thank you for leaving a review. I appreciate it very much.
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Lol.. I'm not so sure giving up the day job is a good idea. I love it too much. I do appreciate the sentiment though. I'm so happy with the response to this little story I can't even tell you. Thank you for being such a supportive friend, and for this great review.
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Your response made me so glad I didn't tell you about this before. Now I will treasure it. I don't even know what to say. I'm in awe.. I'm so very happy you loved this. Thank you so much Carlos, for your support and being in my corner. I'm looking forward to that drink my friend.
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I think Brian will have a hard time forgiving his father too. No matter what happens though, he will have Nate from now on. Thank you for a great review. I appreciate it.
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Gary, I'm so glad you loved this. Your pride in me is inspiring and humbling. Your support means the world to me so thank you for that and this awesome review..
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Thank you tim. No matter what you say, your help is invaluable and is much appreciated. Can't believe I won either. It felt like a reward for being brave enough to submit to the Antho. Do I have more in my fingers? Maybe..(AC just ordered more red ink) Thank you again for your endless support. I could not have asked for a better sidekick.. xoxo
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My heart broke reading this. I hope for his nephew things will be different. That this is a true story makes me sick to the stomach. So very tragic. This one will linger a while Emi... Well done...
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This was a tough read. Good story mind you, but tough. I can't imagine that Sam so easily took a life. Even for his mother. How easy will it be for him to do it or something equally horrible to gain or stay in her favor. I wonder if it will weigh on him, what he's done or if he's able to just shirk it off as something that needed to happen. I feel sad for him though. You have me thinking on this one Emi... Well done..
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Fantastic story. The letters were a beautiful representation of the past and present, going strength and comfort to Mark. I liked the idea that they would be donated to the museum. Mark's dad was right in that he wasn't giving his grandfather away, instead part of him would always be alive and remembered.. Great job... Thank you..
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Oh, this is happy and sad. Ben and Jake, their true love won't be denied, but I can't imagine how this must be for their respective partners. The kids too, but they are resilient and if done right they have an extra person to love them. Bittersweet Val, but very well done.. Great job!
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Ben and Myles are very interesting. That Ben can't speak adds another layer of intrigue as they brave this world together. I think of all we take for granted, a shout to warn of danger, a cry for help. No doubt they will have to find a way to make it work. Their story started sad, but is hopeful at the end. If you do expand (yes please) it would be curious to see how they survive the other teens, what a new world order so to speak , of teens would look like. Great ob as usual Cia.... Thank you.
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This was such a good story. Brook's hesitancy and Chase's struggle and their interactions all felt so real. I love that Chase took Sam's advice straightaway and then I loved Terry's terms. Friends first is always a good rule. Great read, thank you..
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I can't believe how A I has turned into this amazing series. I love that they are soul mates and we always hoped it would end there.. You crafted this story perfectly Tim. I love reading about the missions and all the back and forth on the right and wrong and maybes on the intended targets.. The ending was perfect too, although I'm sure there will be mild protestations, but you can't fight fate. I'm looking forward to more soon?! Thank you Tim, I loved it! I love Angie and Imp..
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Sniff... I didn't want it to end either. That was a perfect, wonderful and most satisfying send off for the boys. Thank you for an amazing story Lit, it was truly a great ride. - Might a spin off for Liam be in the works? I can discount him stealth lessons at the International Spy Headquarters
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The odd couple! So fun to read, I really enjoyed this. Not even the pesky detectves could ruin it. I'm so glad they have a way to communicate now, and Perry is a much better name to roll around.. By your ending I'm hoping we see more of this unconventional couple. Great story Puppi... Thank you.
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Brilliant Adi.. The battle, Oliver's emotions, his desire to fight for and be with Adam all beautifully laid out. Love will win out in the end. Oliver won't be mad for long Adam shouldn't worry so much.. I hope we get to find out.. Very well done... Thank you..
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The feelings of fear and anxiety were definitely felt throughout. You managed to keep me on edge as I was reading. That invasion of your space stays with you and can affect you in ways that you don't expect. I'm glad you're okay, but sorry that you had to go through it. Great job Cole, thank you..
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That was tense. You had to feel for both Brady and Ryan. Stolen kisses would have never been enough, I don't think. Brady bravely outed himself even if it did take a sock to the jaw. Ouch.. If we get more of the two, it will be great to see how that revelation impacts the others.. Great job CM, I loved it..
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Oh my goodness... Like AC said you need that surgery! Having your pressure high does complicate things but I'm keeping my fingers crossed and hoping it all goes well..
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I guess I did pick a side huh.. My sister got a call to attend a funeral for her client. They had family, but no one would claim them. The request it turns out came from the man in the morgue. It made me wonder about him and what it was like. This poem was my attempt to express that, so I'm glad I did it some justice.. Thank you Adi.. I really appreciate your review..
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tim, you do know being my sidekick is a lifetime commitment right? Too late now! Your help with this was truly valuable to me. You stripped the extra lines and words, and suddenly less was more.. I'm learning and I'm grateful, always.. Thank you.. xoxo
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Gary, you are so wonderful to me. Your review warmed my lil wannabe poet's heart. You know what you think means so much, so I truly appreciate this. Thank you for your support and kind words..
