Defiance19

Clint, whatever you're thinking, stop. Or maybe don't stop, as I was smiling throughout. I'm going to appropriate the title, A Series of Unfortunate Events, and apply it to Clint. Though depending on the outcome, it might be Fortunate.. He already made a friend after his first misadventure, I can't wait to see what happens now. I agree reed with Dad, he should tell his sister. I think she'd be a great ally, and to tell her with everyone else doesn't seem right.. But it's up to Clint, I know! Nice chapter Cynus....

Well darn if that little slice of happy didn't make me tear up. After all Rayn and Daniel have been through, they deserved this wonderful ending. A fantastic, emotional tale, very well told from the start. Thank you Nephy!

So um, AC and Gary a little trivia.. Guess which show I was so into, it inspired my profile name? Firefly will always have a special spot in my heart. Original Star Trek and Twiglight Zone are my faves..

Ha! So Corey is not so immune to Jason. But neither thinks the other is or could be interested. Now for them to clue in. The re established friendship is on solid footing and is a great base for a future relationship. Jason just needs to keep doing what he's being doing and Corey needs to see a way he can trust Jason with his heart.. It will be so good once they're on the same page. Right Lit?

You know, despite the fact that Toby royally screwed up, I think it did Daniel good. He might never have unleashed on his brother otherwise. That needed to happen, so they would stop treating him and Silas too, as if they were still broken. If therapy is helping, Toby should have trusted Daniel to make that choice with Carlos. I understand his instinctual reaction to protect his brother, but it's time to let him grow.. Now, will that hinder the progress Calos and Daniel have made toward each other? Time or Caz will tell I guess.. Great chapter from that prompt Caz...

That slap may have woken Twoey up some. Hopefully enough to where he doesn't completely fall for Erik's acts of contrition. I wonder if this is not Erik's first go round. He has the role down.. It would be even better if Twoey would say something, but that's not likely to happen. That dream would shatter anyone's state of mind. His core group abandoning him including his brother, and Danny who is dead is on his side. That's a nightmare! It also shines a light on Danny's premonition with regard to David's state of mind.. Everything is out of order.. I don't know that Dr. K could do otherwise with his upcoming trip. Actually, I'm sure he could. David is in crisis. He is a practical and smart thinking kid. He understands he might be gay, but the larger issue of abuse is lurking. He did great this session, but when things really start to come to a head, will he feel abandoned by the doc too. A new doctor in place is common, but David has trust issues. Ahh.. I hope he will go to Ginny, but this doesn't bode well. Speaking of trust.. Dear old dad could have used a slap himself.. (Not condoning violence) But geez. He remains so passive about what happened to David. How does David not rage against the man. There's your person to blame right there.. What more can I say but sorry? Really that's all.. Sorry will never make up for the crap he put those kids through. Anyhoo, great chapter as usual SkinnyD....

Oh dear... I'm happy they had that intense moment before Kraig lost it. Hopefully somehow he will manage to tap into those feelings and allow Deke to help him. I'm sure it's only just the beginning. It can't be easy for Deke to watch either.

I suppose it will take a little bit for Ryan to accept that Clayton is a gazillionaire. That Clay does not act that way should go a long way. I liked the way they worked it out though. It allows Ryan to keep his pride intact for now as pretty soon I'm sure it won't matter much... I've said it before, but I love that I feel like I could walk into The Bar, and be a part of the going ons. The show, the honoring of the heroes was just great fun! I won't mention that thing you did at the end there... Great chapter Rex, and I'm happy to hear you're on the mend.. Stay the course!

As much as I liked Planetary Motion, the last verse got me, I think Aspirations just did me in.. Loved it!

HAPPY HAPPY Birthday TO YOU!!

Aw, tim. This was beautifully written and communicated. Loved it..

Nano/micro stories? I like that in 55 words you are forced to be concise. That makes you get straight to the heart of the story.. You did so quite skillfully my friend. I enjoyed them. Well done!

So happy for Tilly and Kellar. Adelin's healing could mean great success for most if not all of the pack. Im going to assume that Tilly was not strong or healthy enough to tap into her energy. Wishful thinking would have me suggest that Kellar's energy is stronger with Tobyn's. That he could do more, faster, than if it were someone else.. Maybe not so wishful? Kellar noted that as he was able to tune everything out, he was still aware of Tobyn. The awareness and attraction these to share, seems to draw them together no matter what their intentions. We all know how well intended they both are, but how long will they be able to escape the inevitable if they are indeed going to be together. Someone will soon notice, and the strain of denying themselves will take its toll. Then what... Ok, so let's heal the pack, I don't want to get way ahead of myself. I will be patient and wait for what comes next.. You never disappoint Gary.. This was a great chapter..

You know, Dr K is lucky David talked to him at all. And kudos to David for knowing that he needed to, more than he wanted to be angry.. He, (Doc) handled that Ginny told me thing so poorly. David is the client he should not have felt betrayed. When Ginny told him, he should have asked if David knew she was sharing, and told her to inform him. If he wasn't sure that had happened or he didn't follow up, then he should have started off with leading questions based on the info he had. Trust is important especially for David! Ugh, why that made me do upset.. Anyway.. Twoey is so tangled in his love that he can't hear himself say all the things that should make him worry. Why wait until Erik's in a better mood. What happens when/if he's not. What if he thinks Twoey wants Mike. What then. Abusers don't think logically. So Erik runs his life, separates him from all he knows and rewards him with sex on Wednesdays for being a good pup.. Unless he does know and is so embarrassed that he let this happen, and now he has no one to talk to about it so he's making it look real good and making excuses for Erik.. Not that this scenario is any better. Still upset... Donny's easy counsel continues to amaze me. He better be one of the good guys Skinny.. Maybe you could introduce him to Randy.. Now we move on.. Thanks SkinnyD.. You always keep us guessing.. As a side note: such a noticeable difference in the two sets of parents (Alex and Donny), meeting David.

I expected Alex to be a bit more reactive. I was pleasantly surprised. And she wants to help David with Twoey. But we have David making plans with Donny.. If Twoey isn't careful he'll be left out.. I kid. Ive never been more anxious for David to see the Doc. Also, high five Mike. He called the house and spoke to Ginny. Glad he did, but is that enough to get Ginny to look more closely at Twoey with Erik..

This was an excellent chapter with the subtexts and Adam's personal turmoil. I find myself curiously invested in the choices he will make now. How far will he go to, or how long will he be able to keep his three selves separate. Can he even succeed at this point. I wonder how much of an impact Justine will have on those decisions. Kevin in the meantime is giving a little more. The spotlight maybe on Becker, but I'm betting Kevin maybe feeling a similar crisis even if it's not as weighty as Adam's.

I have a feeling.. Oh forget it. I know I'm going to like this one.. Clint is immediately likable. His relationship with his dad warmed my heart, and Dad is brilliant. Rainbow cast? Cmon. His easy support and encouragement tells me they are deeply connected. Mom isn't around and Dad didn't check out. Can't get better than that.. Nice start Cynus, I find the tone light and engaging.. I am in.. Looking forward to more.

That was absolutely, wonderfully satisfying.. That's all..

Ahh..interruptions. Nice Caz. There are hints of larger things yet to be revealed. While that sparks my curiosity, I like how you keep us focused still on the guys and what's happening with them at present...

It's nice to see Carlos a bit vulnerable, yet still so in tune with Daniel's feelings/ needs. I like the pair together..

Aw, Jason... This was funny though. The kid pretty much blew his theories of why he was so turned on by Corey.. I mean she noticed, who else does? Does Zach? Which is why he may be extra assholy to Corey.. Does Corey and we don't know yet? Or will he be blindsided by his like reaction when he does notice? Oh the possibilities.. I can't wait to get there. In the meantime, I don't envy Jason the task of trying to keep it together. Also, I love the growing friendship. It feels very organic to me.. So well done Lit..

What a conundrum.. This makes me sad for Tobyn. Kelkar too, but Tobyn's overwhelming sense of duty to his pack is at a time when he should be free to explore this connection to Kellar freely. Not that he shouldn't be loyal to his pack, I get it. But damn that dreaded malaise. I can't see Kellar leaving. I think he too is going to absorb that obligation Tobyn feels, and try his darnedest to find help and heal with the disease. And seeing Tilly the way he does makes this an even more awkward situation given the feelings that have to be dampened. Those two are indeed between a rock and a hard place. It won't be easy and I'm sure they will get in their own way. I look forward to seeing how they navigate all those feelings. I'm truly invested in seeing them grow as we move foward. The plot becomes a little bit more intriguing every chapter.. Great job Gary!

Oh my.. Interesting tale with conflicting emotions. There's that teeter totter reaction to John's handling of the situation. On the one end Tom is free from Jack and who knows how many others are too, on the other... Personally, I didn't mind that Jack was gone, But... I like the way you crafted this one. Excellent job tim..

A very happy birthday to you Craftingmom!

Congrats on the feature Puppi! That was a really great review Tim.. Like everyone said, Thaw is an amazingly good read, and I absolutely enjoyed it.. Frost continues with all the goodness...